Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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@pepples_joy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

I was wondering why khushi was sharing her views on lotas with nk [where they discussing their morning ablutions?] thank god it meant gotas... eager to know what schemes are filling the fertile minds of arnav and khushi... on the whole, a fast-paced and hilarious update!

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tinsel

@tinsel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

Finally we know how Khushi and NK know each other! Khushi was pure Sanka Devi in this update, and Arnav was jealous, just the way we like them.Wonderful update👍🏼

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melonie

@melonie

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#294

Hi,

Thanks for the PM :)

I love how this story is progressing and all the writers are doing a fab job.

The update was funny and something is brewing in both their mind.

So Arnav is the one who is going to love her for hundred years...LOL...what battle are these two going to play? Waiting to see...

Pls cont soon...

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#295

Lovely update. Can wait for thenxt one

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#296

Awesome update dear...

Now, its ASR vs KKG... Loved the lota and Gota... YOu really made me laugh through your updat...thank you...

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Sharmila

@spsharmila

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#297

Awesome update...loved it 😃

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#298

Brilliant update

Gotawala friendship band

Arnav know its only jalebis that can appease khushi

Awaiting the next update

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hatathbristi

@hatathbristi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#299

Just awesome..the humor, the satire, the anger and hilarious jestures...👏👏
Well done dears..You all rocked IT...

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#300

ps. this comment is for Chapter 7 update:

This. is. beautiful! (yes, i did want to emphasize on that, hence the periods ;)) I loved the transition of romance with one brother to fury with another. With Khushi and Arnav, their scene is loud, with sarcasm and anger, fury with a hint of attraction, then on the other side, we have Akash and Payal. They are so mellow, and soft, with Payal on bed (could it get anymore romantic?) and a hint of anger (jug of water)... it was perfect! the slap was definitely needed ;)

"Kaash uss raat ko hum aap ke baahon main gire naa hotein. Kyunki hum ko bachaate bachaate aap khud itna gir gaye."

Khushi needs to walk out right after this dialogue. Collect Payal and leave the building Khushi...!!! Leave with a bang! ;)

Edited by aycma98 - 12 years ago