TS FF-raksha bandhan:rishta bhai-behen ka(part 15) - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago
a biggg huggg to youuu🤗
thank you so much for executing on my suggestion
wow taavam romance(jhoota😉)but still
n yes reyam possessivenesss,rey jealous!😆😉
vicky calling taani sexy lolzzz🤣
awesome!
do continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
ooo mam i am damm excited to see dis
thanks for PM n do put nxt prt soon n yes do PM me plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey aditi...it was awesum like always...loved it...cnt soon n thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bang on update diui.. Boys and Reyam part was hilarious.. HEHER! oved it to the core.. Jaldi jaldi update karna.. okay? N mujhe pm karte rehna please!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

wwwaah great update 👏

pplzzz update fast mujhy dkhna ahi kis ka plan work karee gaaa plzz update sssooonnn...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey adi!!sory for commenting late...6 n 7th part was awesm...superb!!!6 part ne to emotional kar diya but 7 th was full of masti n fun...jaldi update karo kis ka plan kamyiab hoga??😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

hi guys aa gayi aapki cutie! ok guys dekho me demand poori hone se pehle update kar rahi hoon! so here u go-

PART-8:- MEHNAT KI HUMNE, CREDIT LE GAYA WO!

swayam- every thing is set na guys?

gang- are tu tension mat le everything is set!

a guy comes to tiya and says- taani ye flowers tumhare liye kisine diye hai!

and he goes. it were roses of all colours immediately taani guessed that it is the gang and her bhai.

taani acting as if she doesn't know- are ye kisne bheje hai? par jo bhi hai bohut sweet hai!

riya- haan yaar! dekh har colour ke roses hai!

someone passes by their table and keeps their a basket beautifully wrapped. tiya tries to see ho was that but they already knew it was swayam's plan.

riya- yaar ispe to taani likha hai! ye ho kya raha hai? tujhe koi itne saare gifts kyun bhej raha hai? mmm secret admirer!

taani- ri chup kar! pehle dekne to de!

taani opens it and founds her favourite chocolates.

riya- are T ye to tere favourite chocolates hai mmm kaun hai bata na!

taani- ri pata nahi par jo bhi hai bohot sweet hai! chal na abhi chalte hai!

tiya get up and and just started to move suddenly flower showers on taani and we know who is doing it but she twirls and enjoys it.

the gang smiles thinking that there plan is working but unko kya pata ki aage kya hone wala hai!

suddenly shivam enters- hey taani partner!

tiya turns and smiles as their plan is on.

taani goes and hugs shivam.she brokes the hug

taani- hey romeo kaise ho tum?(winking)

shivam understands and replies- kaisa ho sakta hoon tumhare bina? waise surprise kaisa laga?

taani- oh to ye sab tumne kiya hai mere liye! oh u are so sweet(she again hugs him)

she whispers to him while hugging- me jaanti hoon ke ye bhai ne kiya hai par tum iska credit le lo!(she broke the hug)

shivam- oh ya taani partner tumhare liye to kuch bhi! n hi riya!

riya- hi shivam(she goes n hugs him and whispers) sahi samay par aakar sahi kaam kiya!(breakes the hug)

shivam looks at her and smiles and get lost in her.

taani- to romeo chale mujhe tumse bohot saari baatein karni hai! bye ri!

shivam- ya n bye riya

shitaa move out and after that riya too moves out.

the gang comes out. reyam ka to poocho mat itna jealous rey ki wo to laal padh gaya hai and swayam too was looking red out of possessiveness.

vicky- kya yaar ye cheevam ko bhi abhi aana tha!

nil- haan yaar shirritating!

rey- romeo! taani partner! ye sab chal kya raha hai? aur wo hug! wo bhi itna close n tight!😲😡

nil- are yaar hug hai to close n tight to hoga hi na! kya tu bhi!

swayam- me to iss shivam ka kachumbar bana doonga! are yaar me to wo bhi nahi kar sakta!

rey- kyun? kya hua?(he wanted swayam beat shivam black n blues)

swayam- are yaar abhi wo gussa hai mujhse agar mene aisa kuch kiya to mujhe bhi pata nahi ki taani mere saath kya karegi! par wo horrible hoga!(he shuddered at that thought)

rey- are yaar!

aashi- wo sab chodiye hamara plan to waste types ho gaya na!

vicky- are haan yaar! SAARI MEHNAT KI HUMNE, AUR CREDIT LE GAYA WO SHIRITATING!(he bangs on the table)

rey- mera to man kar raha hai use jungle mein monkeys ke saath chod kar aa jaaun wahi sahi hai wo!

nil- give me the beat guys!

shivam ne kiya hamara plan flop,

rey karega use jungle mein drop!

jungle mein to rehte hai monkey

wahaan kya karega ye donkey?

dil jeet liya hai usne taani ka,

koi kuch karo iss shiritating ka!

swayam- ek baar taani ko mana loon, phir is so called romeo ko sat sat ke maarunga!

sharon- aur me high heels se!

nil- rey tu kaise maarega?

rey- laaton se! ok now plan B ki taiyaari karo!

here shitaa are sitting on the stage where announcement held(the place where shivam asked taani to have lunch with him)

shivam- taani me kar to raha hoon par tera possessive bhai mujhe chodega nahi! and wo tera rey! wo pata nahi kya karega! are mujhe kyun marwa rahi hai abhi tak to mene riya ko propose bhi nahi kiya! abhi to hamari first kiss bhi nahi hui hai! uske baad hamari first date! hamari engagement aur phir shaadi, phir first night n then bacche...

taani- hold on! hold on! pehle tu propose to kar phir in sabki planing karna! aur tu propose to sau saal baad karega! romeo kahinka!

shivam- taani partner!😡

taani- sorry sorry! but seriously thanks a lot romeo agar tu nahi hota to me kya karti! aur wo mere rey nahi hai wo to mujhse pyaar nahi karte aur jo kuch bhi hua uss din...(shivam cut her)

shivam- ek minute! uss din tum logon ke beech! matlab? kya hua tha uss din?

she told him everything about rasiya sequence and their MU after that.

shivam- what! itna sab ho gaya aur mujhe pata hi nahi! n OH MY GOD usne tumhe... k.. ki... kis.. kiss kiya! mmm man me to laddoo phoot rahe honge!

taani - mene tumse kaha na hamare MU ke baare me! to phir!

shivam- i don't know about it! i just know that he is in love with u!

taani- kaash tumhari baat sachi hoti! well wo sab chodo hame hamare plan par kaam karna hai!

shivam in his mind- i promise taani ki me tumhe tumhara pyaar diakar rahoonga! and the way is jealousy(smirks) reyaansh singhania is baar to tumhe haar man ni padegi aur confess karna hi padega!

shivam to all readers of this ss- hi guys! me itna bhi boora nahi hoon! ab dekhna me taayam aur taarey ko ek karke hi rahoonga n that's a promise!(oh hello! the promise is by me)

taani- oye romeo! kahan kho gaya? firse riya dreamland mein!

shivam- nahi

taani- to kahaan?

shivam- chod na tu nahi samjhegi!

taani- romeo tu kitna ajeeb hai aur log mujhe weird kehte hain!

shivam- haan haan! whatever!

here gang in rehearsal hall.

reyam are still red. vicky and nil notice it.

nil- yaar swayam ka red face samajh me aata hai as he is her brother but rey tu kyun itna laal ho raha hai?

rey- wo...wo...wo taani meri boss hai... and wo hamare team a member bhi hai so thoda gussa aa gaya.

swayam- oh god taani ke bina kuch acchanahi lag raha hai!

sharon- me hoon na swayam!(all look at her shocked)

she realizes what she had said- i mean hum sab hai na guys!

swayam understands the meaning and smiles

swayam through his eyes- thank u sharon mera saath dene ke liye!

sharon replies through her eyes- aakhirkar tumhari girlfriend hoon!

sharon blushes and swayam smiles beech mein rey smile kar raha hai

aashi- are kuch socho guys warna taani ko chakkar types aa jaayega aur wo kahin gir types gayi to!

swayam- uff aashi kitni baar kahu shubh-shubh bola karo na please! kisiko samajh me kyun nahi aata? accha theek hai! aashi plz shubh types bola karo warna mujhe gussa types aa jaayega!

hey guys how was it? i know mene likha hai to it have to be awesome😆 chalo ek to pehle demand se pehle update kar rahi hoon upar se kal mera test hai padhne ke bajaye me update kar rahi hoon isliye bade wale comments n next demand pg-40😉😆,ok!

Edited by adi.cutiepie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey m first...loved this update...shivam ne cridet le liya taani k khene par LOL..and swyam ka surprise mast tha n nil ka rap awesm😆 bechare reeyam gusse se laal hogaye hai😆update soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey i just loved the update yaar!
and taavam hug oh wow its so cute!
reyam jealous -cherry on the cake!
thanx 4 updating so soon!😃
really ab thode aur aise hi reyam ko jealous karne waale updates kiya karo maja aata hai😆
loved your update to the core
n ya iss ss mei bhalle hi shivam ke liye riya hai par lavin is mine ok!!!!!!!😛😉(MY AND ONLY MY LAVIN)
do continue soon!!!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update 👏
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Loved nil's rap, swayam's possesiveness and Rey jealous 😉
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Taani ke kehna par Shivam took credit of whole plan ,so D3 gang's plan floped 😃
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Update soon

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