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reshmimohan

@reshmimohan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Oh! This is beautiful.😊

Loved every word...

Every emotion u have captured till now...

Loved the way he tried to lure her to eat as well as talk...😛

Simply awesome...👏

Waiting for the update...

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claireDD

@claireDD

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

read 3 chapters in a breath...
i can't begin to tell you how wonderful you are in this job..
you don't have the slightest idea as to what you do to me with this ss..
every single update is so intense that i lose my way in a whirlpool of emotions..
you are a prodigy sweetheart...
continue soon...im waiting with bated breath...

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Awesome update, cant believe poor khushi has cut her hair. Loved the conversation arnav had with khushi, but its sad she still is not responding. But it does show that khushi cares because she ate food knowing arnav was not eating and was going to faint. So the journal has made her react, i wonder what she will say, thanks for the PM xxx

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Juhi, I am sorry haven't been able to comment yet. Yet to read chap 3 & 4. But this story is too poignant and I need time. Can't read it on the go like other FFs. Hope you would understand.

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Sarita Kaur

@kaur94

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Omg poor Khushi she cut her hair she's trying to look not beautiful
amazing how Khushi never left arnav's eyes and reluctantly ate otherwise Arnav wouldn't have either
and she finally spoke

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cupcake1234

@cupcake1234

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Chapter 3:

Those police men are disgusting!How could they speak so low in a situation like that ,putting the blame across to the victim just because she happens to be a pretty lady!They are no better than Shyam himself and the sad thing is incidents like these are very much real in the society !

I just hope Kushi hasn't harmed herself.

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Finally some light at the end of the tunnel...I am so excited with this progress, some control seems robe back...the actual perpetrator seems to be roaming free and the victim and all her loved ones are suffering through hell..I guess this happens in real life too, most of often than not...but I am hoping your story will be a story of hope...no pressure though😳

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

khushi chopping off her tresses was horrendous! those lumpen policemen deserve everything they're likely to get [so sad that this was possible only due to arnav's personal equation with the commissioner; usually such comments would have been ignored by the higher ups... haven't we all been getting some 'gems' from our leaders and others?] what's worse is that they don't realise how wrong their moral compass / mindset is... they seem to be ruing the fact that she overheard their crass comment leading her to react the way she did... I am sure they'll put it down to hysteria!

finally arnav has begun to act and that, too, sensibly... he seems to have a concrete plan of action and is willing to listen to others... the way he refused to eat as long as khushi didn't touch her meals was inspired as he realises that there's still a connection between them given that the silent khushi hadn't taken her eyes off him during that day... the fact that she still allowed him to touch her despite his current anger and earlier actions means something: does she still trust him despite her heartbreak and sense of betrayal?

good of arnav to finally be honest with himself and her, too... that was a timely confession, even if he was interrupted before he could admit to loving her... khushi's 'why' was heart-rending... was it in continuation to arnav's earlier "Do you know why I have done all those things, Khushi?" or was it with regard to the reasons for their marriage orwhy he hadn't trusted her enough? eager for the next part! reading arnav's journal must have given her an inkling of what is in his heart... doesn't mean she should forgive him any time soon!

Edited by Maddy1270 - 12 years ago

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#249

just one word to describe the entire chapter... ie chapter 4... beautiful.. hw they understand each other.. hw they do thg sfr each other.. with out words...

simply beautiful.. !!!

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gurukhush

@gurukhush

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#250

Brilliant indeed!!..😊😊 No other way to describe your potrayal of Khushi and Arnav - his earlier insensibilities and subsequently, his written confessions in the journal/diary.Their interaction through his whispered monolouge and her silence- you could be assisting the CV team for IPKKND Season-II, IF THERE IS ONE😛😉 Good one this... we await your quick updates and a lot of them😳

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