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Posted: 13 years ago


This was my favourite line in the update...

'But first, I have to make sure she understands that none of this is her fault'


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Posted: 13 years ago
It always starts with the hair, the one thing that most women associate with their own sense of beauty.

Heart breaking, but you deserve a round of applause for writing with so much sensitivity and maturity. I feel like I'm peeking into the distressed life of someone who had been abused.

Lovely update, cant wait to read more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Every word expresses the immense pain and helplessness, what you are writing is brilliant and heart breaking. It is all so realistic and you have brought to life Khushi's anguish and Arnav's regret.
Your doing an awesome job with this.
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Posted: 13 years ago
EXPEL US ...I HAVE NO WORDS ENOUGH TO SAY WHAT I FEEL

ABOUT YOUR STORY...WITH EVERY NEW UPDATE I GO BACK

TO READ THE PREVIOUS CHAPTERS TO KEEP THE RHYTHM

I JUST WANT TO GO ON N ON READING IT AGAIN N AGAIN

EVERY SENTENCE IS CONSTRUCTED LIKE TAJ MAHAL

THE INTRICATE FINESSE OF THE ESSENCE OF YOUR STORY

IS SIMPLY MIND BLOWING

NEVER HAVE I READ AND LIVED A SCENE AS BEAUTIFUL AS BOTH

OF THEM EATING TOGETHER WITH SO MUCH DISTANCE YET

SO MUCH INTIMACY

THE CARE THEY SHARE THE LOVE THAT IS ENGRAVED IN THEIR

HEARTS IS JUST FINE CRAFTSMANSHIP TO ITS UTMOST

HOW BROKEN HEARTED SHE MUST BE N HOW MUCH SHE

MUST HAVE HATED HERSELF FOR BEING THE OBJECT OF LUST

FOR A MARRIED MAN ..THE HUSBAND OF HER BEAU'S SISTER

THE BROTHER=IN-LAW OF HER BELOVED THAT SHE WAS

DESTROYING HER BEING

THE GAZE THAT THEY SHARED

SHE WAS NOT QUESTIONING

SHE WAS NOT ACCUSING

SHE WAS NOT BLAMING

SHE WAS JUST GUILTY OF THE FACT THAT BECAUSE OF

HER THE ROTTEN RAT DESTROYED SO MANY LIVES

EXPEL US ...I AM SO SO SO WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART

IT IS AN UNUSUAL STORY

THE POWER OF YOUR WORDS STAY

YOURS IS ONE NO YOURS IS ''THE BEST '' STORY THAT I HAVE

READ HERE

THERE IS QUALITY IN YOUR DESCRIPTION

THERE IS DEPTH IN YOUR IMAGINATION

I AM STUMPED ...FLOORED ...BOWLED OVER

AND TRUST ME I THOUGHT IT WAS JUST ANOTHER BLAH BLAH

STORY BUT ONCE I STARTED IT HIT ME LIKE A BRICK


I AM GOING TO READ IT FROM THE PROLOGUE ONCE AGAIN IN

CASE I MISSED OUT ON ANYTHING


THANKS

KEEP ME ALERT





KKKA


Edited by KKKA - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww thats so sweet
Love how uve expressed the feelings of all characters
Simply awesome
Love the strength in both anjali n khushi :)
Thx for the pm
Luk forward to readin mre xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh poor thing, she wants to remove all signs of things that she thinks makes her attractive as she thinks this is her fault...that is such a terrible feeling for her...
so sensitively and beautifully written, each word is so perfect, every emotion and thought !


I loved it and really enjoyed reading it...cannot wait for him to answer her question!
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww.. she read is journal?
my god 😲
this is gonna be amazing!
update sooner 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!
The last update, was beautiful, bought tears to my eyes! :'(
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Posted: 13 years ago
I've always said this, despite her childish and sometimes irritating antics, Khushi is an amazing woman. She's mature, kind-hearted inspite of all the cruel things she's seen and she's forgiving and loving. Thank you for bringing all those things out here. I hope she gives him a little bit of a hard time though, just like NK did. And I'm so glad he talked. Good job ASR :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow expell...
i have alwayz read ur stories and found dem quite light-hearted😲
but i didn't know u could write lyk dis...wonderful, splendid..grt😃
its intensity...the language was amazin...keep it up,girl

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