EXPEL US ...I HAVE NO WORDS ENOUGH TO SAY WHAT I FEEL
ABOUT YOUR STORY...WITH EVERY NEW UPDATE I GO BACK
TO READ THE PREVIOUS CHAPTERS TO KEEP THE RHYTHM
I JUST WANT TO GO ON N ON READING IT AGAIN N AGAIN
EVERY SENTENCE IS CONSTRUCTED LIKE TAJ MAHAL
THE INTRICATE FINESSE OF THE ESSENCE OF YOUR STORY
IS SIMPLY MIND BLOWING
NEVER HAVE I READ AND LIVED A SCENE AS BEAUTIFUL AS BOTH
OF THEM EATING TOGETHER WITH SO MUCH DISTANCE YET
SO MUCH INTIMACY
THE CARE THEY SHARE THE LOVE THAT IS ENGRAVED IN THEIR
HEARTS IS JUST FINE CRAFTSMANSHIP TO ITS UTMOST
HOW BROKEN HEARTED SHE MUST BE N HOW MUCH SHE
MUST HAVE HATED HERSELF FOR BEING THE OBJECT OF LUST
FOR A MARRIED MAN ..THE HUSBAND OF HER BEAU'S SISTER
THE BROTHER=IN-LAW OF HER BELOVED THAT SHE WAS
DESTROYING HER BEING
THE GAZE THAT THEY SHARED
SHE WAS NOT QUESTIONING
SHE WAS NOT ACCUSING
SHE WAS NOT BLAMING
SHE WAS JUST GUILTY OF THE FACT THAT BECAUSE OF
HER THE ROTTEN RAT DESTROYED SO MANY LIVES
EXPEL US ...I AM SO SO SO WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART
IT IS AN UNUSUAL STORY
THE POWER OF YOUR WORDS STAY
YOURS IS ONE NO YOURS IS ''THE BEST '' STORY THAT I HAVE
READ HERE
THERE IS QUALITY IN YOUR DESCRIPTION
THERE IS DEPTH IN YOUR IMAGINATION
I AM STUMPED ...FLOORED ...BOWLED OVER
AND TRUST ME I THOUGHT IT WAS JUST ANOTHER BLAH BLAH
STORY BUT ONCE I STARTED IT HIT ME LIKE A BRICK
I AM GOING TO READ IT FROM THE PROLOGUE ONCE AGAIN IN
CASE I MISSED OUT ON ANYTHING
THANKS
KEEP ME ALERT
KKKA
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