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Posted: 12 years ago
though he did a grave thing arnav's greif for not being with his love is unparalleled him being ashamed doesn't correct the wrong and i know you will make him pay too...i guess khushi is searching for him...
forcing oneself on a woman is an act of cruelty i wish there be a magic spell that men get castrated when he even gets the idea to do so...
you are writing in such a beautiful heart wrenching style that i cant help to appreciate enough...
i hope this new year may women be stronger and men well behaved...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Have to laud your effort for writing different.

Each of the updates of this SS till now has easily convinced me that
this is Arnav Sign Raizada writing a diary.

In this update,disliked Shyam as usual.And bravo to NK for coming
handy in the crisis.Hope Khushi recovers from the horrible trauma.

Loved the update,as usual.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very interesting ...waiting for next..
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg she fought back wiz a broken bangle omg dis is so heart breaking
cnt even imagyn da pain felt by such victims
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Posted: 12 years ago
This story is awesome, so full of emotions. Its heartbreaking to see what poor khushi has had to go through, but reading arnavs diary entrys made me cry they are so sad and filled with so much guilt and regret. I hope arnav faces khushi soon, coz that might bring her out of the silent mode. I must say u are a outstanding writer and u have beautifully penned down the story and emotions are so brilliant. Eager to read more, please update soon xxx
Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow I read both chapters

Emotional roller coaster for sure

Ugh Shyam, sicko calling Arnav. My heart goes out to Khushi, I can't imagine a husband seeing someone assaulting their wife
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous!
Omg how dare is he called Arnav!
Arnav's inner turmoil, his guilt feel, his frustration is killing him gradually.
Becoz of his arrogance and misunderstanding the love of his life is suffering. He broke the innocent, fragile girl into pieces.Now every moment of his life will haunt him, it's haunting Khushi as well. Khushi is in utter shock to speak. Nothing in this world can make her happy and smile again.
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Posted: 12 years ago

just amazing... this part is just as fabulously written...
truly commendable...
waiting to read the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG! This is as difficult for me to read as it is difficult for you to write! But Arnav deserves all the horrible things you can think of! Because, yes, like you said, he is as much to blame in this as that slime, Shyam! But really, I'd like to see how he redeems himself here.
He's already shown what a disgusting (boy) friend (to be) he is by not trusting her and asking her when he should have. Now he is showing what a coward he is by not facing her after she came out of her drugged sleep. What's next? He really should go and face her and he should be the one to look after her to bring her out of this horrible state! That way, at least, every time he looks at her, he will be reminded of his vile behavior (although I know he is writing that in his diary.)
And it was NK who did everything. So where the hell is his shatir dimaag? Or doesn't he have one here?
And now, Shyam has phoned. Is he going to do anything? Or will it be NK who will save the day again! I dread to think what would have happened had it not been for NK's quick thinking!
Really, Arnav is so full of himself, that he can't even think straight!
He needs to take a long hard look at himself (which he already has started to) and realize his actions have far reaching consequences that affect others besides himself!
Can't wait to find out what he's going to do next. Will he go to her? And ask for her forgiveness? Or does he think it's beneath him? That he is such a "big" man!
Thanks for the PM. Waiting anxiously for the next update. (And yes! I'm mad as hell with Arnav right now!!)
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Posted: 12 years ago
The story is sad and realistic. My Respect for being able to write this story with so much feeling in it.
Yesterday I passed a poster of the movie the victim last watched... Cant describe the sadness and hatred i feel!!!
May she rest in peace...

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