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fraser

@fraser

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

superb parts
sry yar m late
bt m b\w my office nd xams so
fabulous parts
self realisation is big thing ven u hurt smone to the core who is innocent nd pure so slf haterd is increase

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panck

@panck

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Thanks for the PM

It is truly Arnav's seven circles of hell..

Wonder how he will cross them

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Uthra

@Viji79

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

I agree with you. This is not an easy story to write. The pain, anguish, guilt, emptiness, are very difficult to write, but you have written so amazingly. The story moves me to such a state of grief, given the circumstances and incidents that have driven you to write this in first place. I have a lump in my throat, as I write this and a wetness in my eyes, which refuses to dry, thinking about the soul that suffered and left an everlasting imprint in the lives of every person born as a woman, a mother, a father, a sibling, a friend, a fellow human being and a desire to see the culprits given a punishment that would make another monster to commit such a heinous crime again.

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reshmimohan

@reshmimohan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

😊 Wow! Simply stunning.

Loved ur technique of writing...

It's so intense and packed with emotion...

I loved it.

Update soon...😛

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vrinda16

@vrinda16

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

I'm really loving the way u r writing this SS...Poor Khushi...she has turned numb & when a person like her who brings about life, spirit & happiness in everyone's life as she comes along, becomes so, it is really heartbreaking...
The part where u described her weapon of defence being the broken bangle made me want to cry...it touched me...I actually feel that it is Arnav who can get a response from her

And the nerve of that sick man to call Arnav after what he did...he has to be caught soon

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boreddamsel

@boreddamsel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Juhi.. I can't tell you how good this story is..

I can feel the pain.. you are such an excellent writer.. kudos 👏

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

I don't feel any sympathy for Arnav. None at all. Not even when he says that his heart beats only for her. Not when he says nobody can hate him more than he does himself and definitely not when he says he does not deserve to breathe the same air as hers...
To top all the other atrocities, he believed he had a choice to turn and run from her when she woke up instead of standing and facing her..I cannot feel sympathy for a coward how much ever self-loathing he is going through...whatever it is he is still thinking only about himself, his hatred directed at himself, his heart-break...it is all him..

Extremely well written update...

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@debby_11

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Arnav is in deep pain...but he deserves it...It will take khushi a long time to recover...he has to understand her now and give her some space...he now has to give her chance to get angry...He needs to think about her first and then himself...

A very well-written part...Superb one :)

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

This is an intense story... Reading his journal entries about khushi are heartwrenching... God i hope she gets better!

hmmm NK is the new strength for the family.. I winder if they is of some significance!!