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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh God! What has Khushi become?
ASR is feeling sorry now and boiling in regret. If only he had not gone out!


I can't even read about the aftermath trauma that victim goes through 😭
How will the victim come out of that shock?
How strongly that memories affect them.
How would their family members see that blank eyes?

Heart wrenching!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I thought I'd wait it out; I tend to have reservations when it comes to reading journal/diary writing and I can't really do serious when it comes to IPK, but I'll try here...

Ch. 1:
Dammit, I hate it when my ajeeb khayal come (partially) true, re: Shyam...😕

*shudders* Unwanted touching and manhandling, in general...😕 (And yet for some strange reason, my mind is telling me it could've turned out worse. 😳)

Ch. 2:
Dammit, NK ko itna awesome kyun banaya hai??

Oh no. The poolside is forever ruined. (Ah crap. So much for not being faltu. *facepalm*)

ExP, I think you're getting more into your groove here; I liked this update the most. 😊

Edited by nonasi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey!
As for Arnav's Di, I really hope she sees Shyam the dick for what he truely is and doesn't brush this under the carpet in any way shape or form. She's witnessed it infront of her own eyes and they DO NOT lie.
Arnav describing himself as a fool is putting it pretty lightly to be honest. He should have asked her. Or maybe hired a private detective in order to find out the truth about Shyam's reality. This would've been an easy thing to carry out by Arnav, but nooo! He was blinded by this so called betrayal. If he truely knew ad understood her, he's atleast give her the chance to explain herself about what happened on the terrace. If he trusted her, he'd give her the benefit of the doubt. If this feeling he has been experiencing for a pretty lengthy period of time as of now was love, he'd know that Khushi isn't capable of doing something as atrocious as having an affair. She's someone who has values, morals and principles and doesn't waver from them. She wouldn't do anything to upset her family at any cost. She wouldn't do anything to disgrace her family's name and drag it through the mud. And the man himself thinks he is intelligent. Well he is seriously mistaken. I'm beginning to think whether he actually owns a well known, pretty well off company with his so-called-brains. Or maybe its s case of thinking with every part of his anatomy, EXCEPT for the heart.
I'm glad that throughout this horrific and traumatic incident, NK was the one who had his thinking cap on. Fast thinking and even faster actions were taken in order to try and get Khushi to safety as soon as possible. I really do appreciate him, his characters and his attributes as a person.
The audacity Shyam the f**king bas***d and lecherous filth has by calling Arnav is bloody infuriating!!! 😡😡😡 He's not at all repenting for the sins he has committed. f**k!
Well written 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I really dont know what to say !
Cause, as a reader, this a genre that really touches me the most, call me a feminist but such topics really do bring me to the verge of tears !
And Juhi, thank you for wriitng this one !

I cant ever tell you what a wonderful writer you are, cause my words would never match up to that, but you must know this that this one is a wonderful piece ! Arnav . though I love him, he should atone for his sins as he calls it...

And please, do not get Shyam back pity please ??
Also, I have a feeling, that Khushi might start responding if Arnav talks to her, though I dont know why... And I simple love NK ! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love that you've written about ASR wondering about NK's feelings for Khushi. So are we going to see more of NK in the story?
ASR's feelings, just as I hoped to see in the series when he finally found out the truth..you wrote that beautifully.
Oh and yeah I did wonder how Shyam managed to escape the last update 😛
Great chapter juhi :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmm arnav always about himself and his feelings so pathetic having to face such a deed is a difficult thing need cut shyam into pieces and then he shouuld have gone to see khushi hope she gets her justice both arnav and shyam punished and her family to leave her in such place where the demons lived
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Posted: 12 years ago
The red bangle was really a good strike...
Kushi, she is struggling in that hell.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Intresting , very well written plz continue , thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very... Poignant, I guess that's the word I was looking for... Amazing writing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
NK is the only sensible man in the house.
It's a relief Anjali and her baby is safe.
Poor Kushi! She seems too numb to respond...Hope She recovers soon!
Oh the nerve of that sick man to ring Arnav after everything he had done! Hope he get caught soon.

You have taken a risk at writing this story because it deals with a dark, sensitive topic and on top of that it's written is the form of one person's point view but let me tell you one thing, you have done an excellent job so far and I'm sure the next chapters will be awesome as well !!

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