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Originally posted by: Salwa_Mehrin

Okay i read it but i cant give a lamba wala comment.😳 Armaan's past 😕 i loved reading his past and his attachment to his father. He leaves alone in a big housee. I LOOVEE THISS. Simran i remembered DDLJ 😆 okay i lovve how the relationship is progressing between AR. Thank god there is no typical dupatta flying and all mushy mushy romancee. I mean its not like i dnt like them but in your story its the realityy. I LOVE ABHI AND ARMAAN 🤣🤣 .

(Idiotic comment tha kaam chala lena. I have chemistry tomorrow and blahh i feel like jumping from a cliff -_-)

Originally posted by: doublep

Why did you have to update?? I am loaded with assignments but I had to read knowing that you posted a chapter and the comment is/ has been always a natural repercussion.

Did you fast forward the story by nine months because last time I checked Armaan had just broken up with Brittany. The whole reminiscing the good old times had me thinking that Armaan still held something for her but the flashback with Simran showed he's just bad with break ups. Our hero is a sensitive guy now isn't he?

The chapter was all about Armaan and you brought out the monotony in his life in a perfectly understated way. Yes he's pretty normal (why do you and I live such a robotic life?) and it's sad because of the unfairness of it all. He did not have to grow up, well he did but not in those circumstances. But Riddhima will always be the protagonist for me because I love her, man and Armaan- Nikki- Abhi do not mean what Riddhima- Rahul- Muskaan or Riddima- Ishaan mean to me , maybe because I have an affinity to crisis.

Where did you get 'you + hand' and 'unicycle' stuffs from? the former was gross and the latter had me in cracks. Abhi does crack sad jokes. Tch

And this is random but thank you for putting in so much effort in doing whatever you do and here I'm not talking about writing chapters but the whole presentation of it. I recently noticed that you italicise words to emphasize certain words or for flashbacks/text msgs. Not a biggie but does take some effort and it pays off too because they add more meaning and clarity to your prose. So, thank you Aanya.

P.s. I love your avi , I adore her.

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh

you should actually get this thing published

Originally posted by: Salwa_Mehrin

You know what you should start watching QH too. Its really nice with suspense and intense scenes. And I sware when you will see KSG in QH u will not realise he played Armaan. Its without typical mushy romance and has started with cute fights and yaa thoda thoda friendship lol.Its worth watching, seriously:)

Originally posted by: Aanya.

I knowww. So many people have told me to watch it but I just don't want to. I watched like two episodes of it and it didn't interest me...maybe I'll watch it someday but not now.

Plus I have boards in a week (holy shit) and then I already have like ten shows I want to watch over the summer so no time for QH 😆

Originally posted by: Aanya.

Pssh I'd say I'm sorry but I'm not, ha.

No no no! Armaan-Brittany lasted for 9 months. He broke up with her last week only. Also no. He doesn't have any feelings for her but they were just in a relationship so its more like he misses the idea of being in a relationship, of having that person, rather than the person themself. I hope that made sense. Yep he's sensitive. See, Riddhima is emotionally stunted okay? At least when it comes to romance so I figured I might as well make Armaan sensitive and emotional although there's going to be a change in that in chapter 9 ;)

I'm partial to Riddhima-Rahul-Muskaan and Ishaan too <3 Dude I'm like a sucker for people with a past. Or something. I have a thing for broken people, which, okay, wasn't the best way to phrase that sentence but you get the drift.

Haha I DON'T EVEN KNOW sorry. Inspired by real life I guess. My friends and I are foul mouthed and crass I swear to god we've cracked more penis/masturbation/sex jokes than what's normal. And some of our jokes are bloody hilarious ( at least to us. Who gives a shit about anyone else anyway) and some are completely shitty but they're funny in that moment. So yeah. I'm a dirty minded person. NO, SERIOUSLY.

But we all have that one (or more, if you're me) friend who makes everything a sex joke and has the emotional maturity of a five year old (mostly).

You're welcome! Thanks for noticing meri jaan ;) Thing is, I write in a certain tone. I mean if there was an audio version of this FF it'd read in a certain way, a certain tone, if you know what I mean. So I italicize words and cross my fingers that people read it in the tone its meant to be read.

I adore her too <3 Can't wait for Saraswatichandra tomorrow :)