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Originally posted by: Aanya.

COMMENT :P

I'll update if I finish studying on time...or maybe I'll do it tomorrow idk :P

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

LOL!! OMG..I Haven't??!! All this time I thought I'd already commented!! LMAO!!!😆

Originally posted by: Accio_kajen

Yaaay you are updating 🥳

EDITED:)

I totally loved the update!And i don't about others,but I feel this is the best part you have written so far.The way you showed Armaan's frustration on not having a girlfriend,his past to his friendship with Abhi-Nikki was just perfect.In short the whole part was PERFECT👏

Okay God knows why I keep on assuming Brittany to be an evil bimbo!Love is... 's Brit is stuck in my mind.

I am little confused about the relationship that Armaan and Brittany share-He was the one who broke up with her and because he had feelings for Riddhima,right?But he looks so attached to her just like Riddhima is to Ishaan!I am guessing he was in that relationship for so long that he feels lost. It usually happens when you are in a picture-perfect relationship,everything feels right but there's something missing.And when you break out of it,you feel what if? that was the right thing.

I hope I didn't confuse you!😆

Okay till now we were saying ki Riddhima is awesome!But I like this Armaan very much too.Love is.. ka Armaan was also okay but I like this Armaan more!He's sensitive,mature and the normal outgoing guy.

"And isn't that a depressing thought." he murmurs to himself, his voice loud in the house.

I really like this part!He feels so alone in the big house,he wants to have a family just like his parents.Maybe this is why he misses Brittany so much.He longs for someone.Armaan's parents are not divorced this time,they are great parents,according to him.I loved how you showed Armaan and his father's relationship.The way you feel when you loose a loved one,the anger you feel because it is coz of a drunk driver.The way he remembered all his memories with his parents,the TALK with his father,his dog dying;everything flashing before his eyes because he was loosing his father.Every emotion described beautifully😃

Break-ups are never easy but girls have a sure-shot therapy for it!A big tub of ice-cream and a romantic movie for her cheesy hearts!But boys usually don't go through the after-breakup sadness unless they are in a serious relationship.Otherwise,they move on quite fast.

The Abhi-Nikki part also was awesome.The way Abhi-Nikki cheered him,making him realize that he's not alone.

Now coming to the Armaan-Riddhima part.The way they bumped into each other and exchanged pleasantries made me realize something.

This is a story of a normal guy and girl meeting and falling in love.They both have had their share of relationships,in which they were quite attached.The way they usually show in soaps,you don't bump into a person everyday!If you like someone,life doesn't keep throwing that person in front of your eyes.Armaan-Riddhima keep meeting like normal people,exchange talks and go their own way.This is what really happens...

They are not even friends yet.He has his past,she has one.You are not hurrying with their relationship by making them bump every now and then,making them think about each other every day. And this is a different way of showing of a simple love-story:)

This is my POV of your story but tell me if you are writing from another perspective.

Anyways enough of my bak-bak!I really really really LOVED this part!Keep writing and I'll wait for your update after the boards!All the best😉

PS- I really like how you always reply to our comments!I always feel bad when you give a big comment and some writers don't reply.I know some of them are busy but my mind keeps reminding me that I asked a question or gave them a big comment:)

It is okay if it they don't reply sometimes but everytime?😕