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OMG! Firstly thanks for the PMs only just got round to reading.
Okay so the first version was bloody amazing... But this! Holy crap. . Is effing incredible!!
Your style of writing has changed soo much.. (not that it wasn't good before) but now you write sooo daamnn beautifully and I'm shocked that you're 17.. Dude I'm 18 and I could never write like that.
You have some serious talent. 2yrs ago you started this and you must have been 15.. I must say at 15 you wrote amazingly!
Okay so basically I am in complete aawwee of your talent and this story, I can tell that it will be a very special and beautiful story. Can not wait for the next chapter.
Good luck with the 12th grade I understand it must be very difficult with shit loads of worrk.. Managing a fanfic at the same time.. Kudos my freind!

Awesome update :] thanks for the pm

Hey Aanya! :D This was a really nice update. Well to be honest when you said you were re-write Love is... I didn't find the idea so appealing, because the story had proceeded so much and I loved it but now, Ricochet is coming out so well, you were right this one is better :D Not that Love is... wasn't. This chapter was really nice and well written, the way you described the painting and the last part were really nice and enjoy those message chats a lot :P So keep up the great work :D Thank you for the pm and continue soon :)

pshht you gonna kick me for this for sure! >> But i don't feel like editing that reserve :P But will pakka edit it before your next update lol 😆

So few comments; you guys suck :P

Awesome! Love the slow folding and more scoop on Ishaan :) Their little part was my fav in this chapter!

Hahah!! Kameeni!! Anything Blue is ALWAYS a reference to Armaan!! Only this time when you were talking about the sky being painted it was Ishaan..!! Oh well..I think a sunrise is more like Armaan anyways..a fresh new day..a fresh new start..

Now Ishaan!! Is he gay or bi?? Poor Riddhima!! It must suck to fall in love with a gay person..!! YIKESS! Bechari.. Nevertheless..I kept laughing within myself.. but it really must suck..especially if you fall hard..

The painting thing...WOW!! You made ME wanna paint now..lol! Though i can't..I've got exams to study for..then W*F am I doing on IF?? Don't ask..!! massive story..after a 24hour journey..I'm knackered..!

You've written this all sooo welll..!! Its making me want to rewrite LOOC and name it something and completely redefine the whole story.. partly because it holds such rubbish memories too..lollxx!!! Anyways..I'll think about that later..

OHH!! Catch my breath is an AWESOME song..I love it..and Kelly Clarkson soo much!! She's one of those with a real talent at singing coz you can hear it in her performances..and plus she doesn't use auto tune..which singer do you come across these days who doesn't?? Anyways..hope this counts as a semi comment..I can't give enough time for a long one..:S

Sooorryy!!

But I love you and your writing all the same..:D