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Ya nice part.. It is something different from actual D3 track.. Liked it.. Looking forward for the next update.. and thanx for PM..
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it was nice to read other way how things could have been done...
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Hi people thank you so much for the amazing response in just 18 hours I guess some 43 people have read this story which is really nice thing for me. Special mention to the two most important people who have actually made this possible, the two is my dear friends Tanuka and Deepika. Guys I know you both are angry on me for not sharing that I have written something and I am about to post that. But trust me I have done this to know without any pms or anything how many people come to read this because I have this mental block that people don't want to read my work which is partly broken by the response I have got for this one. I really adore both of you guys and I am really glad that you both thought that this OS deserved to reach your friends and you made pm's instantly and asked your friends to read the same that is really a big deal for me. Thank you so much for doing that I love you both and this thing though I didn't want any pm's to be sent out but you both were more than confidant about sending the pm's so I fully respect that and thanks again. And for all those who have read I will reply to each and every comment that I have received soon and for the time being thank you very much for reading the OS and your presence speaks a volume for me. So here goes the 2nd and final part of the OS. It is a bit too long so I hope you all don't get irritated with that... I tried to cut it in third part but was not able to cut so I am pasting everything in this part. So this ends this OS officially. I will soon reply all your comments.

Hidden Feelings – Part 2

Next day rose as usual Rey got up and prayed to God first that whatever he is planning to goes according to his plans and everything become normal as it was previously. He got out of the bed and went to get fresh up.

On the other scene Sharon got up from the bed and got out of the bed fast and started to warm up as usual. After warming up she stood by window and saw the sunrise. She thought that it was the big day for her today as they will start practising for the footloose with brand new team and she has the responsibility to lead the team and being the CS she had to check the arrangements for the footloose event team as she was the college representative there and besides that she alone had to do that as she did not have any assistant now. So she was running her mind in planning how she will manage everything together.

But then thought came to her mind that Rey is there her best friend is the GS and will be the representing authority there. He will surely help her in everything, she trusts him more than anyone now.

Here Swayam who had hardly slept in the night was getting ready to leave for college. He also was thinking the same that from today the team will start rehearsing as a whole new unit for footloose finale. He and Rey had always tried and wanted that two teams become one represent the college jointly and now that was finally happening but he was no longer part of the team. He really missed dancing and being with his friends. He still misses all the lame jokes that Vicky used to crack, those crap raps of Nilesh usually they didn't make any sense but will surely provide a moment or two to smile and whole gang enjoyed that, he definitely missed bharat who used to tease him with Sharon's name and weird things that swayam used to do remembering Sharon, he missed Amar as he was the only one who stood by swayam in anything that swayam did, he always treated swayam like brother because somewhere he felt that swayam was the first one who accepted him as friend knowing his limitations so he was most close to swayam. He missed the group rehearsals where all of them used to have fun, how neha used to do the western steps all wrong and how Vishakha used to be tomboyish in every dance form and then bharat who ended up throwing his legs around in anything they started and finally Amar poor guy always used to get confuse with everything that was going on. He missed everything.

But more than everything he missed Kriya the most, Kriya was the one who would have believed in spite of thousand proofs that said he was wrong. Kriya needed swayam to understand and the same way Swayam needed a conversation with Kriya whenever he got low. Because Kriya never wanted an explanation to anything she would by herself understand what swayam needed. He missed his best friend at a great deal today because he needed somebody to be with him to face all this changing things.

But somehow God for the first time had idea that Swayam desperately needed somebody with him so God sent his own sister there to him to support him. Taani god knows how had an idea that swayam is going through a very rough phase in his life and may be god made her mature enough to provide the much needed warmth to swayam for which he missed Kriya so much.

Taani came from backside and taped Swayam's shoulder and asked swayam to sit down and drink some juice.

Swayam: No I really don't need that taani.

Taani: Bhai I know what is going on in your mind but I want to say that I am there with you on every step of yours you are suffering all this because of me and just don't worry I would be there with you always.

I know new team will be on paper today and will start rehearsals and what you are feeling now as you always wanted this to happen. But be strong and be happy that whether you are there or not but what you always dreamt has become true and your friends are happy about that. Today they don't trust you but I am sure they also miss you and soon the time will come when they will come to you to talk bhai. Till then I am there with you on every step of yours. So just calm down and drink the juice then we have to leave for college as today the first lecture is of that Hitler VP and we should not be late at all otherwise you don't know he can make us anything like murga or dog.

Both of them smiled with this statement of taani and swayam hugged taani was feeling very relaxed and felt mentally strong now before going to college and facing everything.

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Everybody started coming to college. Swayam and Taani to came college for the first time Swayam had brought bike instead of cycle so that he and taani can come easily. While Taani was getting down and Swayam was parking the bike, Sharon came from behind in her royal car and got off as if she was the only one there.

Everybody in parking lot saw Swayam and Sharon at the same place. Sharon was giving death glares to Swayam. Everybody enjoyed that because it was like daily entertainment quota for all as Sharon used insult Swayam in public.

But today things were different Sharon was looking in Swayam's eyes and she was very proudly conveying Swayam that she has got hold over everything now and he is not even required anywhere.

Swayam understood that at very time and moved back and started walking off from there. But how could people allow him to leave without any entertainment. So instead of Sharon the boys and girls who were out there started teasing Swayam very badly and were just scolding him in every possible manner.

But Swayam never bother to react to anything. He was going like he was used to all this and just that he deserved everything. His eyes looked numb and Sharon somehow saw the look in Swayam's eyes and she really felt bad about that she never wanted him to feel like that in person against everybody but what can one do now she also didn't had any hold on that.

Somehow Taani came there and held swayam's hand was trying to get swayam out of this but she was not able to get swayam out because he was not moving an inch from there.

Rey at the same time came there in his car saw everything there. He just parked his car in whatever manner he could and just ran in direction where swayam was. Rey reached there and pulled back the crowd from there.

Rey: Hey-hey just shut up and leave from here right now, may be you don't know she is the AGS of the college and what you all are doing is not within the rules so get ready for the punishment.

Hearing that everybody just left from there but it was too late at what Rey had reacted, because already recording were made of this and spread into the whole college.

As soon as crowd got cleared swayam left the place without even looking at anyone. Taani was going behind him but Rey pulled her back saying I have some important work to discuss with you so come with me.

Sharon also felt relaxed and left from there.

The entire gang was excited and waiting for Sharon so that everyone could go in Rehearsal hall together as new team and start rehearsing. Sharon quickly got in the girls change room and got ready for dance and joined the team.

On the other hand Rey also joined the team and all of them started to go to Rehearsal hall. They reached the hall found that a projector was set up and as soon as all of them entered the lights went off. Everybody got very scared and started shouting but suddenly projector started on and played the same Taani audition CD from which Rey and Swayam selected Taani.

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Rey went back to memories seeing that how everything was set up...

In the morning Rey called Taani...

Rey: Good Morning are you up and ready? I actually needed to talk to you for something important.

Taani: ya I am up and ready just going to see bhai if he is ready or not.

Rey: Oh nice perfect... Look Swayam would be too much lame today. Because what is going to happen today is joint dream of mine and his and I know how much sad it would be making him not to be a part of that. So try to console him first and just ask him that you are there for him. I know right now he would be missing Kriya because she was the one who knew how to handle Swayam in such times. May be I should have asked once Kriya what magic trick she had to cheer up Swayam.

Anyways you know swayam well so try and feel him relaxed and meet me in college I need to do something for swayam and get him back in the team.

After that Rey met Swayam and Taani in parking lot and Swayam walked off from there but Rey stopped Taani and took her with himself to the GS room and talked:

Rey: Now listen we need the gang and Sharon full truth about your selection and why you did not clear that you were not a dancer at the time you got selected. I know the gang will be uncontrollable seeing you around but don't worry I will make sure you get the chance to speak and convey the whole truth.

And do one thing this is your audition CD arrange this CD to be played in the Rehearsal hall at the time we go in to rehearse and you be there because then after we will face off with everyone and I want to take off this burden from me. Somehow I am responsible for this state of Swayam; he has been a best friend I could ever have. He took care of my repo and image at that time so it's time now that I give him back what he has always desired his love and his team. I hope you will be able to deal with all this for your brother.

Taani just took hold of Rey's hand and spoke even I to owe bhai a big deal because I was the reason why all this happened and I want to do every possible thing that I can do for bhai to get back him at the place he was before all this happened.

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Now in the present time everybody was shocked to see Taani dance like this.

Nobody had a bloody clue about this CD because except for Rey and Swayam nobody had seen it. Sharon too was amazed to see this... so was gang they didn't knew what to react now...

Now the lights got switched on and Rey came there with Taani...

Everybody now got a hint that it was Rey or Taani who played that CD... Rey spoke up to clear everyone's mind:

Rey: So guys what do you think about this dance CD...

Sharon: Rey I guess she is really improving as dance and much to my dislike she is very good in this CD and whole the gang agreed with Sharon.

Rey: so do you think now she can be a part of the team?

Guys: though we don't want to see her but based on the dance yes she can.

Vishakha: But how can somebody turn so good in just a week...

Sharon: Exactly how she can be so good when we saw she couldn't even perform the easiest steps...

Everybody agreed to this and was curious to know how this had happened...

Rey: so you all believe this dance makes her eligible to join the team...

Gang agreed...

Rey: so now let me tell you this is the audition CD based on which Taani was selected...

As soon as Rey spoke that the chaos started and everybody started blaming Swayam again...

Sharon: so Swayam had mixed this CD and made her look so perfect that you got amazed and allowed her to be the part of the dance team right?

Gang spoke ya exactly this is all swayam's master mind behind this and further blamed swayam.

Now this thing made Rey go mad and he shouted out of irritation that had built in him because of the scolding that was going..

Rey Shouting: Shut up guys will please allow me to finished, now nobody would utter a single word mind you no single world before I allow all of you to speak... I need to make all this things very clear for the first and last time and please be patient until I and Taani finish what we want all of you to listen. So shut down and stand there and listen to what we say... Sharon you too please listen to this thing very clearly with open ears and for sometime please think that nobody is guilty and we are trying to sort the things out for my sake and for the sake of our friendship. Please I hope you can do this much for me as a friend and I ask the same thing to all of you guys please...

Vishakha: I don't want to listen to anything... I know you and Swayam are best of friends and you will try to protect him...

Rey: no, it's not like that...if Kriya would have asked you to listen to things first and decide than also you would have walked off like this? Dam it he is Kriya's best friend and he was the last person whom Kriya wanted to talk before leaving that's why she left a letter for him. Can't you see how much Kriya trusted him? Can you give him a chance for one for that trust? God dam it for sake of you Kriya I ask you to stay down.

Vishakha: ok for Kriya only...

Everybody stood in their respective position and Rey Started to explain everything...

Rey: It was me who got this CD accidently in canteen near the drinks table... Taani had no idea about this... she was searching for the CD in the whole college.

I had called Sharon at swayam's home to see the same CD and decide but Sharon came and left without even looking at the CD. And for that Nil and Vicky were there with me and they knew why we were at Swayam's home.

(Sharon suddenly remembered that she saw Sharon's corner there and had decided to talk to swayam about the place in the team herself and at that time she realised that he was the man of his words and he would not anything that will make her uncomfortable.)

Rey continued:

So I forced Swayam to see the CD and he was shocked to see that it was Taani. He told me that he has never seen Taani dance even in any of the family functions they held.

But I was the one who convinced him and forced him to take Taani in the team. And because he had all the faith in me so he took Taani in the team. Still he insisted that it should be a combine decision but I made him take the decision single handily.

Now you all will be wondering why Taani did all this right? That's why Taani is here to say what the reason behind that was. So allow Taani to finish before you all ask anything.

Taani took over and started to speak:

Taani: I gambled the CD's just to come in the lime light as bhai was. But I realised that it was not good to do that gamble because I cannot dance and everybody will realise it soon and blame bhai. So when my selection was announce I came to canteen to say I couldn't be part of the team but there I saw Sharon and Bhai fighting madly about that issue and I got scared that if I reveal the truth now than everybody will blame bhai and without any fault bhai will have to suffer. So I decided to practise make bhai proud for my selection but as know I was not able to do that and everything revealed and bhai had to leave everything.

Rey asked the gang to speak whatever they had in their minds...

So Sharon was the first one to ask...

Sharon: Than why didn't you speak when everybody was scolding him on the day when the truth was revealed...?

Rey: oh correction Sharon I had come forward to tell the truth remembers when you all were scolding him.

Sharon: than why didn't you speak anything?

Rey: because swayam pulled me back he wanted to clarify himself everything but you all were not ready to listen to him so he hold me back because he didn't want me to fall down from your all faith. And he had taken a swear from me that this will not be out in any condition and the reason he didn't wanted was that he was disappointed with you all his so called friends who didn't even listen to him once.

And today I feel so guilty that I actually stayed back and let you all scold him when he didn't even have committed a single mistake.

Sharon and gang were really numb now and were feeling very guilty for this.

Sharon felt bad because she didn't understand the fact that he would never do a thing which is not correct morally. But still what swayam had done to her in computer lab forced her to anger him.

Sharon: he is guilty Rey you are forgetting that how he behaved with me on that day when I had opposed Taani's selection.

Now Rey was really angry at Sharon because he knew how much guilty Swayam felt and even Swayam went there to apologise with Sharon but what Sharon did to him was visible to all at that time.

Rey: oh please, Sharon don't start that thing again. It was not his fault entirely you and all of us know that.

Sharon: but you don't know what he did to me after wards only I know that...

Rey: oh please Sharon I know each and every word that he told you on that day in computer Lab. He told me everything and he was punishing himself for doing that to you. You don't know how much he was bleeding that time. He had lost his presence I had to hit him hard to make him realise where he was and you say that he was guilty alone no way Sharon no way. Also he came there very next day to you to apologise but what you did to him than. You insulted him in public and since that day you have been insulting him in public but has he ever back answered for you anything. No. Because he still feels guilty for whatever he did to you...

Now Sharon was broken in to pieces as realisations were starting to hit her badly very badly... she just stood there numb...

Rey continued: you don't know how much he loves you... I don't know what is it that shivam party incident... he was planning to leave college at that time only after that party and jungle night out. He had hurt himself very badly after Shivam's party. And that day he unintentionally spoke that again.

But he is guilty for everything he spoke to you. Are you guilty for encouraging him to speak up all that? No. Everybody was there this gang who initiated the fight. You scolded his sister in front of everyone and that's why his anger crossed all the limits he had set for himself and you had to face the consequences... do you even realise that you were the one who forced him to fight by scolding him badly?

Ask them each one of them will tell you how much he loves you. Have he ever chatted about a girl other than Sharon? Did he ever to talk any girl romantically other than Sharon? You all know what he feels for Sharon...

All of them nodded their heads in positive.

Rey continued: If they all can see what he feels for you than why can't you see that. He loves you madly Sharon, madly that no one can even imagine that. Ask bharat and amar that he used to protect you even when we were rivals. He never allowed any one to speak a word against you Sharon not a single word against you.

What do you want to me say to you now... you didn't even value his any gestures that he did only to make you smile. Why would you value him right? He was a bloody weakling and how would a dazzler diva fall for a guy who is weakling right? Oh come on Sharon you are going to dance in footloose just because these weaklings jisko join karne ke bad hi you will get to perform in the footloose finale. But no your big fat size ego will not allow you to confront that you get affected by him. I saw you today itself feeling bad for him when everybody was scolding him.

I am you best friend god dam it I know you better than yourself. You love him Sharon you do leave this ego behind and go talk to him before its too late. You see me that what happens if you are late in expressing what you feel to the one for you feel that.

Don't be another Rey Sharon go and tell him before it's too late and nothing will be left to you other than regrets for not telling him.

Sharon was crying badly because his best friend once again proved that he cares for her and every single friend of his more than anything. He made her realise what she felt for Swayam.

Everybody tried to calm down Sharon and explained what they knew how swayam feels for her. They encourage her to speak what she felt for Swayam.

But just than Taani announced that she doesn't know where swayam is now. Swayam had left her from the college entrance gate itself.

Everybody apologised to Taani and made friends with her. Even Sharon hugged Taani and made friends with her.

But now big thing was how everybody will face swayam and what will they say to him? Everybody was feeling guilty and were realising how swayam must have felt during all these days. But more than that one big question was where swayam was actually.

Everybody started the search for swayam. But Sharon had a fair Idea where swayam can be. She guessed it and went to the abandon corridor to look for Swayam.

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And how perfectly she knew swayam, he was sitting right there. He was lost in his own world don't know what he was writing in his tablet in that dark room.

Sharon switched on the lights and went near Swayam...

Sharon went near Swayam and just held his collar and made him stand up to her...and spoke...

Sharon: What do you think of yourself haan? Ho kya tum Koi god ya fairy angel ho tum.

Swayam was puzzled to hear this from Sharon?

Sharon continued: Tumhe bada maza aata hai na ye sab karne me..

Swayam asked: Kya?

Sharon: don't stand like tumhe kuch nahin pata tumne kya kiya hai.

Swayam got afraid that may be she has come to know about something which she didn't know about him.

Swayam: kya kiya Maine?

Sharon: kya kiya? Tum jante the 6th dancer KO Rey ne select kiya tha fir bhi blame apne pe le liya... fir tumne guilty feel kiya mujse apologise karne aaye but anger mein maine tumhe na jane kya kuch kaha jo galat that fir bhi ek work nahin bola muje chup karvane ke liye why swayam why?

Did you have any idea ye sab jab muje realise hoga tab main kitna guilty feel karungi swayam... I am feeling like a fire is burning inside me. Aise kyu ho tum? Why you think tumhare silent hone se sab kuch thik ho jayega haan? Do you even know because of you aaj pehli bar main kuch galat karne jaa rahi thi... why god dam it why? I need an answer now...you know guilt is killing me.

Swayam: you know Sharon that... main tumhare against kabhi nahin JA sakta tha Sharon never in my dreams I could have thought that.

Sharon: pyar karte the Na mujse? You loved me right I was the most important person in your life right?

Swayam just nodded in yes...and tears started to flow from his eyes.

Sharon: to fir kyu mujpe trust nahin kiya tumne kyu? Do you think Shivam jaise jerk ke sath I would do such thing?

Swayam: But you only told me that you were seeing him and besides that Maine use tumhe kiss karte hue dekha tha...

Sharon: what the hell? Tumne dekha tha vo mere cheeks pe kiss kar raha tha and uske bad I pushed him off from me. I don't know why I felt like I was betraying somebody and suddenly I started to see you images in my eyes and I remembered the day of RDX sir's party and you and I just ran from there. Tumne VO sab nahin dekha kya?

Swayam: why would I stay back to see you getting close to some other...

Sharon: toh fir uske bad ye sab hua tha... uske bad ghar jake I punished myself for doing that you and me. I was guilty that I allowed him to touch and kiss my cheeks. But my first kiss no that has not happened still swayam? It would be special...

Swayam: I know Sharon I trust you...just that us waqt anger ki wajah se VO bol diya but I regretted very much after that I am really sorry I really am...

Sharon: do you know I had punished myself again thinking what you will be thinking that I am an easy catch and anybody will get close to me, no never, for that the reason I decided to become the rude diva.

Swayam: I know the change in you is caused by my rude words and don't worry I deserve each and everything you do to me.

Sharon: no it's not like that I am wrong this time. I should have clarified with you this thing at the time you said that. But it was my ego that stopped me from doing that.

But I am realising my mistake and many other things now. You know I was wrong in calling Taani a cheap girl and I have all ready apologised to Taani for that and we are friends now. Everybody else also has forgiven Taani and has become friends with her. Everybody is feeling guilty and searching for you everywhere.

Swayam: oh wow that so nice everybody forgiven me. I am so happy to hear that I got my friends back and also your perception about me doing that has also changed so everything is good now. I am so happy now.

Swayam got up and was about to go up stairs when Sharon held his hand.

Sharon: where are you going?

Swayam: you said Na everybody is searching for me, to unse Milne JA raha hu.

Sharon: but I have not completed what I want to say to you yet Swayam.

Swayam: now what do you want to say?

Sharon: I saw that Sharon corner in your room...

Swayam was surprised to hear that because this actually the first time he realised that Sharon had seen his Sharon corner.

Sharon: you know no body have ever done such thing for me. That day only my perception for you had changed. But then I found out that you again brought that sandal and I thought you think I am a material bitch that just starves from expensive gifts only.

The reason why I said no to you on that day here was the same. I never wanted you out of all think that I am starved by expensive gifts. You knew the real me somehow exactly the way I was. I thought tum to jante hoge muje kya acha lagta hai.

Maine bola tha I am in love with my secret admirer because I thought ke koi aisa insan hai Jo mere face pe smile dalne ke liye itna hard work kar raha hai. I felt ke I am really special ke koi mujse itna pyar karta hai ke mere samne Na hokar bhi mere liye apni presence feel karva raha hai through the things which he sent to me. I used to feel secure that there is somebody who loves me so much.

But when I found out that you were my secret admirer the first thing which hit my mind was that you think I am a material bitch and only expensive things can make me happy. I felt really bad that the guy I thought knows me the best actually doesn't know me even a bit. And then you thought we could be together but kya tumne kabhi socha ke muje kaise laga hoga jab I discovered the thing that Jo boy pura time mere samne that use apne feelings KO express karne ke liye aise hidden personality leni padi. It hurt me badly swayam. Muje apne aap pe doubt hone laga ke kya main itni cheap hu ki koi ladka mere face pe simply muje nahi bol skata ke he loves me. Specially tab jab ki VO insan tum the Jo yeh achi tarah se janta tha ke how simple I am from inside. Ye sari show up and shields Jo Maine create kiye hue the, you used to see me beyond that really didn't you. So it hurt me that tumhe ye cheap source ka use karna pada. Though Maine tumhe kaha ki tum ek weakling ho so I am rejecting you and we can never become us. But the real reason was not that, it was just that I did not want to be eyed as material bitch. Secret admirer muje kya bhejta tha use main kabhi impressed nahi Hui just because VO gifts ke through muje remind karvata tha ke he loves me VO chiz se mai impressed thi. But jab pata chala ki VO tum the, to it shattered me because tum sidha - sidha ye sab kuch express kar sakte the so I rejected you.

But trust me I began realising that I was wrong you actually understood me well and you knew agar tum straight muje approach karte to there would be a mess in the teams and even I get aroused kuch thik na ho. So I started getting soft on you but you were starting to be cold on me so I was getting irritated with that so I used to get close to shivam just to make you jealous of that and even I lied that I was in relationship with shivam. But then you know shivam ne kya kiya eventually mere sath pehle jab kiss incident hua tab usne mafi mangi to I thought maybe use apni galti ka realisation hai so I forgive him but eventually he broke my trust as a friend also. And then you came there and I started getting soft on you. Sharon's corner dekha to I thought you are a man of your words but sandal wali bat ne muje bahot angry kar diya ke you still think that way only so mera outburst ho gaya tum pe us chiz ka. But uske bad I realised that Rey ne VO shoes mere order kiye the, you just brought them for him. But it was too late to realise than and fir ye sab misunderstandings Hui and you know the rest.

Swayam was sitting there crying and looking at Sharon.

On the other hand Sharon was looking so relaxed that she finally cleared everything that made her do all this.

Sharon: Swayam you only said ke ye shut book tab open hogi jab main ise open karungi...so I want to say that now I want to...

Swayam kept his finger on her lips and spoke finally:

Swayam: Sshhh... kabse khud hi bole JA rahi ho sab kuch tum hi bologi toh main kya madhubala ki tarah rote-rote haan hi bolta rahu kya...

No now it's my turn to speak up...

Look you are wondering first about if I still love you or not so you were about to ask me ke whether this shut book can open or not, right.

(Sharon just nodded yes, she was silent because majnu Saab ne mana Jo kiya tha kuch bhi bolne se)

Swayam continued:

So first thing ya Maine try ki thi tumhe bhul Jane ki. I was desperately trying to get you out of my heart. But you know what ye mera heart sala bahot useless kamina nikla.

You know what ye heart bolta hai Sharon isme se nahin nikal sakti. Agar usko nikala to main pump karna stop kar dunga. Bolo what can I do now... mera khudka heart mera nahin hai VO tumhare isharon pe chalta hai. To ye to question hi nahi raha ke I love you or not because I can die but I cannot stop loving you because mere heart ke strict orders hai yaha pe koi aur nahin AA sakta...

(Now Sharon was smiling cutely listening to all this)

Now the thing is that book KO re open karna hai ki nahi? So ek tarika hai uska bhi...

(Swayam took Sharon's hand in his hand and kept it on his heart)

Kya tumhe lagta hai ki ye book kabhi closed thi?

(Sharon smilingly nodded in no)

To fir agar book closed hi nahi hai to open kise karoge tum?

(Sharon started to blush)

(Now swayam went on his knees)

Swayam:

Hey Siren Sharon... I love you so much that I don't have any example that can prove the quantum of love that my heart has for you.

Right now my tough is getting dry and I am losing to catch up the proper words to express the happiness my heart feels now. You know ye ek hi aisi thing hai Jo Maine kabhi nahi imagine ki thi ki how would I propose to you. So I don't know ke kya bolu tumhe abhi.

But I want to you to know that I want to be with you in every moment of your life. I want to hold on your hand when you become the most successful dancer and the world accepts it. I want to share all those little joys that a cute couple share when they are in love. I want to prepare so nice dishes for you jisko khane se tum apne aap KO stop Na kar pao and limitless khane lago bhale fir moti ho jao (Sharon hits him playfully on this one).

I don't know I want to bring everything that makes you happy for you. I am a love sick person I have never been loved my mom died when I was small and everyone else in my family used to be busy in their activities and my father never took care to know what I did just because I never followed what he wanted me to do. So I always had money remaining with me and I never wanted money but I wanted love. When I saw you I thought maybe you can give me the love I am missing whole my age because I felt that you too missed the same love and care. The simplicity in your eyes really caught me to you. And till day your eyes make me go weak on a knee that is why for a safe side I am on knees so that I don't go weak while saying this to you. Will you always be with me and give me the love I want?

Sharon was just awestruck with this...she had tears in her eyes and was not able to speak anything. She was crying...

Swayam just cupped her face in his hands and spoke:

Hey what happened? Kya Maine itna senti line bol diya ke tum itni sad ho gai? Acha-acha I got it shayad tum mujse pyar nahi karti...

Sharon suddenly angry on hearing that because she knew that he knows how much she loves him before she even knew... and still he is teasing her like that...

Sharon: what the hell... you Mr. Swayam Shekhawat what do you think of yourself haan... tumhe kya lagta hai agar main tumse pyar Na karti hoti to itna bada clarification kyu deti main tumhe... (She was back in her full diva mode now and was shouting at him)

Shayad tum bhul gaye ho ke tumhara heart mere directions follow karta hai tumhare nahi so stop being so smart ok... and mind you ye heart sirf mera hai till the day I take my last breath...

Swayam just cut her there and spoke: oh bap re but ye possible nahi hai Maine to god ke pas reservation karvaya hai ke hum dono KO sath mein hi upar bula le to ab to problem ho gaya na tumhare last breath ke waqt main already nikal liya hounga na upar tumhare comforts ka arrangement karne ke liye...

Sharon got irritated: what no ways where are your manners you dumb fellow... ladies first hota hai always so I will take the last breath first don't you dare take it first...

Swayam: are but to tumhare comforts ka arrangement kaun karega yar...

Sharon: don't worry for that I will book a luxurious room there so tumhe kuch karne ki zarurat nahi sirf mere bad waha Jana...

Swayam: oh god yaha pe bhi inki hi chalegi thik hai chalo... oye what the hell last breath KO chod abhi Jo jina baki hai uska soch abhi mere proposal ko haan toh bola nahin aur chali marne mere sath...

Sharon: what??? Main answer kar rahi thi tumne muje bich mein interrupt karke bhatka diya... ab pehle 20 sit-ups in 5 ke set me karo uske bad main age reply karungi...

Swayam: are yar ye kya hai tum school teacher ki tarah kyu behave kar rahi ho yar... aise nazuk time pe bhi koi aise punishment deta hai kya?

Sharon: main deti hun Na abhi chup chap karo Varna koi reply nahin milega...

Swayam starting sit-ups: wah yar main duniya ka pehla aur ek lauta lover hoga Jo apni girl KO proposes karne ke bad answer sunne ke liye punishment le raha hoga...

Sharon was smiling at this and she went besides him and spoke up: I love you... I really do I don't know when I started loving you back out of hatred that I shared with you... but now position ye hai ki I cannot imagine any other guy in my life except for you. We are totally different from each other still the love we share is just out of the world. We might not be the perfect lover but no lovers will be like us Jo apne pyar ka express aise karte honge...

And she stopped swayam doing sit ups...

And swayam was breathing heavily... Sharon went near to him and told him that: some warming up was required before I... I...

Swayam: what I-I?

Sharon straight away pulled him closed to her kept her lips on his. Swayam was just shocked with this but then he started to enjoy the taste of her lips... Sharon was kissing swayam vigorously which took her out of breath almost so she started slow down but mean time our majnu was all charged up now and he started kissing her passionately and which gave Sharon shock but she started to enjoy first kiss as she never knew her first kiss would turn out to be that much exciting.

Both of them were out of breath now so they left each other...Sharon was standing at a distance looking at Swayam and smiling at him. Swayam too was smiling at her...

Finally Sharon spoke up and finished the unfinished sentence of hers: Before I kiss you dumbo... but I never thought my first ever kiss would be that long and exciting... (Now she was blushing)

Swayam: I told you babes that your first kiss will be something that you will always remember and it would be very special one... so here I fulfilled that promise...

Sharon was already red on this...both of them just hugged each other very tightly and provided the much needed warmth to each other...

Now they went back to their friends and everybody apologised to swayam and finally a group hug of 12 persons made and everybody was happy...

Rey just went a distance a saw everybody felt tears on his cheeks but was really happy to see that...

Swayam and Sharon came up to him and held him into hug...

Swayam: dude there is one more thing you need to know...

Rey: what?

Swayam: Finally woh dream date arrange karna padega because siren ne ha kar diya...

Rey looked towards Sharon who was still blushing hard understood that finally his mission to bring back Swayam and Sharon was finished and that made him really happy and he hugged both of them and was really not able to control his feelings...

Everybody was happy they went back to rehearsal hall the team was rearranged now with 11 member team and Taani being official care taker of team...

(As they say finding true friends is rare and managing them too much rare...we all think true love is the only important thing in life but true friends like Rey are needed to get your true love like Sharon...)

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So this was the final part of the OS... I hope you all enjoyed it...Thanks for the time you got out for this one...

Have good day and Happy New Year guys...

Pratik...

Edited by pratik54000 - 12 years ago
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AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL ...i loved this OS...reason being...it was so real...so cheesy lines(unlike mine)...the MUs..the clashes...the pain..the hatred...everything made me fall in love with swaron more and more...be it taani Rey convo about saving Swayam...or the gang convo...it was beautifully expressed...but the most beautiful part for me in this update was the CONFESSION...LOVED IT...they said it all...about each and every MU..be it Shivam issue ...or the Computer room showdown...ahh.,...loved it...their pain..the love was so evident..surreal ...


Awww...Sharon corner...goddd...i loved this gali dene wala Swayam..lol...heart kamina nikla 😆😆😆

Look you are wondering first about if I still love you or not so you were about to ask me ke whether this shut book can open or not, right.

(Sharon just nodded yes, she was silent because majnu Saab ne mana Jo kiya tha kuch bhi bolne se)

Swayam continued:

So first thing ya Maine try ki thi tumhe bhul Jane ki. I was desperately trying to get you out of my heart. But you know what ye mera heart sala bahot useless kamina nikla.

You know what ye heart bolta hai Sharon isme se nahin nikal sakti. Agar usko nikala to main pump karna stop kar dunga. Bolo what can I do now... mera khudka heart mera nahin hai VO tumhare isharon pe chalta hai. To ye to question hi nahi raha ke I love you or not because I can die but I cannot stop loving you because mere heart ke strict orders hai yaha pe koi aur nahin AA sakta...


Loved the whole convo and the confession...and the cute little edning when Swayam goes and ask Rey to help him to set the perfect date for HER...awww...lovelyyy😃...u simplyyy rock...😳


Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
finally everything is fine.swaron confession is really very nice n beautifully penned down and in da right place also the abandon corridor where once it was brutally ended swayam's all hope.
this update is full of friendship like firstly swayam remembering kriya then a grat friend rey helping sharon to understand her feeling 4 swayam,n always last bt not da least friendship between swayam n rey.
bechare dil ko to khamkha itni galliyaan mil gayi.keep writing
HAPPY NEW YEAR

i unres my previous comment at page 5
Edited by arch2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
I read half of the update long before u sent me a pm coz I saw u reserving and then my net conked off😕 Now i finally read the full update😊
It was amazing , I really loved reading it. You write so well, khaali phukat u keep saying I am not a writer.😆
I had commented on ur first update but stupid me, I forgot to like it since I was online via cell. Sorry
Happy New Year to u and keep writing!
Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Monster 🤗

PMs send karne ke liye Thank u bolne ki zarurat nahi thi , pehle hi kaha tha maine.😳
Amazing update !
In this update ,rey was an awesome friend understanding swayam's situation and helping him.
loved the way he scolded sharon and rest of the gang , confessing it was all his fault and not swayams.
the way he made sharon understand and to make her realise her love for swayam was nice.
the swaron confession was fantastically written , with every emotion of sharon and swayam very well described .
the push ups as a punishment was funny 😆and last mein kiss
end sab acha hogaya , All's well that ends well 😃
totally loved this short story , keep giving us more ...
thanks for the PM.
P.S - u better not even think of quiting writing , u are a fab writer ⭐️ and u should never stop !
Edited by Tanuka_TanHa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update
Finally the truth is out that rey is the one who choose taani as 6 th dancer.Swayam's pov was really good he need someone to share his emotion n at that time he miss his best friend kria who always supported him.
Swaron confession was really amazing.Loved the way sharon let out everything n told him why she rejected him earlier n about shivam fiasco too.
Hehe pushups they r really the most adorable couple n yeah swayam is only one who did pushup after proposing a girl ...:p
Loved it
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the way rey handled the situation way nicely done...n yes frnds like rey are indeed a gift, n ppl who have such a frnd are lucky ones...
nice update..thanks for the pm./...

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