Hidden Feelings- A SwaRon Story

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swapna

@shan16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

i too need a PM ..please update...waiting for nxt part...luved it

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lalita

@BusyIndivaBee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

this was really good bhai

waiting for the next part :D

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LittleBitOfAlexis

@LilBitOfAlexis

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

😊Amazing OS nice to see REYAM unbreakable bond and looking forward for SWAROn.plz do update next part soon.

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Anu_TanHa

@Anu_TanHa

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

nice update pratik.u r thinking of discontinue ur work n here i am waiting 4 ur ff's to be updated plz don't stop writing it's a request.u choose da most powerful scene of swaron becoz of tanha acting.the way story moves from there in da show i was little bit disappointed.bt ur writing gave me some satisfaction plz continue.deep thanks 4 pm

Edited by arch2012 - 12 years ago

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

RES! (Like tab not working! :/)

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

i loved the story...thank you for this...somehow i wasnt satisfied with the aftermath of sixth dancer episodes...please do continue...update was niceand perfect...swayam and sharon thoughts are so aptly presentd...swayam brought tears to me...very finely written...do PM me

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ABI

@ABBY92

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

That was a really nice spin on the whole SwaRon showdown scene !! Love the fact that Rey is going bring Swayam and Sharon back together !! Do update the next part soon !!

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Pehli baat! Bro aap discontinue nahi kar sakte..coz we will not let this happen...atleast iss janam mei yoh nahi!
Aur dusri baat..aap yeh dilemma ke chakkar mei kaise padh gayee?? itne serious type ke kaise ho gayee?
CA ki padhai se sadma toh nhi lag gayaa??? *Nahiinnn!!*

Phewww... chalo ab mai aapko batati hun ki mjhe aapki likhaai kaisi lagi :-)
Hidden Feelingss--
I mut say that you have chosen a very strong plot for this write-up..i loved this phase of swaron where they were in a ego trip about god knows what...
And i totally loved how you explained every bit of the story so well. It was like i am reading a proper book and the story is going on and on...
swayam was as sad as he could be.
sharon was in a denial mode.
rey was worried for his best friends.
It was amazingg!!! Totally rockingg and super strong story..!
I think you should try to make it an SS or even FF...!
Bro you rawkk!! And thank you tanuka and DD for the Pm :-)