Hidden Feelings- A SwaRon Story - Page 6

hey it ws awsum ya 👏

Sorry but I'll have to reserve here! Will try and edit soon!!

Beautiful os :D and senti + perfect ending

loved it
awesome

it was a treat to read it
tnx

u r right dude
we can get love easily sometime bt friendship is most important aspect in life
for update it was amazing
rey r best friend of swayam nd makes every thing to make him happy
it was hilarious to know rey scolding sharon for all her mistake which she did to him nd also making her realised she loves him madly bt stil realisation not stuck her
rey also scolds whole team for him n he also told them kria only trust him then how can he do this to them
tanni is best sister any one can get. she is with him whn no one trust nd with him
whn they realise there mistake they felt guilty for him
sharon found him nd clear all d mu between them n confront why he did this for her
swayam confession convo of his love towards sharon was nice yet classy
which turn into on random topic was enjoyable then sharon scolding nd punishment of push up was hilarious
finally sharon confession nd kiss was classic
end was amazing
i love d update

Wow...what update...
Lovely happy ending...kash aisa d3 me hota...

It was an awesome oS.

Pratik bhaiya...😃

wow...now is this what u call stupid?? ghosh seriously i would say that something is wrong with u then...😛

how beautifully u portrayed both swayam and sharon's feelings...this was the same thing i was expecting in d3...i wanted sharon to realise her mistakes gradually and that is what u exactly conveyed...i really loved the way rey makes her understand her mistakes...and she going to the abandoned corridor and haye finally the confession...

awesome is the word...keep writing more...😳

ps: i could have wrote more...but u just made me speechless...😃