Hidden Feelings- A SwaRon Story

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Binuja(binju)

@Anomic_loner

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

wow that was like purely swaronish...😛

their feelings were very well described..how i wish they showed the same in the show as well...
sharon being the diva...blaming swayam for everything yet still confused about her feelings towards him...
swayam is always sharon's majnu no matter what she thinks about him...and i loved the way u justified taani here which again i wanted to be shown in the show...their bro-sis convo was really cute...and rey as the understanding friend is always a treat to read...
swayam's feelings were really beautifully penned down...

waiting for the next part...😳

PS;thanks deeps and tanuka for the pm...😊

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swa-ron

@swa-ron

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

aftr reading this
i feel like to read more of ur stuffs...
Great job

waiting for e next part

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Thanks to Tanuka and deepu di for ur pms... 🤗
And Mr Pratik...whats this??????? 😡
Abhi jaldi se next part update karo...and 'Boring' tag tumpe suit nai karta,yeh tum khud bhi jante ho!!! 😡
quick!!!!!
Next update plz... 😊

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User123

@UserM123

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Bhai :D
awesum story, I so Loved it!
Loved the bond between Rey and Swayam! I hate the team for behaving with swayam like that! But i guess eventually team ko bhi akkal aa jaye gi. When i started reading it, i was so mesmerized ki pata hi nai chal part 1 kab khatam ho gaya!
Not fair Bhai, Please jaldi se update karo na,
waiting to read how rey ka mission Sharon Swayam accomplish hota hai!
Please jaldi update ko...
Waiting for the nxt update! :D
Love,MiNi

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Ajit sahu

@sw1234

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

it was nice yar.swayam in sad state of mind .sharon was confused.plz bring them close soon and pm me.

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

amazing update

continue soon😊

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Maddie - 🤗Happy New Year Buddy...I dont know from where u get these god-forsaken ideas that pepl dont wanna read your stuff and all...u got 40 likes in 2 days and still u think the same way😆

I luvd what I have read till now, esp coz itna drama hai, emotionally rich hai and I luv that kind of stuff and no one does that more intensely than SwaRon!!! So jaldi jaldi update karo, me waiting for it...I may comment late but read I sure will...

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Res will try to unres soon! 😊

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Anonymous--

@Anonymous--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Awesome story Pratik bhai! Pls post the next part soon! :D

Thanks for the PMs Tanuka n Deepu di :)

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-Shravzz-

@-Shravzz-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Bhai fabulous update...😃
Kash aisa D3 mein bhi dikhate...
You described their feelings beautifully...😊
Sharon is still confused about her feelings...ohh no😲
Swayam toh hamesha ka majnu hai...
Rey ka mission...excited to read the next part bro for this one especially...😛
Loved it a lot...😃
And bhai pm toh karte the na...😡
Thanks for the pm tanuka and deepika...😊