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Posted: 20 years ago
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THANKS GUYS....DK KI DULHAN BANNEKE CHAKAR MEIN SAB KUCH BHOOL GAYI...BUT HERE I COME AGAIN!....tHISSCENE TOOK ME LIKE 6 HOURS..HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT!

Scene 5

The scene starts in the Red Dragon disco. There are two floors. On the ground floor everyone is dancing and on the second floor people are sitting on tables and watching them.

Dk is sitting on a VIP table on the second floor. As usual, he is drinking!😆 He is looking downstairs at all the people dancing on the music. Just then his eyes fall on the beautiful disha in the black dress who is dancing with her friends in a group. She is dancing , ladke jhatke mar kar 😉on the song " Hai rama rama hoooooo hai moore raaama ,dil mein macha hai kyun...koi hungamaa😉..aayega koi .bahoo mein leke....choomega mere ..yeh lucky lips(shaking her bootee😉) aay haaai aha ha 😉..aha ha aaye hai aha ha ..aha ha (more ladke jhatke😉) . aaye hai ah ha ha aha ha oye hoi aha ha aha ha😉 Dk's eyes pop out! He just stares at her ..bina palak jhubkaaye He SLOWLY gets up from his chair .while continuously staring at her. He goes to the rod , puts his hands on it and continues to stare downstairs at her with passion and a sparkle in his eyess😳😳😳

Disha who is in her own world "Aye haai oho ho..aha ha Aye hai aha ha aha ha😉"....while her hero just stares at her😳😳

Just then a girl who was dancing downstairs notices dk standing upstairs. And within a minute, we see about 20-30 girls running upstairs to get Dk.

Girls: Please humare dance karoo..please dk....please...chalo...please..please..please ..please

After a lot of nakhra😉, Dk decides to go with them.

He comes downstairs, surrounded by the 20-30 girls... Just then all the other girls on the dance floor stop dancing...since the girls stop dancing....all teh guys stop dancing...Disha and her friends also stop dancing because everyone else has stopped dancing...Most of the girls (by most I mean everyone excluding disha and her friends) scream Dk with joy...and crowd around him...All the boys are also excited...(since Dk is soo famous for going to clubs and discos...that everyone knows him!" and they also crowd around him...

while this is going on ....

Pooja: (Disha's friend whispers in her ear) Yeh to wohi hain na....jiss par tum giri thi..

Disha: (annoyed) Jaan much kar nahi giri..galdi se giri thi...Ek number ka badmaash hain yeh !(makes a face kinda like this one😡)

Shilpa: lekin ...dhikne mein to kaafi hansome hain😉

Disha: handsome? My foot! (liar😆)

After a while someone quiets the whole crowd...and hands a mike to Dk...he is standing on this little stage thing....
A girl form the crowd yells " Coomon dk join us!"

Dk: arre nai nai...aaj mood nahi hain..

when a guy from the crowd yells.."to mood banaligiyeh...Dk ..phicli baar ke tarah..aaj bhi koi tadakti-bhadakiti cheez ho jaaye😉"

Everyone laughs...

Random people form the crowd: " ha Dk."..."come on Dk..".."dk please"
when everyone starts screaming with their hands in the air " Dee K Dee K Dee K Dee K..."

Dk:(on the mike) OK OK OK

Crowd starts cheering and whistling! Everyone is cheering...even Disha's friends....but disha does not seem that happy" and just looks at the crowd with a "whatever" type of an expression!

Dk throws the mike somewhere and jumps into the crowd....all the girls get closer😉 and start dancing with him...

Dk: (swings a girl towards him with his left arm..her hair hits his face) Kahi zulf ka baadal oho.(swings another one on the right ...)kahi rangeen aachal aha😉(one girl grabs his back and turns his face towards hers ) kahi hoth gulabi oho(one comes from the front ladak matak ke..)kahi chaal sharabi aha😉(a girl with contact lenses comes from the front right 45 degree angle) kahi aankh mein jaado oho(a girl from the front left 45 degree comes towards him) kahi jism ki khushboo aha😉(a girl from the back left 45 degree angle comes towards him ) kahi naram nigahe oho(a gril from teh back-right 45 degree angle puts her arms around his neck!)kahi gori baahe aha😉 (Dk breaks free from these 6 girls..)....since he is sooo strong😳😳😳

Dk : Haaaaaa yaha katam katam par....lakho haseen aaye hain €( walks through the middle of the crowd) Hum magar ,yeh dil ka toofa dene usse aaye hain( walks towards disha) who ladki jo sabse alag hain.. who ladki jo sabse alag hain(points at disha )who ladki jo sabse alag hain.. who ladki jo sabse alag hain (😉 s at her)

Disha is mad and embarrassed ...since every1 is staring at her. dk walks towards her pointing his finger at her "who ladki jo sabse alag hain.. who ladki jo sabse alag hain"He is standing in front of her now... Disha gets really embarassed and puts her head down..when Dk comes closer ....looks at disha .....and pulls the girl next to disha, Shilpa 😆by her hand...holds her waist and starts dancing with her...Shilpa, who seems really happy..puts her arms around Dk and she too dances with him😆...Disha looks up and she starts to walk away.....itraake😉....but before she goes all the girls surround him...Disha is unable to leave the crowd...

Dk: (surrounded by girls) Kitne hi jalwe hain aankhon mein ghunti hain jinse chandini ..😉kitni hi hoooo baatein hain kaano mein jinse ghunti hain raagini...😉 .(follows a girl)- yeh chale jaise bhalkhake....( follows disha ) .woh chale zara ithlaake😉(a girll comes from teh left and shyly puts her arms around his neck) yeh mile zara sharma ke(breaks free and grabs disha's wrist) ( She rudely looks at him and escapes) who mile zara itraake😉.....Spreads his arms apart and looks up) Haaaa yaha katam katam mar..lakho haseen aaye hain (ALL the girls hug him..i guess they really don't miss a chance😆) (he breaks free ) Hum magar ,yeh dil ka toofa dene usse aaye hain who ladki jo sabse alag hain.. who ladki jo sabse alag hain(again points at disha..she is embarrased) who ladki jo sabse alag hain.. who ladki jo sabse alag hain(again disha tries to exit the crowd of girls but in vain)

She tries and tries to push thro the girls...but the girls, (crazily dancing) trying to get closer ...drag her closer towards Dk...Dk who had been noticing all this while dancing around ...smiles and SOMEHOW goes closer towards her....he gets hold of her hand...and swings her towards him..and she lands in his strong arms😉...her hands on his GREAT chest...😉and his right arm...around her waist.. 😉... Dk looks at her with passsssionnn 😳😳😳she quickly removes her hand off his chest..but dk puts her other arm around her waist GENTLY...

Dk: Gulshan ki ....hain who kali..(gently and slowly brings her closerr) .jo zarre pholo se bilkool hain judaaaaa(disha stares at him RUDELY) ..kya kahiye hooo dekha hain(gets lost in her beuty) ..in aankhon ne usme aisa roop kyaaa😳kya ajeeb si taazgi hain(gets really close..while she tries to leave) .kya haseen si saadgi hain😳.kya ajeeb si dilkashi hain kya haseen si dilbari hain😉(disha finally manages to escapes) Haaa yaha katam katam mar..lakho haseen aaye hain €(gets out of the crowd) Hum magar ,yeh dil ka toofa dene usse aaye hain who ladki jo sabse alag hain.. who ladki jo sabse alag hain(follows disha) who ladki jo sabse alag hain...

And Dk looses his senses......forcefully pullls her....and starts dancing with her....soooooooooooooooo fast..that disha doesn't even know what's happening to her😆.....he swings her to the right ....pulls her back..twists her and turns her around...she spins to the left....comes backs and lands in his arms...She is spinning and turning...and what not.😆..this goes on for a while he picks her up by her waist😉.turns and twists her in the air(Its's pretty hard to describe) and she comes out from between his legs😉....pulls her closer..again more twisting., pulling ,pushing etc😉.when finally he picks her up by her legs and ends his little dance

So Disha is in the air now, looking down at Dk, who has big smile on his face and is staring at her€People are whistling and cheering while disha is really embarrassed and mad at the same time😆

waht happens next? Does Dk ever put her down? Stay tuned!

Cheers,
Bomby!😉

Edited by Bombgirl4eva - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#42
OH MAN DONT STOP NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Bombgirl4eva

Scene 2 Enjoy!😃

The scene starts on the highway. Its 8 in the morning. Dk is in his Mercedes, talking to someone on the phone. Taj, his secretary is sitting in the front seat, next to the driver

Dk: (on the phone)Kya? Do baje ki meeting? Cancel karwado…ha…teen baje ki bhi…jo kaha hain woh karo

Taj notices that his boss is very frustrated…he aks Dk if he is ok…

Dk : Ha mujhe kya hoga?

Taj: nahi woh aapne saari meeting cancel karwadi…..to..

Dk : Ha woh mein bahut thaka hua ho..bus..aur kuch nahi

Taj: (nosey) Sir..maine suna hai ke kal aap kisi party mein gaye the. Aur waha pe bahut saari ladkiyah bhi thi

Dk: Ha who to thi..lekin tum yeh kyun puch rahe ho?

Taj: Nahi woh…..woh mein to sirf…

Dk : Kya ..woh…woh mein kar rahe ho! Saaf saaf batao kya baat hain

Taj: Woh actu…(dk cuts him off)

Dk: yeh kya khadi khadi woh who bol rahe ho

Dk: Actaully mein yeh jaanna chahta tha key eh aap kaise karte ho…mera matlab hain ki saari ladikiyah (slows) aapke pichhee….

Dk: (laughs) mere picche kyun bhagti hain? (laughs again) Yeh sawal ka jawab to sirf tumhe who ladkiya hi de sakti hain!😆

Taj: Aap kitne lucky hain jo aapko itni saari ladkiya pyar karti hain….kai logo ko to ek ladki bhi naseeb nahi hoti (referring to himself….😆.lol)….to kya aaap un saari ladkiyo se pyar karte ho?

Dk: (cracks up) Pyaar ? Dk aur Pyaar? (cracks up again) Dk Seghal aisi beduki baatoon par vishwas nahi karta…tum to kitne saalo se mujhe jaante ho…tumhe itna bhi nahi pata ke pyar aur haar Dk ki dictionary mein nahi hain!

Taj: Lekin sir, aap to itni saari ladkiyoh se milte ho, kitno partiyo mein bhi jaate hoon…koi to aisi ladki hogi jisse aap pasand karte ho..

Dk: (laughs) Nahi, aisi to koi nahi hain

Taj: But sir, koi to aisi ladki hogi, jisko dekh kar aapke hosh udgaye ho?

Dk: Is duniya mein aisi koi ladki paida nahi huyee hain jo Dk ke hosh udda de!(oh really😉)

A WHITE FLASHHHHHHHHHHH

A girl, with long straight hair, is walking towards her window in a RED nighty. Her back is towards the camera, so we can't see her face. She goes and opens the curtains and stretches her arms. Her face is still not shown!

Taj: To kya aapki koi Dreamgirl nahi hain?

Dk: Meri dreamgirl? ? (serious) Thi naaa…meinehamesha se socha tha ek din…..EK DIN woh mere saamne zaroor aayegi..😳

FLASHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

The girl is still at the window. Suddenly, a blow of wind hits her face. She closes her eyes. The camera focuses on her closed eyes…but you still cant see her entire face..just her closed eyes…

Dk: Lekin woh mere saamne kabhi nahi aayi…..aur isliyeh mein pyaar par vishwas nahi karta

Taj: Lekin sir, aapko aisa kyun lagta hain ke who aapko nahi milegi. Agar woh is duniya mein hain, to woh aapko zaroor milegi!

Dk: Agar woh is duniya mein hain to kaha hain?

FLASHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

The girl is still at the window. Suddenly, another heavy blow of wind hits her face and all of her blows on her face. The camera focuses on her face, but we still can't see her face, as her face is covered with her hair. She puts her hand on her face to move her hair…

Dk: Kaun hain woh ladki?

No flash this time!

Someone from the back calls " Dishaa" The girl in the blue nighty finally turns around with her hair swinging in the air. And we finally get to see her face. Yes guys, its none other than the beautiful, altra cool Chavi Mittal, the heroine of our movie!

In teh next scene they'll meet..its a fimli takkar.😉.so Stay tuned!

Bomby!

arree lo batau.. yeh red nightie blue kaisi ban gayee??

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Posted: 20 years ago
#44

Bravo 👏👍🏼

Good in the movie DK is not lame... He is in full form and swing.. I like it like that 😳

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Thanks guys...

memsaab...sorry yaar..pata nahi likte likte laal nighty kab blue ho gayi😆

guli...Oh trust I had to stop right there...cuz Disha is going to be slapping Dk...😆..

keep teh comments/feedback/compalints (like memsab's😉) coming!

Tumhari Bomby!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#46
very good keep it up, and write the next part soon

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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naughty naughty bomby 😉😆

I like the line "likte likte laal nighty kaise blue hogayi" 😳

Pls do continue.. we love your writing style and ideas.. it is much better than the real serial which is very depressing. 😭

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Scene 6

Scene starts out with disha madam in the air..and our Hottie smiling at her naughtily. He slowly puts her down. They are face to face now. Everyone in the club is quiet and is waiting for the 2. Dk is still smiling and is still holding her by her waist😉, when our D lady, who looks like she is about to start world war 3 , fakely smiles at him. He gives a bigger smile and to his astonishment, D lady then gives him a big, loud thapad (slap) on his right cheek.😕 Dk is taken aback. His hand automicatically lands on his cute red cheek. 😭..(awww ..poor hottie😭)and before Dk could say anything

Disha: (loud and angry tone) Tumhari heemat kaise hui mujhe cho ne ki.....Agar ainda se mujhe apni shakal bhi dhekaai to mujhse boora aur koi nahi hoga..

Disha's friends crowd around her and whsiper to her..."Disha ..jaane do...chalo yahase.."

Disha: (adamant) Kya samajte ho to apne aap ko....agar tum Dk seghal ho to ....jab chaho...jaha chaho...kuch bhi kar sakte ho???.....Mr Dk seghal..aurat ko kabhi kamzoor mat samjhana....woh aapki private property nahi hain! (goes closer to him and looks at him in the eye) meri baat gaur se suno...ainda se kisi ladki ko choone se pehle ...soo (100) baar soch na...soo baar..samjhe!

Dk just stands there looking helpless....while disha along with her friends leaves in a puff of smoke!

Disha and her freinds are walking outside the club

Pooja: Oh come on disha, ab bhool bhi jao...sirf dance hi to kar raha tha woh tumhare saath..aur us bechare ko thapad maar diya tumne

Disha: (mad) Bechara, my foot! Sharam naam ki to cheez hi nahi us insaan mein..dekha nahi kaise sari ladkiyo ke saath dance kar raha tha...mere mana karne ke bawajoot bhi m ere saath zabardasti dance karne laga...

Shilpa: Oh comeone...bhool bho jao usse (when Dk enters)

All of her friends stop anmd turn towards DK, while Disha stands there with her back towwards him and with her hands folded😆(my my my..does she get pissed or what)

Dk goes and stands behind disha, without looking at her..

Dk : (hesitant) I am....I...I am sorry...meine aapke saath bahut badameesi ki...mujhe aapke saath zabarzasti nahi karni chahiyeh thi....mein apni galti ke liyeh aap se maafee mangta hoo(puts hsi head down)...I am really sorry ( looks up)

Disha: Inne kehte to ke mujhe inn se koi baat nahi karni!

Dk: please....I am really sorry...

Shilpa goes and puts a hand on Disha's shoulder....Disha turns around and faces DK.

Disha: (smiles a liitle) It's Ok! Actually, I am sorry...woh meri waje ander aapki itni beyzyadee....

Dk: arre nahi nahi...aapne bilkool theek kiya...ab taubara kissi aur ladki ke sath aise karne se pehle soo baar sochonga!

All laugh

Pooja: Hi I am pooja (shakes hands with Dk)

Dk: hi

Shilpa: mein shilpa (shakes hands with him)

Kavita: Kavita( shakes hands)

Dk: hi

Disha: mein..

Dk: (cuts her off) Dishaa! Right? (smiles and moves his hand forward to shake)

Disha: (smiles and shakes hands with him) right!

The camera focuses on their hands...and the scene ends there

Tumhari bombY!



Edited for bad use of language


Edited by samy74 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wah wah Bomby kahani kya banayi ... 👏 👏 👏
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Scene 7

A week later...

Dk is sitting in his office (kanaka) thinking about disha😳. He gets flashbacks of disha when she swung her hair in the car, when she was dancing on "Lucky lips", when she fell on top of him😉. He gets more and more lost in his world and plays around with the paper weight and smiles liek CRAZY to himself! Just then someone knocks the door..

Dk: (without lookking up) Come in

Taj: Sir, mujhe aapse kuch papers sign karwaane the...(gives him soem papers)..yeh rahe..

Dk: (happily) sure! (starts signing them)

Taj: (Nosy..as usual😆) Kyaa baat hain sir, aaj aap bade khush nazar aa rahe hain😉?

Dk: (smiles at taj) Samajhdaar ho! (nods his head)

Taj: (proud) Sir...sab aap hi ki meher baani hain

Dk: (shocked) ha?

Taj: (asahamed) Oh, sorry sir..

Dk: (laughs) Koi baat nahi Taj..koi baat nhai..aaj tum jo chaho...keh sakte ho!

Taj: Sir....Koi khaas baat😉? (here he goes again!)

Dk: (takes a deep breath) Khaas baat to hain (streches...😉 and rests his head on the chair..looking upwards) mujhe jiski itne saalo se talaash thi..woh mujhe mil gayi hain...(khayalo mein)

Taj: (excited since he just loves garma garm khabar😆) Matlab...matlab aapki dreamgirl?

Dk: (blushes) ha meri sapno ki raani...😳😳...(starts complaing) .ab to mujhe raat mein hi nahi, din mein bhi uska chehra nazar aata hain....jaha dekho bas wohi nazar aati...kabhi ghar mein to..kabhi office mein...kuch khane nahi deti...swimming karne nahi deti...naahe nahi deti..soone nahi deti...bus har jaga mujhe wohi nazar aati hain...

Taj: Arre sir, yeh saare lakshan to ek hi bemaari ke hain!

Dk: (worried) Bemaari?

Taj: Lovearia! Mere ek doost ko mein yahi bemaari huye thi...woh usse har jaga dhikti thi..yaha tak ki..ek baar to usne apni baai (maid) mein woh ladki nazar aayi

Dk: (getting more worried) Kya baat kar rahe ho? Ab mujhe kya karna chahiyeh..

Taj: Is bemaari ka to sirf ek hi elaag hain

Dk: Kya?

Taj: Khud woh ladki! Jab tab tak woh ladki hamesha hamesha ke liyeh aapki nahi ho jaati hain...tab tak woh aapke khabbo mein aati hi rahegi...

Dk: Khaabo mein to aati hi hain.....(puts his palms under his head ...which is resting on his chair) ..pata nahi...meri zindagi mein kab aayegi...(gets lost in his own world)

Taj: Kya woh bhi aapse itna hi pyaar karti hain...Jitna aap usse?

Dk: (Cracks up) ..Pyaar?? Woh to mujhse nafrat karti thi....humari pehli mulakaat may usne mujhe besharam kaha...doosri mein mujhpar aur naraz huyee...aur teezri mein mujhe thapad maara..😆

Taj: (shocked) Kya usne aapko thapad mara?? Aur aapne kuch nahi kiya?

Dk: Mein kya karta...... ( slow soft tone ) Jabhi mein usse dekha ho....najane mujhe kya ho jata hain...uski aankhien...(gets more lost😳) uski aankhoon may aisa khoo jata hoon ..ke mujhe kuch aur nahi sujta...bus man hota hain ke mein ussi ko dekhta raho...Jo woh karti hain..joh woh karti hain...mujhe sab achha lagta hain...sab..😳😳.(who is completely lost in his own world)

Taj: (smiling) Sir...(no respone from our hero) SIRRR..

Dk: (comes out of his dream world) haa?

Taj: Sir mein chalta hoon....aapki meeting jo shuro hone wali hain

Dk: meeting? Kaunsi meeting?

Taj: ( thinking to himself "yeh loveria bhi na...aache se acche insaan ko bhi nahi chodti"😆) who mehta and mehta waali meeting..

Dk: Woh aaj hain (puzzled) ...accha cancel kardo

Taj: lekin sir...

Dk: Tajj....aaj saari meetings cancel karwado...understand?

Taj: Ok sir...(leaves)

DK again relaxes on his chair...with his hands under his head...and closes his eyes...and gets lost in his dream world...

Uski dream mein kyaa hota hain? jaane ke liyeh mere next scene ka intezaar kijiyeh..

Tumhari BombY!


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