ARIYA:An Odyssey of love[part-30(last part)page-132;NOTE-140page] - Page 48

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing prohelika..
superb update...riya in office..arjun won't leave her..!!!
shashy an undercover cop?????
very well written
loved it to bits...can't wait to read more
update soon..!!
Edited by anahita.095 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for late comment...
so she badly missing him...
update soon..waiting for next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!
Riya back! 😳
Continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eagerly waiting for the nxt update.
Plzzz continue soon.
Aks13 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Where r u dr?????

Long time no update.

Eagerly waiting.

Plzzz continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello everyone :)
I am so sorry for the delay...for some unavoidable reason i couldn't post the next part of this story till now. But i promise,i will post the next two part at 27 june.
Again,so sorry for the delay.
Thank you all. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its ok dr n I m eagerly waiting for the nxt part.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello everyone!!sooo sorry for the late. Here's another part…hope u like it.

PART—21

Riya follows arjun & called him.

Riya:sir,please wait……

Arjun was about to enter his cabin.he just stopped & turned towards riya with a angry face.

Riya:sir…why u r so mad at me??i m ok…that's why I came.

Arjun:oh really??!! U r ok??2 days earlier u r next to death…u know we all r worried for u…u know what the hell was my condition??& now u…came to join the office!!riya,it's field job…here's so many complication…

Riya:sir,I know .but it's my job & I accept it.so complication isn't a matter to me..

Arjun:but riya…it's not ur research desk.thats why I always tell u to go back on ur old job..at least u can rest enough & take care of urself…

Riya: 1 minute… now u r acting crazy sir!seems like that u r just want me to stay at the home for forever!!

Arjun:I didn't mean it

Riya: of course u did! U r acting like a dominating husband rather than a police officer..

Arjun:what?!i just tell u the truth… u r not for here..u should go back to ur old job.

Riya[angrily]; u r not the one who can select what I deserve or not,& where will I stay or not… ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte..sir

Riya leaves the place angrily.& arjun just standing there in half shocked & half angry mood.

Rathore,shree,chotu also saw their war from far distance.shree & chotu want to go to riya but just then commissioner sir come.so all ETF member come to the outside of interrogation room.after a meeting alone with shashy.. commissioner sir called all members.

Commissioner: team… she isn't the person u thought.actually,she is the 3rd member of the secret team…

Rathore:so,she is a cop… & we waste our time on wrong person.

Shashy[angrily];& also spoil my 1 years hardwork as an undercover cop…

Rathore:sorry..we don't know that…………

Commissioner: actually, it's our fault.just communication gap….sorry to everyone.

Shashy:it's ok sir…may I go now..please??

Commissioner: yes..just one minute..[looking at etf team] team…this is Ayesha Kapoor.& Ayesha meet the ETF team.

Then he introduce her to everyone.after that she& commissioner sir leave the place quickly.

Rathore goes to talk with arjun.

Rathore:what is it,rawte?

Arjun:what?!

Rathore:u know what I mean…why u always tell riya to go to research desk again?! U know,it's hurt her.

Arjun[angrily]:again u r interfering in my personal matter ……sir!

Rathore[after controlling his anger]:no… ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte. Today I m here for ur misbehave with my team member.in here,u & riya r colleague.so u should not talk with her in that way.

Arjun[softly]:sam… even both u & I know that field job is too risky for her.

Rathore: arjun..she is an ETF member..she can handle everything…

Anyway..i don't want to argue with u.but I think u should go to her & say sorry.

Arjun:sorry???!!!

Rathore: am I talking in a Greek language?!then why don't u get it?!!ofcourse u have to say sorry to her! Otherwise,the matter will be worst,brother.

Rathore leaves the place.arjun also realize that he should say sorry to her.so he goes to her cabin.but she wasn't there.

[ETF canteen]

Riya's mood is very off.so shree & chotu want to cheer her up.shree gives her a cup of coffee.the three r sitting together.

Shree:ri… didn't I make a wonderfull coffee today??

Riya didn't answer.

Chotu:shree…u r right but just u hav to say worst coffee in the place of wonderfull coffee…

Shree;what did u say?!!u never make anything…even u snetch my coffee all the time.but u always taunt me.not fair…isn't it riya??

But riya didn't react on their tom & jerry fight.so they feel bad for her.suddenly riya start to talk…

Riya:why he always like that??!!

Chotu;forget it now… we all know him…he is..

Riya:but I thought he changed!ofcourse I was wrong!

Shree:hey riya!it's not like that.sir was just worried about u……

Riya:no…he is just determind to see me in the research desk..

Shree;of course not, Ri..

Riya:of course it is,shree! & by the way….. why u r taking his side??u always taunt me as mrs.khadus rawte.. & now u r taking that khadus side ???

Shree:no, I am taking my best friend side…riya. Cause he & u r in the same side now.

Chotu:yes riya…shree is right.

{suddenly chotu see that arjun is coming towards them.he is still far from them}

Chotu[in low voice]:what the hell he is doing here???!!!

Everybody see that arjun is coming to them.riya make an angry face.

Chotu:I think he couldn't get his cutting chai…so he come there to take coffee!

Shree;coffee & arjun sir???!!! Stupid…why don't u get it on time?

Chotu;now what I did or miss??

Shree; arjun sir comes here to talk with Ri… & say her sorry.

Riya;impossible!!

Shree:no madam… I m sure about it!want to bet??

Riya:done.

Shree; ok, then if I win ….then u & I will go to see our shoping mall's sister-in-law. & we will eat lunch with her on chotu's treat.

Chotu;what??!! Why u guys involving me in ur bet?!!i m not going to give u a treat

Shree:u can't deny in front of our sister-in-law… isn't it riya?

Riya:yes!!

Chotu: why u guys always do the unfair thing to me! I am just an infant(child)!!

Shree:oye!!!did u see ur size,mera bheem??Infant or u?!!

Riya & shree start laughing.

Just then arjun enter.

Shree;hello, sir!

Riya stopped smiling & go back in the angry mood. Shree is about to leave the room to give the couple some moment alone.but chotu didn't move at all from his place.he just happily drinking his coffee.

Shree[in low voice to chotu]:why u r still sitting here??let's go

Chotu;wait shree…let me finish my coffee first.

Shree:why??!! Baba, can't U drink ur coffee in another room??

Chotu:but…just little left so I thought…

Shree:let's go ……stupid.i'll explain u latter.

They leave.now just arjun & riya on that room…

1st they didn't talk with one another.arjun take a glass of water & drink it.in the mean time riya is about to leave the room with her cup of coffee.arjun see that riya is leaving.so he blocked her road.riya try to avoid him & she moves to cross him.but he again block the road.now riya start talking..

Riya[angry face]:what????!!!

Arjun[hesitantly]:actually……I …{he try to clear his voice}……did u take the case details from shree??then finish it's work & give it to me.

Riya[on her mind]: khadus!!can't even say sorry for his rude behave.now come here for case file!unbelievable!!

Arjun: did u just say something??

Riya[on her mind]:oh!! Great..now he start to read my mind!no mr. khadus..i am not going to talk with u…… never!!unless u say sorry to me!

Riya[with angry tone]: No…sir!

Arjun:I thought…u say something.

Riya think arjun finished his conversation.so she again start to leave.& arjun again block her road.

Arjun:ah..did u take ur medicine on time??

Riya; sir…is it case relataded question??!!

Arjun;no…I just asking. Why u r talking like that??

Riya:am I talking in a wrong way??!!ok great… then u can have a reason to send me back at the research desk…sir!!congratulation!!

Riya now overtake arjun to leave the room. Suddenly arjun hold riya's hand & pulled her towards him.riya is just shocked.& her hands coffee cup is already empty for sudden turning.it's all spilt on the floor.

Riya: sir…what..

Riya couldn't finished cause arjun is now more close to her.she just lost in his eyes.arjun's left hand on riya's waist & right hand holding riya's hand.he too lost in riya's eyes.he takes the coffee mug from her hand & keep it to the table.then he hold her hand softly & look at her very passionately..

Arjun: sorry…… riya.

1st riya couldn't say anything.then with a sweet smile she start to talk..

Riya: r u really say sorry to me or it's just my illusion??!!!

Arjun get so close to her that there was no spase between their nose. Riya get a shivering for his closeness.she close her eyes.arjun leaves her hand & she keep it on arjun's shoulder. Arjun touch riya's face with the spare hand…… & called riya very softly.

Arjun: riya……riya…?

Riya open her eyes..

Arjun: baba…I am so sorry.. I shouldn't talk with u like that…I am really…

Riya: it's ok……

Arjun: I just don't want to see u on that situation…

Riya; it'll never happen again…… cause u r with me now. Won't u stay like that forever??

Arjun: I will………

Just then riya's phone ring on full volume……it's Chotu's call!!

Arjun riya both start to laugh..

Arjun: I think I hav to break the promise right now…cause chotu is calling u!! [then in a serious mode] but… I promise, I'll never ever leave ur side until the end of my day.

Riya was enjoying arjun's lovely face.cause when he smile… he looks too lovely that no one can take off their eyes from his face. But when arjun go back to his serious mood & talking about his last day.. she get mad at him again.

Riya: hey!! Don't dare to talk about ur last day… I don't like it at all. Just live…just be with me.why fear about the end??

Arjun; ok…baba!! I m not gonna tell it again! Happy??

Riya gives her lovely smile.

Arjun: now pick up the phone!!

Arjun gives a kiss to riya's forehead & leaves the room.riya attend the call.

[to be continue]

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Posted: 12 years ago
awww so cute ...the feelings are poring now so so cute
pls pls next part jaldi update karo
hope they are able to take the next step and move forward
Edited by AnjuRish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Super duper update dr.

Loved Arjun's concern for Riya.

Their little bit nok-jhok was nice.

Wow she was the cop Aisha kapoor.

Poor gal caz of thm her cover blew up.

Will she join ETF or not?????

Waaooo Rathod made him realised his mistake n told him to say sorry to Riya.

The way Choree tried to made her smile was lovely.

Wow Arjun said sorry to her

Loved Ariya cute little moments.

Arrrgghh Chotu disturbed thm. Can't he made a call after sometime.

Loved it!!!!!

Eagerly waiting for the nxt part.

Thanks for pm.

Continue soon.

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