ARIYA:An Odyssey of love[part-30(last part)page-132;NOTE-140page] - Page 36

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Posted: 12 years ago

ooww... such a cute part...plzz update soon...i loved it!!😃😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part...so Arjun helped to mend Riya's relation with her mom... how sweet... update soon...
Edited by Leki - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
NYC update... Jus want dere relation to improve jus don Lyk dere formal behviour..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello everyone……back with another part. So sorry if I make any mistake……

& a big thanks to everyone for liking it till now.

PART—16

After family reunion,arjun & riya left for crime scene.rathore,shree&chotu are already there.when arjun make his exits from the car to the crime scene,shree sees him&hide himself from arjun after remembering last night conversation.

Rathore:u were right rawte.it was manav[a criminal from running case] who runs the circuit.but he was already gone from here when we came here.just his friend shekhar was there.&we arrest him.

Arjun:let's check the area rathore,may be we get some clue.

Rathore:already did.i think he didn't know yet that we r after him.may be he just doing his routine work.

Arjun:may be.so we could easily find him.take number from his friend&trace his location.when he'll reach in his destination,we'll catch him on red handed.where is shree?

Rathore:just was here……

Chotu:shree was collecting the picture,now where is he?

Just then riya sees him.he is hiding himself from them & try to get out from there.he is beside the SUV van.riya doesn't say anything to anyone,just give a signale to chotu& he got it.

Shree[on his mind]:God!just save me today.give a chance to reach to my car&I'll run away from here.then I'll call rathore sir to inform that I m too ill to work today.i don't want to face"samjhe ye samjhau",at least today!

Shree get into his car & try to start it.but,it's not starting.rathore call on shree's mobile.& they hear his ring tone.

Rathore:strange!why didn't shree pick up the phone?

Then they all follow the ring tone & end up to shree's car.

Shree is just nervous& shocked to see them.

Rathore:what the hell u r doing shree?i was calling u from a long time.

Shree make an exits from his car& says

Shree:actually sir,I was testing my car if it's ok.

Arjun:leave it shree,u hav a big things to do.trace manav location.

Shree:ok,sir.

Arjun:& by the way shree, thanks.u did a great job last night.

Arjun & rathore leaves from there.

Chotu:what happen,shreekant sen?was u trying to run away?

Shree:of course not!why should i?

Riya:chotu!he wasn't running.just spending some romantic quality time with his "princess" who never start whenever he needs her!

Chotu&riya start to laugh.

Shree:what a "ghatiya" joke! No one can laugh on it even u give them tickle!

Chotu:don't mind,yar! By the way, it seems that arjun sir forget the last night!

Riya:no.he can't!but u know,he isn't too hard that he looks like from outside.that's why he ignore that talk & thanks shree for last night.

Shree:I don't want to know ,what is arjun sir,hard/soft.

Mujhe unke sath thodi ghar basana hai!ri,ye teri kam hai.so u carry on ur mission 'knowing arjun sir'.i m good at doing work with him even at 3.35am!but,really I was shocked when he thanked me! He is just a man hard to read!

Chotu:yeah.anyway,forget the complicated topic yar.let's solve the case quickly.then I can get a long break…… beside ,tomorrow is Sunday.

Riya:oh!hay,I just totally forgot.tomorrow is chotu's valentines day!!

Shree:ha,yar.main bhi vul gaya tha. Our hero always goes to the mall at 11.30 am to meet our would be sister-in-law…… how romantic date!what a timetable!just like a daily soap.

Riya:no,shree.correction , like a weekly soap.

By the way chotu,how long u just see her by hiding?it's long time yar.please fixed a real date.& we also hav the right to see her,isn't it shree?

Shree:correct!

Chotu:oh!god.stop it yar.don't u guys hav any work?!

Chotu leaves the place shyly.riya & shree start to smile by his that condition.

After sometimes shree trace manav location & ETF follow him.they enter his place.there r some other people from manav side.they all start to fight.in that fight,riya was pretty god until a person want to stub her from back side.but arjun sees him on time&save riya from heavy injury.though her arm slightly get cut by that attack.at last they capture everyone&hand over them to local police.shree gives riya 1st aid.arjun is standing beside riya& thinking about something.

When the man about to hit riya with knife he just got the flash back of roshni's death.

Rathore comes to riya.

Rathore;r u ok riya?

Riya:yes sir.i am good.

Arjun feel irritate by this word "good"

Arjun:good!?after cutting urself?r u out of ur mind?what'll happen if ………u just too irresponsible. Why r u working here?why!?u r good in research desk,so go there!

Riya[angrily]:sir,why r u shouting at me?!if someone attack from back,what can I do?

Arjun:riya,there is no place of "if"in field job.who m I talking to!

Arjun leaves the place angrily.riya is crying for this behavior.after doing her all job at office,riya reach home.

Arjun isn't come there yet.he didn't even come to the office.riya wait for him.she is tensed.coz,he leaves the place angrily.even after 1am of night,arjun didn't come.now her tension turns into fear.

Riya:god!arjun sir,where r u?!

[to be continue]

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Posted: 12 years ago
yay.. Me frst to commnt..
So ok jus read last four updates..
Frst rathore is reallie nice..
Convo between ri nd rathore nd how rathore said welcme to family was so nice..
Den bichara shree arjun woke hm up at 3:35 am.. Nd upr se phne was on speaker... Nd den how arjun cares for ri...
Den lovd da way how arjun smjhofyng ri.. Nd made her realize her mistake ... Den lol shree was running nd hiding frm arjun.. Nd arjun complimntd shree.. Wow..
Trio was awesome..
Lovd again da care arjun shwd towards ri..bt nw where is arjun.. Continue soon :)
Edited by aroojarain - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res.

**edited**

I love how this story is proceeding.

The fact that Arjun was so upset about Riya nearly getting stabbed with a knife, process that he's attached to her and maybe even loves her, almost as much as he did Roshni.

Looking forward to how he reacts to that realization.
Edited by Arya1991 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
good job, i totally lved your concept , love this story ver much,
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi dear🤗...too good yaar...👏👏👏...arjun saved riya from getting stabbed obvoiusly he was tensed abut riya so reacted that way...typical arjun...but yaar arjun is too good na...but only riya can understand her...hust made ariya together...n update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
yar,love the way u write.it's just always awesome to read ur update.
for todays part...
i love shree's every dialogue
i love the bonding between riya-chotu-shree
i love how arjun care for riya!!though he was angry,but it didn't hide his love/care for riya.
i love how he saves her...
but the most important things, where is arjun??????
so plz,update soon.i m eagerly waiting for ur nxt part.plz,don't be late this time.plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!
& thank u sooo much for the pm.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update :) loved it
poor shree was so scared of arjun
arjun complimented him 😆
loved riya's dialogue "he wan't running just spending some romantic quality time with his "princess" who never starts whenever he needs her"
loved trio's conversation
chotu's valentines day 😆
thank god arjun saved her on the right time
arjun shouted on riya :(
hope arjun is fine
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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