Swaron SS:Missing Life...[Chap 11 Pg 70]

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Sunil

@Suni1986

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

why u r nervous yar that was amazing update
swayam scooped her up in his arms n not ready to put her down as he possessively hold her
they love each other madly, they want to feel each other, want 2 touch each other, want 2 feel warmth of each other presence n want 2 shower all their love for each other.
sharon understanding for his love was amazing
loved it

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Kanchan Agrawal

@KaNcHaN_06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

omg u r too gud ...😊😃

u r an outstanding writer...👏

n plz dont feel nervous at all...u r very good...😊

keep😊

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

maggie di ☺️ thodi der mai batati hu okk

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Sorry no time for looonnngg comment... but awesome totally loved it..!

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Kanchan Agrawal

@KaNcHaN_06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

actuall its very hooot...☺️

thanks for the pm...

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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

beautiful update..👏👏
swaRon secure😉

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Nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Awesome update :D thanks for the pm

Nikki <3

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Rahul Gupta

@ramsgupt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Awesome ...👏

But, in my visualization while reading .. it was TanHa all over it... 😆

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paro1311

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

nice long update :)

u kept their innocence intact:) loved the comfort they share.. nd seems so beautiful to be in love like these two. "bahoon ke darmiyan" song was playin in my head all the while. totally romantic

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swapna

@shan16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Res..

Fireee...too hottt Unres... ii just loved this part...the intimacy they share...it was not at all vulgur..it was not lust...it was just their pure love...their intense passion for each other ..the way of telling how much they miss each other ..how much they love each other... ...the most beautiful expereince of life ...making love with each other...well written... i like swayam care n concern..whther sharon hurted or she felt uncomfortable by his action..swayam is so understanding...thinking of sharon comfort each n everry time...

luved how sharon made swayam feel special by this shimla outting...gifts ..small small things she did...so sweet of her...well...our lover boy deserves dis ...every bit of it...swaron is just made for each other..n dis u have conveyed very well from this part...

"
Swayam: but we can take this slowly'

Sharon puts her palm on his cheek.

Sharon: Swayam, if you are uncomfortable, it's okay. But I really want to feel close
to you. I want to pour out all my love. I want to feel your warmth. I want you to feel
loved. I want to feel being loved. And what difference does it make before and after
marriage. Marriage is nothing but a commitment na, and we are already committed
to each other. And we love each other madly. I know you will never hurt me. I trust
you Swayam and I love you.
"

Swayam (whisper): we fit so perfectly into each other.

Sharon blushed and hid herself in his arms again.

She murmured against his chest,

Sharon (murmur): yes, we do. After all we are just meant to be together.

truely said...m loving it plz update next part sooon...

Edited by shan16 - 12 years ago