Tera liya hum jiya~* A&K*~Cont. pg10 - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
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okay guyz i'm back 😊

Angad is in his room thinking about kripa and in the background the sad version of kyph is playing.

Aliaya is in her room she looks at the clock its 6:00 am jumps off her bed and says mar gaya! and runs down the stairs into her car and zooms off she stops at the coffee shop.

Al: Woh abi thak ia kyun nahin?

Aliaya turns around and sees a motercycle coming in the distance. The guy takes off his helmat...... its JOSH!

Al: Josh why are u so late.
J: Just chill.
Al: how mudje kar par 7:00am ponchna hai and it 6:35am.
J: you called me..... what happended?

Aliaya tells him about prithvi.

J: oh shit.
Al: aur hum to angad ko jantha hai woh butoo....
J: Mera paas ek plan hai
Al: wow this must be new for u
J: what?
Al: nothing

Josh tells the plan to aliaya.

Al: great idea phir raat ko milaga.

they both go there seperate ways. Aliaya walks in her house and sees angad.

A: kanhan thi?
Al: bagel......... bagel lana
A: suba ke 9:00 bug gaya kahan thi?
Al: bagel lena.
A: tum bhi kabhi..........

Angad looks mad and takes a seat on his couch.

Al: Angad kya tum kripa aur......
A: Aliaya stop.
Al: bhai chill
A: Aliaya.......

the bell rings.

Al: mein dekthi hoon.Kripa!
K: its nine we're late 4 college.
Al: budoo aj chuta ka din hai its Sunday!
K: oops.... phir mein chalthi hoon

Aliaya turns around and sees angad still sitting on the counch.

Al: kripa ruko.... undar nahin augi?
K: okay......

kripa walks in and angad gets up to leave.

Al: bhai.... ek minute meina tumha dono kuch poochna tha.
A: what?
Al: theres a really big party tonight at the beach aur kripa u have to cum.
K: okay me and u like always.
Al: actually theres a problem...... mein josh ke saath ja rahi hoon aur tum akeli kaisa jow gi? its not safe. so meina socha bhai can u take her?
A: mudje nahin jaana.
K: please angad mudje le jaana.

< sad version of kyph plays>

Al: then its setteled.

Angad walks outside of the house.

Al: Kripa lets go shopping! mein apna cell aur purse lekaer athi hoon..... you wait in the car.
K: okay.

kripa walks outside and sees angad crying and gets confused. She calls his name he looks at her gets in his car and zooms off.

<sad version of kyph plays>

Aliaya is in her room. she dials a number.

Al: step one complete!
J: your great.
Al: woh to mein hoon hi.
J: aga aga tekthi jaana kya hoga.
Al: okay bye c u tonight.

Aliaya hangs up the phone and smirks 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
here it is : 😊

Kripa is standing in the morning sunlight amazed by the fact how angad just rushed off. Kripa has a what the hell expression on her face. Aliaya comes outside and asks her whats wrong. Kripa is unable to answer the question and suggests to go shopping. Aliaya is confused but just slides it by with her whatever attitude.

Aliaya and Kripa are both at the mall. The have gone into many western shops and have bought tons of clothes. Kripa stops by in front of an Indian boutique and calls Aliaya over.

K: Aliaya, can we go in? I want to try something on.
A: sure go ahead.

Kripa ignores Aliaya sarcasm and joyfully goes into the shop and choses the most beautiful pajama suit.

Al: wow kripa you look great…… blue is really your colour.
K: I know! That's why I'm going to wear this to the party tonight.
Al: but why? You bought so many western clothes, why don't you wear those?
K: No, I that would be stupidity, I think this suits me better.
Al: teek hai rani saiba, ab chala its 6:00 pm aur huma 8:00 pm se pehla pehla jaana hai. Tum aur angad 8:00 ajana. That's when the party begins.
K: why are you going so early?
Al: dunno, josh said he has some surprise for me, kher ine baatien ko choro huma jaana hai.
K: teek hai.

Aliaya ans kripa drive home. Kripa drops off Aliaya and tells her to remind angad to pick her up at 8:00 and he must not be late.

At the khanna house Aliaya is getting ready. She puts on some clothes and curls her hair. She ready to go when she recives a phone call.

Al: hello?
J: mein josh bol raha hoon. 7:30 pm hona wala hai. I'll be ther in 2 minutes u know what to do.
Al: teek hai.

Aliaya hangs up the phone and walks over to angads room.

Al: bhai, I know what you're going through but you got to pick kripa up at 8:00, here are the directions.

A: I don't want to go.

Al: if u don't want to go don't. but remember by doing this you're breaking kripa's heart not mine.
< sad version of kyph plaus>

Aliaya goes outside and sees josh.

Al: u got the stuff?

J: yeah

Josh goes under the car and works his magic.

J: hoga

Aliaya looks at josh: Ab aiga maaza.

J: chalo kahin angad dekh na laye.

Aliaya and josh leave from there. Angad gets into his car and drives over to kripa's house. He knocks on her door. She opens it. Angad looks at her and is astonished by the way she looks.

K: lets go!

Angad quietly sits back into his car and drives off still having his eye on kripa. And in the background the song rabba mera rabba plays. By now angad and kripa were deep into the woods. It had been hours since they left ( they were following Aliaya's directions) Just then the car stops. Angad is like what the hell.

A: Mien dekhtha hoon.

He steps out of the car and relizes all the oil leaked. And then all of a sudden rain comes pouring down with thunder and lightning.

A: oh shit! We can't get a mechanic at this hour and there is no cell network here.
K: Ab kya kara? Yahaan to bahut tund hai.
A: I don't know, yahaan to kuch hai bhi nahin.
K: Wahan chaltha hai use glass house mein.
A: teek hai chalo.

Kripa and angad run in the pouring rain over to the glass house. Just then kripa trips in the mud and falls into angads arms and theres rain puring over there heads.

A: Are you okay?

Kripa keeps looking into angad's eyes and the sad version of kyph plays in the background.

to be continued.........
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
Just started reading the fanfic must say its going fantastic.....cont sooooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
👏👏LOved itttt 🤗 Josh and aliya are sooo naughtyyy😆😳😳Wonder what happens next 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
😊 hey !! i am a new reader of your fan-fic must say your fan-fic rocks !! keep it up and continue soonn !! i am waiting
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
guyz i really busy cuz of rakhi but check tommorow i'll post it 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
hey! i'v jus strtd readin ur fanfic n bravo! 👏 its rely gud so far.. continu soon 😉 xxMWAHxx
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
guyz i'm really sorry but my internet isn't working for my laptop 😭

i'm getting it repaired this weekend so the part surly will be posted monday 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok ! but make sure u posted it on monday ! other wise i am going to be mad !! hehehehe 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey sabzz are you threatning me 😆 well here u go guyz:

Angad and kripa are still in the middle of nowhere standing arm in arm with there eyes locked into one another's. Minutes and seconds go by but the atmosphere around them is completely silent other than the rustling trees and pouring rain. Just then thunder and lightening strike extremely loud which frightens kripa very much. So Kripa quickly clings to angad chest. Angad realizes that she is scared so he gives a tight hug to her. After a few seconds kripa realizes what she is doing and breaks away from her hug to angad. Then she begins to speak.

Kripa: I'm…………..

Angad raises his finger to his lips and says: SHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…………..

Then he lifts kripa up and takes her into the glass house and puts her on a stack of hay
(don't ask me where it came from) and goes to build a fire. He is so busy in making the fire he doesn't notice for one second that kripa is looking passionately at him. But, when angad turns his head into kripa's direction, kripa quickly turns her head to look outside. He notices this smiles, and continues working on the fire. Kripa goes and stands outside in the rain and joyfully feels it, dances in it but then lightening strikes again, she gets scared and runs into the doorway of the glass house. Angad sees this and laughs. She takes her hand and feels the rain pouring directly onto her hand. Then she feels something else. She feels another hand come from behind and that hand clutches kripa and his hand tight and spins her around. She looks at the hand and the person that hand belongs to. She sees that, that person is no other than angad. She looks deeply into his eyes and notices the purity the passion and the respect in his eyes for her.

Kripa thinking to herself: Whats happening to me, not wanting to I still keep getting pulled towards angad why?

Angad thinking to himself: I love you……….. only if you knew.

Kripa turns around to leave and angad grabs her arm and pulls her very close to him. Kripa feels insecure and but shy and runs over to the hay stack and sits down. Angad goes and sits beside her. Both sit there looking into the fire without speaking a word. Then kripa's head comes down on angad's shoulder and she is fast asleep.

On the other hand, Aliaya and Josh are in a restaurant and Aliaya is pacing around infront of the table.

J: Aliaya sit down and eat what are u so worried about.

A: A lot josh. Like what the hell is going on? What are they doing everything.

J: Don't worry.

A: Why? What if nothing happens? Then what? And what if they find out there was no party?
J: Shut up Aliaya. Me and you both know that they love one another right? So don't worry all that needs to happen is kripa needs to realize her love for angad the rest is upto us right?

A: I guess.

J: And leave the party lie to me. I'll deal with that, let me drop you home.

A: Okay.

J: and you know what tomorrow is right? Phase 2 of Operation Milapt. You remember what to do right?

A: Yup!

J: Alright lets go then!

THE NEXT MORNING

Kripa wakes up and notices angad on the phone. When he hangs up he looks at kripa.

A: good! You're awake! I found network for my cell and I called the garage. They'll tow our car and give us a lift. They'll be here any minute so come one.

K: Angad?

A: Yeah?

K:Thanks for taking care of me last night. I always thought of you as Aliaya's older brother…… nothing else but today I see you as a friends.

She puts out her hand angad shakes it.

A: if where friends then there no need to say thanks. Cuz what are friends for?

Kripa smiles at angad and they leave.

KHANNA HOUSE

Alaiya is in her bed as the phone rings.

A: hello?

J: it josh?

A: why did you call me so early?
J: its 10:00 a.m angad and kripa will be home very soon so please get up.

A: teek hai teek hai.

J: SO GET UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Josh hangs up the phone. Aliaya gets dressed and runs downstairs and out the door she sees angad and kripa walking in.

An: kripa wait her I'll get the car keys and give you a lift

K: Okay.

Al: no need for that!

K: why?

Al: bhai, you freshen up and kripa you come and eat something.

K: okay.

Al: btw where were u guyz?

An: the car broke down so we got stuck.

Al: thank god I was so worried. Come kripa lets get something to eat.

Kripa and Aliaya go sit at the dining table. Kripa starts to eat and notices that aliaya seems tensed and worried.

K: Aliaya whats wrong?

Al: nothing.

K: I thought you were my best friend……… I guess I was wrong.

Al: not kripa, well okay this is what happened. Me and josh signed a contract a few months ago with josh's friends dad.

K: And?

Al: Well, it was that in three months we have to find a jodi.

K: a jodi?

Al: yeah a boy and a girl who will be the next singing sensation and three months end on August 16th which is the day after tomorrow and if we don't find them we will have to own his company 5 lakhs.

K: but whats so hard about that? Find a girl who can sing and a guy who can sing.

Al: but I don't know anyone………………………..

K: sure you do!

Al: who? OMG I just remembered you can sing right?

K: I didn't mean………

Al: omg plz kripa do this for me?

Aliaya looks into kripas eyes desperately.

K: okay I'll do it but according to the contract you need partner, a guy.

Al: Bhai can sing he can never say no to you!

K: what?

Al: nothing oh look there comes bhai.

Angad comes down the stairs and looks at aliaya like " what the hell is up with you?" but ignores her and looks at kripa.

An: Kripa lets go.

Al: bhai we need to tell you something.

An: what?

Aliaya tells angad the whole story about the contract.


Al: bhai kripa agreed to help but we still need a guy.

An: And?

Kripa holds angads hand and looks into his eyes: can you help plz ?

An: sure!

Al: Yes! I got my jodi

Angad and kripa are still holding hands and Aliaya is standing in the middle looking at them and smiling.

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