Tera liya hum jiya~* A&K*~Cont. pg10

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Hey guyz 😃 I have this new fan-fic so plz read and tell me how you lyke it!

CHARACTERS:
Angad Khanna- smart, hot guy girls love him but he doesn't lyke the girls. He is looking for that girl that he wll fall in love with the second he sees her... he belives in love. His parents barley have anytime for him and his sister Alaiya. But they live.

Kripa Sharma- smart, cute girl who completly enives men because she thinks they are total jerks. She has a secert crush on someone she has known since she was in diapers but is afraid to admit it. She lived in mumabi but moved to nainital when she was little. Now She lives with her dad in Mumbai since her mother passed away a few years ago.

Alaiya Khanna-Kripa's bestest friend and angad's sister. The two are lyke never a part and love to be around each other. Nothing about them that isn't the same.

Khanna's- Wealthy family a spoiled kids----- just don't have tyme 4 them

Mr. Sharma- kripa's dad will do anything 4 his daughter's khushi. He is the buisnnes partner of Mr. Khanna angad and alaiya's dad!



********STORY STARTS TOMMOROW***********
~~~~ WHOS'S KRIPA'S SECERET LOVE FIND OUT TOMMOROW~~~~
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice stroy kanwer! cont soon please
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow sound cool start the fan fic soon i think it will be an awsome story 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 1~~~****

At the Sharma's

There is a man sitting at the table waiting agrily and looks at his watch and hells KRIPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Then this girl in a beautiful pajami suit runs down the stairs.

Girl: Aiee papaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
she turns around and you see her face its kripa

Kripa: Papa, aliaya mera intizar kar rahi hai mudje college ki admission fees please deydo nahi to mein late ho jo gi.

Mr. Sharma: Yeh lo beta liken......

Kripa: Nashtha key book nahin bye dad!

Kripa gives her dad a big hug and runs to the door prays for a good day in front of her moms pic and runs out the door.

Khanna's house:

A girl in a short skirt and halter top paces back in forth in her living room when a lady in saree drops bye.

Lady: Aliya tumhe beta college nahin jana tum late ho jow gi.

The girl turns and you see that its none other than Aliaya.

Aliaya: Mom mein tho wiasa bhi late ho jana hai vo kripa bhi abhi thak nahin ponchi aur........ COLLEGE KI FEES! mom mudje fees key liya paisa do na!

Naina: Beta mein kam key liya late ho rahi hoon, paisa tumhare bhai se la lena!

Aliaya walks into angads room and you see a guy lifting weights.

Aliya: BHAI!!!!!!!

Angad: aliya what do you need?

Aliya: i need money 4 the college fees.

Angad: Here, take it and reach school safley with kripa, no talking to guyz i'll see u there.

Aliaya gives angad a big hug and goes to her room

Kripa gets out of her car and sees naina.

kripa: autie, kya aliaya ghat par hai?

Naina: yaan, wo angad key kamra mein hai, get her or you'll be late.

Kripa runs in the khanna house and in front of angads door. She takes a deep breath and opens the door when she hears a big bang! then she sees angads face and relizes she just hit him in the face.

Angad: KRIPA!!!!!!!!! tum agi mera dimag khana key liya!

Kripa: I wasn't here 4 u i was here 4 aliaya

Aliaya: Kripa tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho chalo!

kripa gives angad the tounge and walks off with aliaya!

Angad shake it off with a happy smile and walks into his room.

*********** that lovey kyph version plays***********


😛 ~~~~~~ Thats it 😊 i'll continue tommorow, it isn't soo good but somethings happenin tommorow!~~~~~~~~ 😛
Edited by hello64 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Nice part!
But plz cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome start cont soon plz!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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guyz i'm really busy today so you'll have to wait until tommorw 😊

but here's the promo:

Kirpa to Aliaya: Woh a raha hai mera sapna ka raj kumar

( Angad in Shock )

Kya in dona ka rishta hamasha sirf dosti ka hi tha


lotz of lub,

kanwer 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Woah!!!!!!That was a good promo! Its seriuosly making me think about what is gonna happen!
Plz post a part soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome!!!!!!!! i think she might be talking about Angad though!!! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Okay guyz here the next part 😊

In the car:
Aliaya and Kripa are both diriving to there first day to college. The car is quite silent until aliaya starts an "unnessicary conversation"

A: So kripa...... Tum aur Angad.....is there something?
K: WHAT?????!!!!?????
A: Oh come on, stop acting so surprised I've see your behaviour towards one another.
K: Aliaya, whats wrong with you me and angad are just friends, and besides all men are the same other than 2 in this world. Out of the 2 none of there names are angad.
A: Oh really?
K: Shut up aliaya. Yeh lo we're at school and so is your bhai's gang
A: Omg how do i look?
K: Why, you look fine?
A: Thanks I'm going to go and talk to josh!!!!!
K: The fees??????
A: Tum Bar au plz!!!!!!!
K: Fine

Kripa and Aliaya get out of the car and aliaya runs over to the group of guyz on there motercyles and kripa walks into the college. Kripa is just casually walking down the hall when someone walks into her.

K: Ouch..... watch it.... ANGAD! 😡 Anday ho?
A: No, I'm not blind.
K: Then why did you bump into me?
A: Hold on I didn't bump into you, you bumped into me.
K: Oh sure...
A: Kripa just chill okay?Where's aliaya?
K: You know that big flirt who happens to be the best friends of yours that guy that who likes practiclly ever girl on the planent..... shes with him.
A: Kripa! How could you let her talk to him, i don't want her to get in his chakkar.
K: Phir kara kara mera moon kya dekh raha ho? go get her.

Angad goes to get Aliaya while kripa goes to pay the college fees. Angad reaches Aliaya and has a confused look on his face ( the way she is talking to him 😆 )

Al: Oh josh i love your jacket! 😳
J: Thanks, i like yours 2.....
Al: Thanks!

Angad pulls aliaya away, but Aliaya barley notices as she is busy looking at josh!

A: Aliaya what is this?
Al: Kya Bhai?
A: Why are you complimenting josh, and josh's compliment didn't even make sense. Your not even wearing a jacket.
Al: Oh Bhai samja karo, its a compliment from josh.
J: Hey guyz whats going on?
Al: Wo....
Angad cuts of Aliaya: Aliaya was just going over to kripa.
Al: Oh bhai!

Aliaya walks off and josh talks to angad.

J: Hey angad, tum sab ko kripa sey baat karna key liya peg datey ho, why don't you ever go tell her your dil ke baath?

A: josh my man, the problem is i don't know how she feels and as long as i don't know i can't tell her.

Inside the college Aliaya sees kripa and repeating calls her name real loud.

K: kya hua? I'm not deaf!
A: I know... I TALKED TO JOSH! HE COMPLIMENT MY JACKET!

kripa relizes that Aliaya isn't wearing a jaket and rolls her eyes.

A: Aur kripa he asked me to the annual freshman dance! I'm so excited arn't you?

K: Wow! I can't wait! ( kripa says this with sarcasm)
Al: Oh come on kripa, cheer up, go with angad.
K: Why would i go with Angad? Actually why would i go with anyone, i simply enive men! Tum apna pyara josh key saath jo.
Al: kripa chill.

The bell rings.

K: chalo or we'll be late for class!
Al: yup, we only have 2 classes toda history and dance, after that we go home.
K: I know.
Al: well, i was thinking if we could go out for lunch today!
K: fine
Al: promise?
K: Promise.

AFTER CLASS


kripa and Aliaya meet after class.

Al: Kripa chalo lets go, what restaurnt? chinese?
K: Aliaya, my head hurts.
Al: koi baat nahin i'll bring lunch to your house okay? we'll meet up there!
K: okay

Kripa is walking and is about to sit into her car when she sees a girl kissing angad against a wall. Kripa is in great shock, and for some reason a tear flows down her cheek!


~~~~~~~ Promo will be happening next episode so wait and watch! ~~~~~~~

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