Tera liya hum jiya~* A&K*~Cont. pg10 - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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oooh!!! pls cont soon!!!
fab part!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks for replying practically nobody is and i'm trying my best at it😭 it will get better i promise 😊 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great part 👏

plz continue as soon as possible 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome
plzzzzzzzzz continue soon
i think the guy kripa like is going to be ANGAD
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Part 3~~***
As kripa watches in great shock Angad kissing that girl Aliaya also arrives there and sees the girl and angad but doesn't notice kripa but kripa notices aliaya so she wipes her tears gets into her car and zooms off.

At the crime scene 😆 :

Aliaya walks over there angad pushes that girl off of him wipes his lips and spits.

A: Yuck.... what was that?
G: Oh come on it was a kiss?
A: but why ( angad yours sooo cluless 😆 )
G: Cuz i like you and i want to go to the freshmen dance with you.
A: BUT I DON'T 😡 LEAVE ME ALONE!
G: Who needs u angad khanna.

And the crazy girls stomps away! 😆 angad turns around and sees aliaya.

Al: what was that.
A: Didn't u see some stupid girl trying to kiss me. actually she did kiss me...... nasty ( he wipes his lips again 😆 )...... what are you doing here.
Al: oh yeah, i haveto pick up some chinese food me and krpa are having lunch at her place and i was wondering can u give me a ride?
A: Sure lets go.

In the car:

Al: Angad, that girl wanted to go to the freshman dance with you.... why did u say no?
A: i don't know...
Al: Angad, bahi theres something i need to tell you or suggest to you.
A: What is it?
Al: Ask kripa out to the dance.
A: What?!!!!!!!!!!!?????????? why?
Al: Angad shut up, we all know you love her...... josh told me.
A: Josh told you? he said he wouldn't
Al: 😆 😆 Aliaya starts laughing. See, u do love her, josh didn't say anything.Bhai just tell her.
A: I don't know what to say and when to say it.
Al: say it today over lunch. plz bhai 😳
A: teek hai but lets grab lunch first.
Al: okay.

At kripa's house:

kripa walks in thinking about angad and him and that girl shes half way up the staris when her servant/nanny teddy comes.

T: Kripa memsaab?
K: ji teddy?
T: tumhara papa ne tumarha liya message chora hai. He says its very important. it the first message on the answering machine.plz see it.
K: okay.

Kripa walks into her room and turns on the message:

Mr sharma: Hello beta! kaisi ho? maine is liya phone kiya kyunki i will be in london for the next 2 months. Sorry for leaving without notice but beta i have a surprise 4 you. downstairs there is a letter under the phone from someone whom is real specail to u. read it and i know the smile on your face will be priceless. I love you beta.

Kripa walks downstaris and thinks, whats so important in that letter she talkes the letter and has a seat on her couch. She opens the letter and reads out loud.


Dear kripa,
kaisi hai meri jaan? How are you sweety? Without you i swear everything here in naintal is so qeuit. we miss you........ well kripa, i miss u, alot and i swear not one minute can i live with out you, so i'm coming.. when thats for me to know and u to find out so wait and see cuz i'm gunna come when u least excpect it. take care jannaman!
Tumhara best friend,
Prithvi

Kripa does smile at this she is indeed very happy and gets up just as aliaya and angad come in.

K: ALIAYA!
Al: Kya hua kripa?
K: woh araha hai!
Al: kyun?
K: mera spano ka raj kumar!

Angad is in deep shock after hearing this and turns around to leave but stops to hear what shes saying.

K: i used to tell u when i came back from naintal how my neighbour there was so cute and sweet well that guy he's coming!
Al: I thought you were over him?
K: Aliaya when u have a crush on a guy for lyke 6 years as your neighbour, you never get over him.

Angad wipes his tears and leaves.

k: woh angad kahan gaya?
Al: he had to go meet josh.
k: you know aliaya were all happy today me happy that prithvi's coming, u happy that your going to the dance with josh and angad finds love!
Al: what?
k: yeah i saw him kissing some girl.
Al: that was a girl kissing him she wanted to go to the dance with him and decided kissing him was the best thing.
k: so he said yes?
Al: no he said no.
K: oh........... ker chodo lets go eat

Aliaya thinks: bechara angad i should go find him later.

Tanhi the song is playing in the background.
Angad on the other hand is sitting at the park under a tree and and thinking of the tymes hes spent with kripa and kripa saying that her true love prithvi is coming. He crys his little heart out. 😭



~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thats all 4 today 😉 ~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg!!! angu!!!

FAB PART!!! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
awww... poor Angu... i feel really bad for him!! 😭 😭 anyways awesome part 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey great part! bechara angad!
Continue soon! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😭 poor angad
i feel so sad for him

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