SS Manvi and Virat from the beginning part15,16 - Page 41

i like this style.comment or you won't get a pm.i'd surely hv commented if i had the time to read.you chose to flood with updates while i was away .not fair!!!i can't promise to be regular but am promising to comment on each update as soon as i read it.will that do?or i'll have to be regular at any cost?it's just that i love this story.love the way u write.ok now...i'm gonna read part 7n 8.will comment as soon as i'm done.

I get to read 2 updates together 😃 yay!! Ok thats probably coz i came late online 😛 ok gr8 progress. Eee!! I so much loved virat reading her mind <3 i mean its so gr8.. For a person like Manvi specially. Coz knowing her from the story, she is never vocal abt her feelings or finds it difficult to express or may be jst finds it awkward to express? What ever it is bt its so nice for her that he understands her unspoken words.. Thats true friendship! *i wish i hav such a friend* 😛 see she is so sensitive within that she got hurt by her mom's words though she acts like bruce lee :/ i mean ok her mom shud not hav said that bt she jst reacted to wat Manvi did. Den Manvi wud say even she reacted so that way the game never ends wen both ppl keep giving negative reactions. Manvi's mom being elder shud understand her daughters psychi :/ and i loved janvi hugging Manvi <3 again Manvi dint react. She is so closed off man. The way virat was letting her see the side where she was wrong is nice i feel he'll help her a lot to cum close to her mom. Both of them infact are helping each other. Its so cute how he understands her mood wid her body language and her use of words. Loving der friendship more and more... Thank u so much for writting and the PMs 🤗 take care Nisha

Another superb and amazingly written update
Loved how virat shared his past even though
He wasnt comfortable and then manvi actually
Calling him virat and him finding it weird
Love this unknown chemistry they have and lol
Virats loves it when manvi insults him it was an
Awesome update thank you so the pm do continue soon

Awesome updates
I want to read next part
Plz pm me
I m waiting

really sry for late rply.i read ur update and it was awesome.virman shared their story with each other.and the way manvi was hugging virat wen he was saying the story was really beautiful iloved that part.continue soon and thanks for the PM dear plz continue soon😃

"Let us look at some of Shakespeare's plays. Romeo and Juliet, considered to be an epic love story where both the lovers die for each other couldn't be any more humorous. Firstly, Romeo was in love with another girl but then he falls for Juliet the minutes he sees her. Let us assume it to be true love, though my experience tells me love at first sight is impossible, that Romeo and Juliet did love each other truly and that they were soul mates. But, if they were soul mates and madly in love how could Romeo make such a grave mistake and assume that Juliet was dead? She was in his arms and he could not figure out that she was alive? Shouldn't soul mates be able to read each other? This doesn't just make their so called great love story sound exaggerated but after reading the novel I have serious doubts about Romeo's IQ level. He killed himself without checking Juliet's pulse, I'm sure they knew about pulse and heartbeat back in the 19^th century. People call this a tragic love story but I call it a humorous end to an irrational couple's life."


exactly my point.yeah sure i love the poetic quality of Shakespeare but his storyline sucks big time.i mean the love only lasted 4 5 days n romeo was 16 n juliet 13.it's the teen hormone that did the work.it's d most bizarre love story in d history of love stories. n then i find most epic love stories hilarious.

i love d insight to shakespeare through virman.i thought i'm d only one who thinks like this.

girl u know how to write!!!!the usual virman banter was going on n ----

Suddenly he looked at me and said, "This is the first time you have called me with my actual name. I swear my name has never sounded better."

the timing was excellent.👏👏👏👏👏

loved virat for not being sympathetic,loved confused-at-virat's-reaction
manvi.in short i loved part 7.

part 8...

...was easy to read.loved virat's pov.he now understands manvi.loved their convo's.

now i'm dying to read the next parts.would u b kind enough to show me some mercy n pm me d nxt part?plz?

*biting nails while waitin*

part 9


can it get any better?how easily virat reads manvi.this is VIRMAN!!!!they don't need words with each other.

i don't know what else to write.you don't like one word comments.but what to say when u get overwhelmed by someone's sheer talent?

i'm stunned by your portrayal of virat n manvi.
bless you!!!!

part 10

and i get my answer.it'll only get better n brighter with every update.

so virat is hot,flirty,caring,intelligent,mind reader,can-put-some-sense-into-manvi.

arrgghhh...stop with making virat so dreamy.this story should come with a disclaimer
"THIS VIRAT IS NOT REAL"

can't wait to read d nxt part.