SS Manvi and Virat from the beginning part15,16 - Page 42

ahh wats wrong with me im kindda in manvi's position i mean last chap i hated her mom but now after our casanova's speech i feel may b its manvi's fault too😛i virat's story...felt sorry for him😔i really love da way u write it sounds soo real not so fictitious 👍🏼 n hey wat abt their hawaii trip u din't mention anything abt it? n once again thanks for sending me da update.continue soon😊

Hey, I hav jst read all d parts nd they r all fantastic, mst say dat u r a vry gud writer. I would luv 2 c how virman's relatnshp grows. So, plzzz.. Pm me nxt tym when u updt. :-)

awesome nisha i m loving this more and more love this update too...
loved the way how virat recognized that manvi has someprob and how he was sharing his prob so that she can open up...okay now update jaldi jaldi...waiting...update soon

sorry for cmmenting late as i m trying to catch few thmgs bt i managd to read ur update!
as usual same words of mine that nisha u did a splendid job,nice,amazing update (i knw my cmments r getting monotous bt seriously i dnt how to say that i like the update finally nw manvi also knws smethng abt hm n nw she might see hm frm diff angle!
virat is cool he knckd sme sense in her that it was her fault n whatever her mother said was just her outburst! she surely doesnt mean that so whats the need to sulk :-)
manvi getting piss on listening to hm as he was taking her mum side is cute bt the best was that when she says "plan cancel,i will nt marry u" was hilarious!
keep writing gud stuff like for ppl like who need smethng to get distract oneself frm all studying pressures!
urgh! i hate the man who had inventd xams n makes the studnt's life hell specially of medical studnt :'(

Shall I comment or not???

Hi, I am Bond, James Bond. Kidding.

Let me introduce you to my family. Usually I skip this part but I got time today.

"Hey Blondie." Make up queen looked at me completely shocked. She looked around to see if I was talking to someone else.

Clearly smartness is not one of Blondie's strengths, sighing at her slowness I walked closer to her, "That little speech you gave me in the bathroom, listen, I'm not scared of you. As far as your 'boyfriend' is concerned, I couldn't care less about him either. If he doesn't want to work with me, he can go talk to Miss Juliet because I don't care. So next time before you get all territorial on me, just know that I'm not the one that will take your spiteful comments sitting down. Are we clear?"

Calm down? Hell no. Cassie messed up with the wrong person here. No one and I mean no one messes up with Manvi's sister. I repeat NO ONE.

There goes the grandmother again. Gosh she needs to grow up I mean grow down. *scratched head*

*Yawn* family drama seriously bores me. I was about to go back to my room when 'lady' stopped me.

I went in the bathroom to wallow in sadness. I stared at the mirror waiting for tear drops. Maybe if I cry I will feel better? Today is probably the first time in my life I wished I had some of mom's genes in me, then perhaps I wouldn't be staring at the mirror with dry eyes.

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She didn't give me any lecture today instead she told me how much she hates me. That was probably the first time I didn't argue with her or scream at her. I left without a fight.

I want to act like I don't care and laugh it off at-least in front of my sister so that she won't worry too much but I can't. I can't even utter a word, I feel so lost.

She looked everywhere but me. She stood there fidgeting and constantly zipping, unzipping her hoodie.

"Manvi look at me. Look at me." I ordered still holding her shoulders. She finally looked up and wait are those tears in her eyes?

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You must be thinking what these lines are??

Well, after reading the previous two updates, I'd been attracted to go back and read the whole story once again! And then pick up a few lines from here and there...

And I am amazed, how the oh-so-cool Maanvi in the beginning, changed to a vulnerable Maanvi, wanting and longing to be loved...

And this tear part brought tears in my eyes... How Maanvi did Nautanki to bring tears in her eyes, how she thought she didn't have her mom's genes to cry... But when there comes a time, no one can stop those tears, no matter how hard you try not to let them fall... ***Applauds for your creativity 👏***

You explored all of the emotions possible for a human being, except for the emotion called love(that surely we will get in future updates)... I don't want it sooner though... 😛

Waiting to see how Maanvi opens up more to Virat, and confides in him... Waiting for the Hawaii trip... what happened of the trip BTW? Virat was to convince her mom na? Chalo will be waiting for more...

And waiting for you to explore the same emotions in Virat too... He surely has revealed his bit, but I would like to read more, his life in U.S.A since 4 yrs of age(must be a challenge right?), wanting for the motherly love, the love of his grand parents... and so on...

Waiting Waiting Waiting... 😊

Bubye... Hugsss 🤗

Hey I love all your stories you are a fab writer
Can you plzz pm me part 9 and 10
Nd I was Wondering if you are gonna continue your othe story cause it's been a long time since your last update 😊

first of all extremely sorry my late comment
so without further a due:
omg i cannot believed how close virman have become
wow virat omg i love him just for manvi he opened up to her
nd shared his story with her so she can be comfortably sharing
her story
but WHAT! I CANNOT BELIEVE HIS MOTHER CHOSE HER BROTHER OVER HIM
I DONT EVEN LIKE anyone of his parents!
anyways...aww loved the grown up virat whos telling her the
right thing
omg that her mother is correct in her position nd manvi is wrong
i loved how he explained it to her
dude everything was just bang on!
as usual loved the update it was GRrreat!
sorry i commented in a hurry cause i have work to do...nd i unintentionally came
on if nd saw ur pms nd how u were like if comment...ne yea
so i like read ur updates nd commented...

p.s. congrats on finding a hot boyfriend!😳

loved part 7 and 8