IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi (Chap. 12) **COMPLETED**

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Devilways

@Devilways

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

I cant believe its over.

Wow! Words fail me thats how beautifully it was written!

Heart warming!she came to him. Little khushi was joint costoudy, he finally ubderstood people were never owned bu earned.

He got his live even as a mirage n probably khushi is finally happy and at peace!

Great end.

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samaz95

@samaz95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Loved it!:)

Absolutely beautiful,no words to describe it:D

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NISHI

@nishi22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Finally he found both his khushi love the chapter...

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naina50

@naina50

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Thanks for the update.

"Guilt and grief, once it has entered like iron into the soul, does not ever leave " ..that was such an emphatic statement about the fatal-cruelty doled out by Arnav to a pregnant Khushi and his need for repentance till his last breath was incredible...

I loved the fact that you mentioned that Arnav should not necessarily have the privilege of turning little Khushi into a Raizada , giving due credence to Amrita for having raised a healthy,fully rounded human-being even unknowingly .. she deserves to be credited as Khushi's mother ..

Thanks again.

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Ashi

@TheThoughtCrime

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Very beautifully written. 😃

But you didn't tell us how little Khushi was named Khushi or why Arnav didn't go to Khushi till she had to leave for Shimla.

I guess you can call it serendipity.

Thank you for your work.

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Shazeia

@shaz007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

A heart touching story... And he finally got both Khushis. Very beautifully written. Do pm me whenever you start a new story.

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sammymas

@sammymas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

No words to describe this work of yours...incredibly beautiful.

Finally ASR got both his Kushi when he changed onto a good man...each moments of teh story was touching and brought tears...great work.

Wish you and your loved ones a wonderful year ahead filled with happiness and bliss...keep writing.

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rana5

@rana5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

What a brilliant story. So tearful, yet I am so glad that he has this peace.

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

What a beautiful end to this story. Loved it. You have written a beautiful story. Hats off!

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Bhooma01

@Bhooma01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Bravo. Thank you for this ending. It reduced me to tears to read that he could finally hope for death...to look forward to it - so that he could be with his Khushi.

I love the way you write, Navin. There were places in this story where I laughed and there were places when your words evoked such anger against ASR in me. And now, now that your tale has ended - I feel a little peace too - for Arnav and his Khushi.

Thank you.