IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi (Chap. 12) **COMPLETED**

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Perfection is the best FF in my opinion i have read so far . Please update soon i am eagerly and patiently waiting for it . Sorry that i am saying this in this thread i am reading and enjoying this story as well as i enjoy all your written work . Thank you so much for your time and hard work in writing all this wonderful stuff. You have got lot of potential for writing friction. Please do continue to carry on writing .

Quote

Dynamix215

@Dynamix215

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

U made me cry so bad...!!!!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

ENLIGHTENED1

@ENLIGHTENED1

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

have no words to describe how i felt readinf your FF ...immaculate 👏

Quote

crazyweird

@crazyweird

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Awesome

No words to describe how wonderful the chapter was

Quote

Reem

@TRND86

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

You wrote an amazing story. The last chapter was so emotional. I love how you took us on this short journey. The story showed that we are all human and we make mistakes. At the same time, we all deserve a second chance. I am glad Arnav got that second chance. Thanks for writing this. 👏

Quote

khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

finally he did find his khusi... his daughter and his love, the shining star...Hell of an emotional ride it was... i never cried like this reading any ff before!! i loved to every bit!!! Thank u for writing such wonderful story...

ur writing is amazing... keep up!! 👍🏼

Quote

Aliya_hzsn

@Aliya_hzsn

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Was a Very emotional One!!!!!!!!

Once again Im telling you That you are an Amazing writer!!!!!!!!!! Hats OFF!!

Quote

shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

u had me crying.. too good an end..

Quote

henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

amazing befitting last chapter navin

my loved one also abandoned me after showering his love and sharing my life and one fine day threw me out unceremoniously from his life

some day i believe that he too will walk the path to redemption but its never easy, is it.

redemption comes at a heavy price and arnav has paid his dues. some day he too would be able to see khushi in all her glory but that has to wait

i'll start reading the beautiful tale once again but just one little complaint no pm

Quote

mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

i started reading this update with such a heavy heart that i already was weeping horribly from inside...spare for the company i didn't get to cry out loud...this is such an emotional and fitting finale for such a tale...

i know now for sure the greatest love somehow went unfulfilled and got its due in an unconventional way ...its bittersweet...

this is such a good piece of literature of paradise lost and paradise gained it should be celebrated as that good piece of fiction...

i have never been a fan of tragedies i always love happy endings this got that too in a way...

i wish khushi though heartbroken she was ...i just wish that she was a strong women and must have faced everything for her child ...brave all odds because we get to see women betrayed by their partners all the time bearing society,adapting for her child...though it would be too much to ask...

but you brought out a beautiful tale of redemption without the conventional happy ending ...i am so glad that i struck to this even knowing the sad part...thank you for it...