IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi (Chap. 12) **COMPLETED**

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pia-loves-sarun

@pia-loves-sarun

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#311

I don't think i've ever read something more beautiful than this
Words will not do justice to it ,so I don't even want to try .
Loads and loads of love

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#312

I had pretty much forgotten this story, so read it all over again.. and loved it all over again :)

Edited by ..Swapnali.. - 7 years ago

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#313

This is hauntingly beautiful.

The pain (whether his or her's) through your words is a sheer agony.

I had cried buckets when I read it first time. Cried buckets again.. cried for his mistakes, for his loss. Cried for Khushi. I can feel their grief, their pain.. I feel for their combined loss.
Glad little Khushi came back to him with whatever arrangements. If you had made ASR win her custody in courtroom, that would be grossly unfair to Amrita, so I'm glad at the turn of events.

Beautifully written and my words are not making any justice at all..

Would you be thinking to continue Perfection?

Edited by kclovearshi - 7 years ago

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guy3

@guy3

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#314

This was such a beautiful story. I am a week away from my delivery and I grieve for Pradeep and the unborn child. I grieve for Khushi. I grieve for the two happy families that couldn't be. I feel stupid weeping into the night but God bless you, my dear for giving this beautiful story.

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crystalange

@crystalange

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#315

this was such a beautiful story believe me it had many negative thoughts but the story said though the world maybe filled of negative u can still fill ur life with positive energy it taught that love just happens no matter how wrong or right it is how painful or soothing it is it just happens and at the end that love turns every wrong thing right i am so glad to read this story thank u so much for writing it