IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi (Chap. 12) **COMPLETED** - Page 30

Pyaar toh bas, ho jaata hai...

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I came across this story as the 1st suggestion in a list of Arshi ff on a blog, and i gotta admit, getting to know that it was not focused on khushi-arnav but on Arnav and a little girl named khushi and the bond between the two, I was a little skeptical on whether i really wanted to read it now or leave for some other time, but somehow, and I'm really grateful for that, I took a chance telling myself that it was classified first in that list for a reason, and now after reading the whole story in one go, LITERALLY, I know why.

I've read many FF, SS, TS, OS about Arshi since i first discovered this world, yet no one had stricken me the way this story did, The continuos tears that wouldn't stop even after i finished the story, I don't think I ever cried that much for a movie in my life, no less a story, (I've been weeping for more than an hour here), yet I didn't mind cause it only made me feel how deeply I connected to your work. Honestly I still can't believe how someone can actually be able to write something like this, I feel tongue-tied when it comes to finding a suitable word to describe it. All I know is that I've got goosebumps erupting all over my skin the whole time, and that's a first. + There wasn't a single moment when I felt like skipping a part or taking a break because every sentence was well written and well placed that it makes you want to read the whole thing to know what comes next and how the story is going to unravel. It could have been a 50 chapter story and I would still be fighting sleep and going through it non stop to read as much as I possibly can.

You have incredible talent and writing skills. You nailed it, be it the idea, the plot, the way you shed lights on the character (I love this version of both Aman and Payal btw), the narration, description, dialogues... everything.

I am for sure coming back to read more of your work and I hope you keep writing in the future because you really have the talent and the skills to do so.

Another thing that I wanted to mention is that this story really redefined the notion of happy ever afters. And I did like the change.

ps: when I come across a good story about Arshi be it a FF / SS or a TS/OS I can't help myself re-reading it again and again. As for your story, I'm POSITIVE I will come back to it many many times, except that I know for sure it's not something I can read in public 😉

u r a wonderful writer...

Heard high praises about it!

Shall read it as soon as I am done with my exams!!

U portrayed every emotion very beautifully..

U r an amazing writer dear..