IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi (Chap. 12) **COMPLETED**

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Manesha

@manesha116

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Posted: 8 years ago

#281

Hi dear,

Read all the chaptets in one go and cried lot while all chaps.

Wonderful story.

I havent words to tell what i feel when i read read this os.

Finally arnav felt khushi and got his child.

He paid havy amount for his sin.

Eventhough arnav got them back still there is some pain.

For arnav's incomplete life without khushi.

Well done dear👏👏

Wont read anothe fiction of ur about arshi .

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Creatiwitty

@Creatiwitty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#282

There is a big bile up on my throat,,,,,, man how do you do this...This story is the first I have read where Khushi and Arnav does not end up being together. I don't like separation and specially not in the case of Arshi. But something about this story got me hooked. This is too intense...As much as i hated the fact that khushi is dead, leaving behind arnav, I LOVED your narration. thank you for this piece of art...

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sman

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Posted: 8 years ago

#283

My fav story even though I cry every time I read it.!!

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VarshaPretty

@VarshaPretty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#284

This z one of d most tragic intensely written ff I have read..

& this z d first ff...I continued reading...after knowing there is no Khushi...not a one ARSHI scene...

So...very well written...

Superb...yar..!!

Continue writing like this...!!

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#285

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME...

No words coming from my mind to say...

even while typing this i am crying...

honestly saying i hate tragedy especially the seperation of arshi...

i can see any couple seperated not arnav and khushi...

i always hope they dnt get seperated...

even if they die together i am happy...

but not alone... its heartbreaking...

this is the first ff... i continued reading after knowing khushi is dead... not an arshi story...

its your writing hooked me to read this story...

u r an awesome writer...

i really wanted u of write a story of arshi ...like this much intense but with a happy ending...

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gprs

@gprs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#286

Brilliant work..the fist part itself is a clear mirror to intense pain and beautiful writing..i decided to hold on reading as it was too much for me to continue without crying..yet you wrote brilliantly each emotions and moments caused a storm in me..how could you deliver it so accurately..the pain,the seperation,the guilt,the helpless feeling,loneliness -i was amazed by it's intense..you are an awesome writer..every character in this story left a mark to remember..hats off👏👏👏

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Aryancha

@Aryancha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#287

I came back to IF only to read this story as directed by K's Ficverse. And I thank her so much for bringing me to this story. One of the most intense and brilliant work and story I read anytime recently. The time when Payal finally accepts him and then he feels his Khushi, was the beginning of waterworks that I still can't seem to contain at all. It is to leave an undeniable mark on me forever to never let go of loved Ines and just be good and unselfish. Beautifully portrayed. Thank you! And hats off to you

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Monalisaa

@Monalisaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#288

Omg this was so touching I actually cried. No wonder it was recommended for reading by ipkknd ficverse. And I am glad I read it. Thank you for sharing and writing such amazing story. I have one word for it Belissima.

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vanility

@vanility

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Posted: 8 years ago

#289

I cried many times reading this story... I just accept that Arnav didn't save Kushi... But the story started with that,. What a story!! I'm spell bound and deeply affected that he let little Kushi go.. thank God Amrita realized soon and decided to share her.

Finally Arnav felt Kushi in the moonlight...But still not enough for my soul. Deep penance he has to undergo till his death to reach Kushi..Long long way..

Little Kushi will surely bring lots of happiness..Hope life will be better for this Arnav.

Please write an epilogue and complete this story ..Pls pretty pls.

Cheers

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aquagal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#290

I re-read it. I don't know why but I read it again. I saw it on the list of FFs by S&K on wordpress and I just couldn't stop myself from clicking. And once I started I couldn't stop myself, such is the magic of your words. And I'm sure you know already that my throat is aching now and I'm crying silently once again.