OS: Khushi's motherly love

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

loved the strong khushi and the slap she gave asr and the conditions she set anjali after all this never tried to help her self at all loved how khushi and payal left the raizada they needed to open the eye thanks for the pm a mother love is one love emotion trust you don't ever mess with

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IFrozenl

@IFrozenl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

That was Super Amazing.

Love the way Khushi fought for her baby.

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Amanda Lim

@Amanda.Lim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Loved it..

Khushi is being brave and fought for her baby...

Felt bad for Anjali, but maybe she deserved it..

Thanks for the PM.. :D

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Great piece of writing 😊 loved it

glad that Khushi fought for her baby... felt bad for Anjali but it was her mistake... loved the ending

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love_for_serial

@love_for_serial

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Nice to read that Khushi is strong!👏 But feeling bad for Anjali, can we have redemption for Anjali!😭

Edited by love_for_serial - 12 years ago

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sheenal

@sheenalipkknd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

aww such a cute story with a bit of sadness 😊

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abavi

@abavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

The story plot was good, but my sincere opinion is it could have been dealt with little better. Hope you wont get offended by my comment, This is not bashing, but a critique comment. If you feel so, PM me, I shall remove the comment from here.

As much as a motherly love is special, a miscarraige is very sad too.There were two mothers in the story- though the former was shown to be a little too fierce in your story, I felt the latter's loss deserved a little more attention too..

In my opinion, Kushi is strong woman but in her own way, it was little difficult for me to think of her being this crudely blunt. I would'nt have expected her to give her baby away- She would have defended that in her own way... but she would never call any one an evil witch or drag them by hair because they were wrong or because they misunderstood her- She would show her kindness to a mother who lost her baby- Because she is Kushi- her basic character is to treat everyone kindly - nor would she pass any snide remarks to her baby about Anjali, because she would bring up the baby to be an angel just like her...

Frankly my opinion. No offence meant.

Edited by abavi - 12 years ago