Geet ff:LOVE OF MY LIFE pg:83 LASt part up - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: sanam1234u

nice update...its sad ...so much happen with them...


thank u😛😛...so sad of maneet🤢
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

thank u!!😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: sri91

dr a nice one da do continue... Update atleast twice a week... Poor maneet... Waiting for next one... Very small one...


sorry fr d smal update dis tym ll giv u a long one😛😛
thank u😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: 26_chaitra

Nice update :)

loved it :)
poor maaneet :(:(
plzz do continue soon :):)


thank u dr😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti

Choo cute update, the teddy bit was like aoww.
And then the scene with Geet cuddling crying maan in her lap and consoling was tooo sweet.
Loved the update.
Also felt sad for them, their parents death was dreadful.
Thanx for PM dear.
Continue sooonnn 😃


thank u!! such a detailed review..do continue i givng mi reviews😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

thank u😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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here i go with part 4...do leave ur precious likes and comments😊😊



Part 4

Maan:morning daadi.i hae an important meeting.am going.

And with those words uttered her hazel eyes scanned him .she looked into his eyes.he cannot see her eyes.because he knows she'll find the truth

Maan could not withstand her gaze..he literally ran out of km.he was driving to his kc.he couldnot anymore withstand her silence.and the coldlook in her face.its really killing him.he could feel that she is so much troubled.somewhere he felt that he could be the reason for that .but that was not possible.he never ever tried to hurt her.will papa and mamma death alone is the reason for her numbness.he was utterly confused with the happenings around him.it was nearly 60 days he is being this way.he THE GR8 MSK felt helpless.He reached KC and silently strode towards his cabin giving a cold daring and dashing look to his employees.

To say that MSK's employees are scared of him would be an understatement.they were going on bonkers for the past 2 months.the sound of his steps then everyone would go to robot mode.blank expression in their face .the only live thing happening with them would be their respiration.air floe in and out of nostrils.but they never know what made their boss this rude for the past 60 days.they knew that their boss godfather and his wife was expired but could that even be possible for the boss to change his being from human to devil.

They know their boss was an understanding person.he would not tolerate their mistakes other than that he was such a nice person but they wee really eager to know what had gone I to him to make him such a devil..

The only person who knows why he is being this way his Adi.adithya mathur, his friend cum PA.well to say veerji of geet.he knows the true reason of maan's changeover.

Adi was shocked to see a text from geet's number.of course this wudn't be hios reaction b4 two months but nw the circumstances and situation is entire;y different.he opened the msg nt beliving his eyes.he was further shocked to reda the text.

Text msg: plz get fud fr maan

He was reading and re reading the text.this wasn't his chotti geet.she wud text him fr pages.this one neither hav any veerji nor hav any smiley and to top of it his chotti pleading her veerji.could that even be possible.he felt a lump in his throat.nw he totally understood the situation of his fren maan.

He ordered and brought a pizza for maan.

In maan's room:

Adi:excuse me sirrr

Maan:come in adi..i dint call u..wat do u want?

Adi:sss' sir food fr you..

Maan:hav I askd fr it??

Adi:bt sir..txxt frmm geet..couldnt avoid.

Instantly maan's face lit up..his geet asked him to eat indirectly..he ws happy abt it..he quickly grabbed pizza box and started eating it.

Maan:thanks adi..adi received a 1000 watt smile from maan.

Adi :welcome sir.saying it he went to his cabin and texteg his chotti back.

Txt msg:

Chotti maan ateJ

Maan after eating called dadima saying her to make geet eat her bf.

Daadi:par maan how do you know that geet has not eaten her bf.

Maan: I kno daadi say her I had myb bf and make her to hv her bf.

Daadi was relived atleast now geet will hv her bf.

Geet on receiving txt frm adi came back to dinning table and strtd eating quietly..daadi was happy that she is having her breakfast.

Here maan was on cloud nine knowing well that his jaan his life his love cares for even being in this state..

In London:

Yash was not happy with the call from maan..he thought after this much days there would have been some changes with his gudia.but to no avail.he was not able to be there in London even for a minute..he felt very bad for their darling angel..

precap:same..


note:ignore grammar and spelling mistakes..

Edited by Rami92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW!!!!Superb update :)
loved it... :)
geet cares for maan...:):)
hope to c dat bubbly geet abt whom adi was speaking... :):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
hai dear...was a lovely one... picturization of geet was too gud...waiting fr ur next update...continue thz...😊...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
gud dr 😊 do continue... Waiting for happy moments of maneet 😃

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