Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
Intense, pain and past. I am eager to see how you are going to unfold this story.

Yes, uncharted territory of sorts this but giving it a shot. Let's see how it goes.

Good to see you here :)

Aria

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: lakharnshi88
Yay! Stalking helps!! So she is a chef eh?! Super fab!! And boy do I absolutely love this Payal!! She is giving it back to Arnav rather well :). Can't wait for the next one...!

Thanks for the PM :D

Cooking Jalebis was a stress buster for Khushi on the show, so it made sense she ends up choosing something she loves doing here as well. I'm glad you guys like this Payal, its been fun writing on her. Always imagined she was something like this on the show too...oh well! Will update soon.

I see that you may have actually beat the PM to this post ;) You are welcome in any case!

Thank you for commenting.

Aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Anupama.
I just came across this one..its really good,the way u've moulded the m.u. track..intense..
Tell me if m right or not,arnav doesnt know khushi s whereabouts now..but does payal know or not?

Well what do you think? Does Payal know? Obviously I can't reveal anything more at this point, stay tuned! Glad you enjoyed reading the FF so far, yeah, the MU track is where this story sort of takes off from... Thank you for commenting Anupama. Lovely name!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: sakthi25
Kushi is a sophisticated cook now.WOW!
Loved it...

Glad you approve of Khushi's choice 😃

Thank you for commenting!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: samaz95
amaaziing:)
So haappy to read Khushi's success😃

Glad you liked reading about Khushi's success. More on her struggles next. Thank you for commenting :)

Aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: inajnar
The update was very insightful ...and amazing ...

Can we get quicker updates please ? 😃

Thank you :)

Quicker? 😲Once a week, fair enough? I will try and stick to this routine. 😃

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Izza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Nice story

Please pm me if possible :)

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neverbefore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Thank The Lord!! I found you again!!! I was intrigued by your title and then totally hooked by your story but I only had the energy to 'like' as it was nearly midnight after a long, long day.

I love Payal...and I think I'm going to absolutely love Khushi...i hope she continues to grow, be strong and independent and build a life of her own...and take Arnav back, only if she wants to and then only on her terms...it's all I've ever wished for her!! 😊

Ive never understood the need to place your thoughts, feelings, sense of self and values below the needs of your in-laws and/or husband...so Go Payal!!!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: AneesahJabeen
Oh god so heartbreaking
Im loving this payal!
Was in tears due to her words
Truee but harshhh
Loveddd ittt
Updateee sooonnn
xx

Hey!

Glad to know you have enjoyed reading about this new Payal. Its been fun writing about her as well. Truth is always harsh! Thank you for commenting.

Will update soon

Aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: izzy0502
awesome update...

the new payal is amazing...

the words have a deep meaning dont they...

poor aakash...

love khushi's new found confidence...

continue soon

ty for the pm

Glad to know everyone is loving this new side of Payal. I'm having fun writing about her. Let's see how the new Khushi shapes up. Words do have a deeper meaning... I guess its her guilt and sense of failure...at not being able to help and see what her sister was going through.

Will continue soon, Thank you for your lovely comment.

Aria