Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

I love this bold independent Khushi..
But who was she talking to on phone..??
Payal is awesome..but I feel bad 4 Akash..
BTW do u have a writing index..??

continue soon..n Thanks 4 d PM..😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: casker
Payal 👏. Feels sorry for her as a sister she is sacrificing her life as Kushi did for her.
Arnav still thinks Kushi is not innocent😡.
Kushi is a chef now.

Glad to know you like this side of Payal.

Don't be so sure about Arnav yet! And yes, Khushi is a chef now. Lets see what the chef cooks up soon ;)

Thank you for commenting :)

Aria

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Samyxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

What a Wonderful and an emotional story...

I loved it...

You made me cry so much dear, 😛

And I love this story...

Make me cry next time too.. 😉

Please accept my buddy request and please PM me for the updates...

Cant wait to read the next update...

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: flash90
I love this payal yaar...
You gave given her character a depth...
Someone who stands up for her sister...
Someone who stands up for what she feels is right...
And what exactly did Arnav mean when he asked "Innocent ?"
I thought he was repenting...
Keep giving wonderful updates like this... n thnx 4 d pm

Glad to know you've liked reading about this Payal. I suppose, in Arnav's defense, at least he did not say anything more. Let's hope he's still not stuck at that point and has moved beyond that past. Thank you for your wonderful comment. Will update soon.

Aria

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: truptscool
Awsome update...
plz update soon..

Thank you!

Will update soon.

Aria

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: memories_im
Nice story
Please pm me if possible :)

Thank you!

Will PM you when I update next.

Aria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: tinsel
Intense update👍🏼

Glad you liked reading the update. Thank you Tinsel :)

Aria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: neverbefore
Thank The Lord!! I found you again!!! I was intrigued by your title and then totally hooked by your story but I only had the energy to 'like' as it was nearly midnight after a long, long day.

I love Payal...and I think I'm going to absolutely love Khushi...i hope she continues to grow, be strong and independent and build a life of her own...and take Arnav back, only if she wants to and then only on her terms...it's all I've ever wished for her!! 😊

Ive never understood the need to place your thoughts, feelings, sense of self and values below the needs of your in-laws and/or husband...so Go Payal!!!

I am happy that you found me again!! Always love to hear from my readers, so Thank you for your lovely comment. It's be absolutely wonderful to read that everyone's likes this Payal who is strong! Let's hope you guys like Khushi when we get to her more. Right its building up around those two and the impact their broken marriage had all round them! @the bold, I couldn't agree more!!

Thanks again. Hope you drop in a comment again!

Aria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: penguin143
I love this bold independent Khushi..
But who was she talking to on phone..??
Payal is awesome..but I feel bad 4 Akash..
BTW do u have a writing index..??

continue soon..n Thanks 4 d PM..😊

More about that in the chapters to come, may be Khushi has a new life? and new friends to talk to?

I'm glad you are liking this new Payal too. Let's see what happens to Aakash, in a way not only him, both Payal and Aakash got a bad deal here. First their marriage day was hijakced and Arnav Khushi stole their thunder and now this. Poor souls!😆

Thank you for your comment Penguin143 :)

Yes, I do have a writing index infact. Here it is -

List of Olive's works

Aria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Samyxx
What a Wonderful and an emotional story...

I loved it...

You made me cry so much dear, 😛

And I love this story...

Make me cry next time too.. 😉

Please accept my buddy request and please PM me for the updates...

Cant wait to read the next update...

Thanks Samyxx for your comment. Glad to know you have enjoyed reading it thus far. Will update over the weekend.

Aria