Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#521

Originally posted by: scarlet2012
It is very nice that Khushi returned the 300 Rs. How Khushi will handle the new manager . Is Mrs Mallik related to Arnav ?

I always wanted to see that brought up again at some point in the show...so had to throw it in here😆 Well. we do know that Arnav Singh Raizada was Arnav Malik at some point, don't we?😛

Thanks for commenting Scarlet.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#522

Originally posted by: greenMoss
So, Arnav finally figured out that Khushi is living in Mumbai. That's great!

Khushi seemed sadistic when she said that she wanted to hurt Arnav.

Deeya said that Khushi can't hurt Arnav if he doesn't care. This is so true. Khushi doesn't even want to think on this lines, which goes on to show that she is still vulnerable.

During the conversation with Mrs. Malik, Khushi thinks that Arnav, whatever he is like, isn't pesky like most of the men.

I just hope that the problems at Khushi's workplace gets solved soon.

Is Mrs. Malik somehow related to the Raizadas, specifically Arnav and Anjali?

Thanks for the PM.

Khushi is hurt. And now that she is in a comfortable space, she wants to give it back to the one person who she knows will hurt despite the fact that she refuses to acknowledge it. Or may be there is more to it. I agree, she is vulnerable.. she has been running away from all that, the real test comes when she faces her past head on and how she reacts...

Well, Arnav was a Malik before she switched sides, was he not?😛

Thank you GM for your comment. Will update soon.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#523

Originally posted by: zyanah
I really like the way you are shaping up Khushi's character but what I dont get in these 3 years she never went out with a guy I mean its hard to get over Arnav but whats wrong with some harmless flirting, some male friends eh?

Nothing wrong with that harmless flirting, absolutely agree with you. But Khushi had just come off a divorce, abandoned by her family and trying to build a new life for herself all alone in a new place - wanting desperately to prove to herself that she can do it... I think the last thing she would want at that point of time, would be to get involved with another man. Think about it. Now that she is tempted to explore the world and understand herself more, she will likely be more open to that idea.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: rdforfun
eager to hve arshi meeting for the next update😊

Hi there, yea things are headed towards that ...

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: yashal_khan
it was well written
really like khushii send him back 300 rs

thanks for pm

continue soon

Glad you liked it.

Thank you for commenting.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Originally posted by: ranogill
very good update...i read your story in one go ..beautiful

Thank you for commenting, glad you liked it :)

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#527

Just read three chapters of this story.

Love the way you are showing the repentance track here.

This was much needed in IPK and unfortunately was never shown.

All that Arnav did to Khushi left a bad taste in the mouth and it was foolish to show her

forgiving him so easily.

As a woman I felt wronged and it felt good to read this.

A strong Payal was a surprise ad I liked seeing her managing her father's shop.

Khushi has become a chef in an Italian restaurant.

I'll read on and see how you have taken the story forward.

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Dhrashtee

@dhrashtee

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#528

Loved the update... Glad Arnav found that envelope. Poor Khushi...hopefully, the situation at work will lead her towards Arnav so he can win her back. will be waiting for next update... pls cont soon

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#529

Is Mrs. Malik Arnav's aunt or something?

What will Khushi do bout the manager now?

Love this Deeya. Khushi needs someone like her in her life.

Loved it when Khushi returned the three hundred rupees to Arnav.

In IPK they left a lot of loose ends.

The money was never mentioned again.

Arnav has gone to look for Khushi and Ved has gone to see Anjali.

Waiting to see what happens next.

Could you please PM me when you update next?

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#530

I lauvve Deeya!

Khushi thinks that if she wouldnt have been such a nave, she wouldnt have had such bitter experiances. but nave or not..such experiances can happen with anyone...such a thing made her what she is now..a Chef! maybe she isnt at peace, she has been through too much that beyond what a simple young girl can tolerate emotionally but she now standing at her feet, independent.

Rest all in good time.

And I absolutely loved that 300 rs scene.

Doesnt she know Arnav will be able to track her? Ofcourse its obvoius. so maybe she sebt it purposefully.

people like her manager doesnt deserve a mention. I wish Arnav comes and beat him to pulp. 😡