Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12 - Page 52

Mrs. Malik, is it possible she is related to Arnav? Just curious :)

Hey dear,

just read all the 8 parts and i am in love with this story.

Everybody's emotions are so very well potrayed.

Love the fiesty payal.

In my opinion it was not right of anjali to not to give that envelope to arnav all these years back but She did the right thing by hiding the whereabouts of khushi .

I don't feel sorry For akash's state.

Khushi independent and a chef. But there also is a snake. The manager.
She sent 300 to arnav . Now he knew where she is.

Loved deeya's concern for khushi.

I loved how you wrote about the past incidents.

Loved each and every update.

The story is both like the waves in the ocean and the pressure Building in volcano ready to erupt.

Please update soon. I am totally hooked to the story. Can't wait to read more. Please don't make us wait for the next update.

P.S. I think anjali is selfish. Never liked her.

This story is turning out to be very interesting

Woohoo u updated! So he is off to Mumbai then eh! And Khushi wanting to smoke?! Interesting ... she has been thru hell by the looks of it, it's hasn't ended!

Lovely update, the best part I liked was the 300 Rs being sent back to arnav. Thanks for the pm

very nice update loved it.

The first thing that came to mind on reading this update Aria was Blake's Songs of Experience and the famous 'The Sick Rose'

O Rose, thou art sick!
The invisible worm
That flies in the night,
In the howling storm,

Has found out thy bed
Of crimson joy:
And his dark secret love
Does thy life destroy.


Thos poem sums up for me in so many ways the whole story - both Arnav and Khushi's on so many levels.

Is she aware that she might have sent him the money not just to anger him, but may be to challenge him to find her, may be she hopes she is found?

Hope Mrs. Malik in her good nature is not setting Khushi up with this Raul Silvio!

the story is quite realistic...m loving it

Originally posted by: rana5

Thanks for the PM, loved the update. I had to go back and reread all the chapters again because I forgot what had happened prior to this chapter. Please update soon again!!!