Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: casker
lovely updates.

Thank you Casker :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: Japonica
Yet again another stirring update, A.
Anjali has found her happiness but there is no way she is going to be able to keep it if she doesn't get Khushi back her happiness.

So glad the women in your story are strong.

As for Arnav, he's got to stop wallowing in his sorrow and guilt and start looking into his actions and what's driven him to such beastliness before he even thinks of looking for Khushi.

This is a terrible dilemma you have put me in, Aria - on the one hand, Arnav's behaviour is almost irredeemable, honestly what really can he do to unbreak what he has broken to bits? and here I'm talking about himself and not just Khushi. Does he deserve Khushi or in fact any kind of khushi? Can someone who has suffered to the extent Khushi has ever trust anyone ever?

And if I am to be very honest, the answer has to be 'no'.

But then, on the other hand, if Arnav is in hell, Khushi too will stay in hell. And I am such a sucker of happy endings, that I can't bear them not to have the happily ever after they so deserve for all their suffering. After all people so much lesser them have been given it, why not them?

hmmm😕

Hi J,

Every scarred relationship in this FF converges at one point, and their fate seems to hinge on one thing, happiness and well being of one person alone; may be its just divine justice. its almost like things are in a limbo waiting for someone to show up and fix it. We know what the key is but is it too late, I wonder too at times. But then the cheesy romantic at heart wants what the heart wants, this is going to get interesting :)

That's the dilemma isn't it, you want her to be truly happy. Then you question, what is it that will give her that true happiness? May be thats why its easier in a fictional world, in the real world, forgiveness would be so hard. Not that I am hinting at anything here. May be Khushi will find her true happiness in Mumbai and people she has left behind will have to be content with that?? Lets see...

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Will update soon.

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: N0306
i stumbled upon this story and i can't be any happy that i did.. really beautifully written story and i like to read each and every line.. perfectly written and beautifully executed..

but at the end some questions.. i know it would be answered in the coming updates.. as the story unfolds

Location of Ved.. how did Anji meet him if he is not in delhi.. Akash knows more than that he has disclosed..

Who is Natasha? and why was Arnav anxious about; does she have some answers he is looking for? why did Lavanya leave that msg..

in midst of all these, Lavanya is being crushed again and I feel sorry for her.. if only she could move on..

First of all, welcome to the LB thread. And Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Ved treated Anjali and helped her come out of depression, as was mentioned in the last part (7). More on them will follow. As much as I want to answer your questions all I am going to say for now is, stay tuned😃. All your questions should be answered in due time as we move ahead with the story. Natasha is a new character who will introduced in the next few parts. And more of Lavanya too :)

Thanks again and hope to hear more from you.

Aria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Nice Story!! I read all the chapters in 1 go.. couldn't stop in the middle because of your gripping plot..

I must say this was the track every fan of IPK was looking for instead of mindless comedy & Di-drama..

All the characters - Anjali, Akash & Payal are the important parts of this story unlike IPK.. I agree with Payal's decision to leave Shantivaan. I can relate to every character here.

Pls PM me when you update next.

Can't wait to read more!

Thanks

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: shona-li
I've just stumbled upon this wonderful wonderful ficlet! Really wished I had known about it earlier. It offers the perspectives and pain the characters went through unapologetically and I like that. Please do include me in your pms when you update. You'll be receiving a buddy request (and new fan). :-)
Great chapter and looking forward to the next one soon!

Welcome to the LB thread shona-li and Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the thread. I have responded to your buddy request. Will continue soon.

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: Samyxx
Mind blowing chapter...

full of shocks and surprises..

I loved it...

I want Arnav to suffer a little more...

please update soon.. cant wait for the next update...

Good to see you back. Glad you liked the update, more to come! And whats this, you want more suffering for Arnie boy!? You guys are mean😛😆 Will update soon :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: libbyferns
Tanks for pm. Lovely maha update. Looks like Anjali is the one who is helping Khushi through Ved, and this is her way to redemption. I like this Akash with spine here. Arnav has to go through this guilt trip and realise the enormity of what he has done to Khushi. Since Ved is coming to Delhi is there some kind of confrontation awaiting between him and Arnav?.. looking forward to it

Maha update!😆 sorry, just made me realize, it nearly sounds like a Maha Episode :D

Let's see what Ved brings to Delhi ;) and how their paths cross. Arnav has a lot of hard work ahead, thats for sure. Will update soon. Thank you for sharing your thoughts Libbyferns :)