Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12 - Page 43

Originally posted by: Dimz13

From this update I can gather that Anjali had a hand in setting up Kushi someplace else...but how did Ved come in contact with Kushi...was she his patient as well...?

So Aakaash is going to puch boundaries with Payal...and Arnav is beginning to realize he needs real answers and for that he has to look beyond his own disappointment and guilt...! Why did he let Aakaash tke charge of the "Finding Kushi" initiative...why was he not more involved...?

anajali and Ved are together...well she has her second chance...and wants one for Arnav as well...!

Waiting for the next update...you write with a very clear understanding of all complex emotions putting it across clearly to us readers...making us understand the subtle nuances...!

Originally posted by: cappacuino5

Wow! It just keeps getting better!

I'm happy for Anjali but i still feel that she needs to suffer a tad bit more coz Khushi is somehow still suffering, working hard to earn her livelihood , being away from all her loved ones; she has suffered more than Anjali n most importantly those six months of her marriage to Arnav which brought her disgrace, she had to sleep on the poolside, was ignored by everyone, was emotionally scarred by Arnav. I like the fact that u have potrayed her n Payal as independent. I feel sorry for Akash, the cv's ruined his character they could have done so much with him n Payal. I'm glad that u are using their characters well , the way Payal has stood up for Khushi now and has refused to return to the raizada mansion just shows her love for her sister. WAY TO GO GIRL!!!!!!!!!!! I like the way u have potrayed Ved n Anjali's relationship , would love to read more about them as the story unfolds.Somehow i still feel that Arnav needs to suffer more though he has understood a bit of Khushi's pain he stll needs to understand the whole extent of her pain. He needs to respect her, trust her n hopefully in your story Khushi won't forgive him that easily , she need to have a self esteem n should give him hell before forgiving him n inbetween all this we won't really mind a nice romantic wooing track but that would obviously come later because first Arnav needs to find her , suffer more , start understanding her, respecting her on what she is all about , start trusting her and then finally start wooing her , I would also like u to show a nice friendship track btw Arnav and Khushi when they meet again and start understanding each other .N inbetween all this a jealousy track should also be shown ( I want Arnav to get jealous btw) coz subtle jealousy in relationships can cause wonders , Khushi shouldn't be be available to him so easily, he should know that he's in for a competition to win her heart ! OK I know that I've said alot ; last but certainly not the least I love this story of urs n i want u to update whenever u can coz i always look forward to ur updates. SO UPDATE SOON N BYE

Originally posted by: serendipitylove

Ahhh...Aria dear I'm so glad we got a quick update this time😊
When Is d next update coming? I hope it wud b as soon as this one!
Well Arnav has been slightly "maniacal" if I may use that word, hasn't he? He's actually hallucinating Khushi and trying to work out his redemption... Well I have to say that I actually liked that u made the guy sleep by the poolside!! I've wanted him to...although the scenario I imagined was slightly different with Khushi also being there :P lol!

Maaan...now I really want both of them to meet soon!!! I mean Khushi isn't happy and neither is Arnav...But of course he still has to earn her love and she shouldn't accept him too soon and like I always say he shouldn't have it easy... He needs to beg and plead too like Khushi once did with him...Its good to see him suffer a bit...
Somehow this update more than the others made me feel that he has accepted that he loves her... His worry for her...him wanting to see her safe is heartening... The way he reads her diary as though it gives him an emotional connect to her... I see stirrings of love there...

there has to be a way to trace her down, she couldn't have simply vanished off the face of earth like that! I find it hard to understand that ASR being the ASR hasn't been able to find her since 3 yrs of her disappearance... Not even a single clue? Maybe he should hire another detective agency... :P And Aakash saying that they were probably looking in the wrong places sounds like there's more than what meets the eye...I even wonder if Anjali has been sheilding her somehow...I see that the receipt of the divorce papers has driven a desperation in Arnav to find her...And i hope he does!

Did she ever miss him? Awww...really awww...he wants her to miss him too, especially when he misses her so much and not a day goes by without thinking about her!

Anjali already has a new man? Who is also connected to Khushi!!! I get the whole anjali connection now!!! While its not in their hands if Khushi drifts apart that doesn't mean Arnav should be kept in the dark right?

She is fine just has her regular check- up and I knew she hates my guts at this point but I'm going to be there whether she likes it or not!"
Finally Aakash boy gets a spine!! Way to go Payal...its her walking out that has spurred this I'm sure... I would love to see more of this love story too!

Thanks for the PM😊 Please update ASAP 😊

Originally posted by: greenMoss

Guilt is a feeling that has a potential to kill and ruin the soul, bit by bit. I feel sad for Arnav.

Akash is a great brother. I loved the easy camaraderie that has developed/is developing between him and Arnav.

Ved and Anjali are the common links between Arnav and Khushi.

The short conversation between Payal and Khushi was emotional.

Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: _disha_

Amazing... so Ved and Anjali are in this together!

Ved is the guiding light to all these troubled people ..hope they all reach their destinations in time.

I am glad that Khushi had a chance to get in touch with Payal...this will bring in the need to talk more now.

Akash is also doing the right thing by going and being with Payal...

Unfortunately Arnav has a long way to go ...

The bits of flashback and diary are really well written..very touching!

Originally posted by: savy.fernis

Amazingly written

Originally posted by: zyanah

Thank you so much for updating early.

God I really like the way things are shaping

Guilt was overwhelming while redemption was nowhere in sight, it was like being swept off a river and dumped into the turbulent seas; drowning was inevitable.-Love these lines