Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12 - Page 47

loved it. red ur whole ff today. its amazing. plz pm me the next one.

Originally posted by: daljeet

Aria, I loved your story.

My favourite character is Ved. He seems to be the only one who is out of the guilt web and in proper sense, meaning to say who is fair in his judgements and fair to all the sides he know. Hi Daljeet, yes Ved is a key link and like you said the only one who is out of the guilt web that the others find themselves entangled in this FF.

I'm not blaming Anjali here, Arnav might have done everything for Anjali. But in the way he had hurt Kushi who was innocent. Even if she was guilty, I don't think Anjali would have wanted her brother to do this amount of evil to her. So her finding a new life in Ved or hiding it from Arnav, I don't find wrong. But hiding Kushi's letter for so long?! I don't understand that. Let's see in future chapters what made her do that. Maybe for Kushi to stand on her foot and get her space! I agree, Anjali cannot be absolved so quickly for the part that she played in this entire mess so easily. However, Arnav did her no favors when he decided to play god after the terrace incident. The only person who had the right to decide to give Shyam a second chance was Anjali... about why she hid things from him and did what she did, only time will telll. But remember no one is perfect in this story...and everyone makes or has made mistakes...

And would love to see how Nani and others are also reeling under guilt, sorry if I sound sadistic. But they were worse than sadistic to Kushi and I don't think they deserve mercy from me.@bold, no worries, we are all a bunch of sadists who want to see him and others suffers. okay may be barring a few ;)😆

Arnav didn't try so far to get this mess settled? He till now was in denial mode? And he has La with him? Not that I'm against La, but doesn't he know if Kushi still loves him the rumours will hurt him? And can't he see what this is doing to La? For her friendship she is doing so much while he is being selfish, not thinking about her life once!

I think he is punishing La too in his selfishness and denial. Thats been everyone's question, you know how it was shown in one of the epis that he can punish himself when he knows he has hurt the other person. I wont say more at this point...

Akash forgiving Arnav is something I don't know what to say about. It's not that I hoped he would strangle Arnav for this. But even after Payal left... Surprising inst it? or not, May be he is being the bigger person here and trying to keep his family together? Knowing that it will fall apart if someone doesnt take control??

Payal is struggling with her guilt. Like the Raizadas I don't pity her. She deserves this because if Kushi hadn't gone to see Abhishek that day, maybe Kushi would have had a life she loves, though sans Arnav, and Payal would have ended up in a worse household or been victim to a gas-stove burst. Again if Kushi hadn't become the scapegoat, she would have been thrown on the road for a second time at altar. So to think Payal treated Kushi like that after the marriage. I agree she has every right to be angry with Kushi as she is her baby sister. But for once she didn't think that her sanki sister is not that mad to give up her dreams of wedding and married life for a man like ASR?! She never thought there might be a reason? And she left RM only after she knew the reason. Didn't she feel the need to understand why her sister left this house before? So all in all I'm not that sympathetic to Payal nor Payash relationship. Because if that would have been a relationship if Kushi didn't sacrifice is still a qtn; if Akash would have stood up for her is still a qtn, so they have to recreate a relationship which is for themselves and not based on someone's sacrifice! Like everyone else, Payal also took her sister for granted. Everyone always assumed that Khushi would be there at the corner to take all their punches never once stooping to think what that person at the receiving end might be going though. And now, once she is gone, they realize what a huge void she has left behind. Life doesn't always give you second chances, I guess thats why we look for happy endings in fiction. 've digressed... Payal walking out would be a start of her redemption because no one would stay back after knowing the truth.

Arnav I hate him. Waiting to see a proper repentance.@bold😆 I don't think I've read so man people say they hate Arnav, but I love you guys for siding with Khushi. I guess, we make him pay big time here. I know some of my readers will be sayig a big no no at this

I loved the scene were you included the radio news of prostetutes and the begging girl of Kushi's age. This world is not safe and if I be frank in many stories it is shown Kushi leaving Arnav and building up a life of her own. But the chances of it happening is very less and the radio news or the begging girl would have been Kushi's life with no degree, no support, and all alone! You need someone's support to start a life like that. Here she had Ved I think. Absolutely, esp someone as young - single/divore, who lacked family support and education.

Waiting for the next update. Please pm me when u update.

Thank you for writing in, and expressing your thoughts, it was pleasure to read your wonderful comment. Will update soon :)

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

I was lost while searching where and when I've commented or say reserved. Anyway, I am here. 😃

Firstly, hug from my sjde ( I know I know that you are not huggy type, still ). How have you been doing? I also know that I have become an irregular. That is why I guess I am here for the lost time.

Story, stirry. 😊 Rejection, dejection, pain, separation, anguish, guilt, truth, facts everything has been blended well. Its just that arnav getting so easily pardoned by akash was not taken coolly by me. But it is okay after all they are brothers. But from khushi's side I want no stone unturned till arnav is on his knees. Yeah, saddist I am. 😛 According me, he almost deserves that. 😉

I hope that I would be showing myself regular from now on. Hope.

Originally posted by: arnkhunostalgic

wow Aria this in one amazing story, i read it one go, and i am glad i came across this one, please do PM me when you have an update, I would like to see how it goes next

Originally posted by: piyaaich

nyc

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Since you want to see me here regularly, I want an update. 😉

Originally posted by: lostfantacy

you and arshi ...oh my god...!



me claps hand together in glee...

wait let me bring popcorn !! i need to ENJOY THE SHOW.

book marking for now ..give long comments for each chapter.!