JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 87

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks a ton Jaya...But when I was writing this I don't know about anything...the lines were automaticaly coming out from my head and I was just typing them. And yes Jaya you are really a strong writer because you every time took me with you to AdLa's Land. I am grateful to you for this.
P.S. Please don't you want to grill me...please...I am requesting you to do so na...
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Posted: 12 years ago
ok will grill,,, I am writing right now,... but yes going to grill u soon ... watch out
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jayvenk

ok will grill,,, I am writing right now,... but yes going to grill u soon ... watch out


Okay Jaya...and will be waiting for your next updates.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gosh.. and emotional one...!!

Feeling for Adrit...!! 😭




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Posted: 12 years ago
so emotional update.
she has went throuh lots of pain and now he is going seeing her like this.
the following lines touched me 😭😭😭😭

A struggle was going on within,

She felt the touch, it felt familiar, she wanted to see who it was, but her eyelids refused to open, she struggled.

He gently rubbed her fingers with his thumb, comforting,

Shhh. Baby, hushhh, Dr. A is here now he whispered'

Shhh, his finger ran across her cheeks calming her.

She heard his voice, she felt safe.

He placed his hand over hers.

Slowly she quietened down, her breathing rhythmic.

Her fingers found his and tightened around them.

She turned holding his hand tucked against her, she slept calmly.

Each held the other.

Two tears escaped, one from his and one slowly made its way through her lashes.

As he sat beside her, he knew one thing., allow La to find her Dr.A, the curtain that hung on her memories was translucent.

It was nearly dawn when he ever so gently removed his hand,

Mmm she protested, her eyes closed.

I am here La, he whispered into her ears.

Her grasp loosened. He knew her heart had heard.

His lips just touched her forehead.

He closed the door noiselessly behind him


you have writen it so well,

Edited by foram. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i HAVE made everyone cry



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Posted: 12 years ago
making everyone cry or laugh or feel romantic.. its the greatest power of a good writer... who can twist the words so as to bring out the emotions within the readers as well... You definitely have it in you Maam..👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u katyayani,, 😳 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
i completed😃will post lengthy comment later😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
The last update is so emotional Jaya. I cannot express the feelings. You could actual feel for the characters it is written that well. Brilliant.

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