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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kadamvari

its called lip lock to ignorant people like me..Adrit has the only thing in mind for Shyla

truly Mahadev coming from scriptures


it is so very true😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kadamvari

ohh Adrit has to wait for that..well hard for him to wait


along with him even we have to wait... 😉 hard for us as well.. I am already tempted
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Posted: 12 years ago
i think we all girls do convert in to Adrit when he comes near Shyla😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jayvenk

SHOPPING TIME ...
The Most boring thing in this world😡 is SHOPPING😭

It was going to be hectic in Mumbai, the 3 docs had chalked out a programme during the drive itself.

hmm...good idea😉

Ridhi was adamant that she wanted to be there to purchase the rings.

wow ...its also a good idea😆

You guys will pick up something silly, she concluded.

yeah that's true...

She wants a simple gold band Ridhi, how difficult can that be?

Well my Bio teacher once said "The most difficult thing is to choose the simple one..."😛Sir you were right.😆

Ya sure, tell me that after we are at the jewelers.

Yeah...I am waiting for that😆

...

Deciding to meet later in the evening, Naren and Ridhi carried on.

Best of Luck Dr.R and Dr.N

Adrit sank into the Plush sofa and looked around.

Ouch my back is aching now...

This House is soon going to become a Lovely Home Nandu.

hmmm...😉

Need to make some changes for my La, she loves colours he said looking at the stark white interiors...

"Rang, rang mere rang rang mein/rang jai ga tu rang/ sang sang mere sang sang mein...sang aye ga sang...rang sang mera mil jayega/ ang ang tera khil jayega/ rang sang mera mil jayega/ang ang tera khil jayega..."😉

He was on the phone calling one of the top interior decorators in town.

fast worker.👏

He sighed with happiness,

Hope she is feeling better he thought,

hmm...as she had cold already thanks to you Dr.A

As if reading his thoughts her message came through.

Feeling better, in college 😃

wow in college Shylu okay??


Good girl 😛

U Reached?

good question.😆

He looked at the time, Gopu's class!! She is going to lose another mobile.

Yes Amor Mio

Italino?? don't know anything...

What?

Mean, yes My Love Mi Corazon ❤️

😃

If u need something text me.

One dimple.😳

aww

Dimples can only be bartered!!! 😉

😡, Don't like u

aww

I know, now listen to Gopu, will call later, muah

!@#$%😡😡

🤗 Love u angel

...aww

Oh My God , the two guys gaped at the rings that were being displayed for their selection.

great...each time I have got the same...

Ok , how are we going to select, they chorused.

Should close eyes and pick??😕


Accept that you need my help, chimed Ridhi, watching with amusement at their confusion.

thanks for the help😳

Accepted they muttered.

hehe😆

She sat down happily between them, briskly giving instructions to the salesman.

How sweet of you Dr.R

Soon the hundred was reduced to about 10 pairs of absolutely beautiful gold bands.

reduce 100 to 10😲 my God.

Adi, now it is your turn.

hmm

Look at them and feel with your heart, and you will find the perfect pair.

aww..I like the suggestion

His eyes ran over the rings and rested on the last one.

sigh...

Simple she had said.

Simple...choosing simple is the most difficult works.

Yes, simple and perfect. He picked them up.

Simple and perfect...❤️

[THE RING WILL LOOK LIKE A HALO ON YOUR FINGER PRINCESS]


What else are buying for her Adi, Ridhi was questioning him.

What??

Adrit had a question mark written on his face?


What else?

Else means??😕

Ridhi had that "men are useless" look.

Though that's true...

RidhiSweetheart why don't you take care of the "What Else" department please, he gave his best puppy face.

good...

Oh all right, I love shopping, she said putting her hand up in the air with glee.

WHAT??😲

The guys tried to put on equally enthusiastic look rather unsuccessfully.

"KAHA KISI KE LIYE HAI MUMKIN/SABKE LIYE EK SA HONA...THODA SA DIL MERA BHALA HAI...THODA BUDA HAI...SINE MEIN."


Tag along and keep your Cards ready, came the order.

OH No...can relate with Adrit and Naren as my situation always becomes the same when I go with my sister.😕

They groaned and fell behind her.

No use Buddies...

Is she buying for the whole town, Adi whispered to Naren, as he watched the bags piling up.

Well I guess no...😆

I think it is for two towns, Naren whispered back.

I again guess No🤣

Will the two of you stop whispering and make the payment.

Just like my sister...🤣

Yo Mam' , as they hurriedly fished out the cards.

How much they pay by the way??🤣


They paid up dutifully, picked up the bags and started towards the exit.

That's a clever but useless move...🤣

Guy's where do you think you are going?

Next time you should run buddy🤣

WE are not finished, she had a big satisfied smile.


🤣🤣🤣

Now to the men's dept..


🤣🤣

Eeeh, Men's?🤣

Whatever for?

Engagement, remember, Ridhi said mockingly!!


🤣

Our hero has to be all dressed up, she said looking towards Adrit.

Hey I am planning to wear a nice shirt '..


🤣

Hummph went Ridhi even before he completed, shirt' Men'. She muttered something they could not quite understand.

🤣🤣
🤣

She walked ahead, forcing them follow her.🤣

Naren, I have to get all dressed, ?🤣

Err well it is your engagement, not your nuptials.. he guffawed , you will have to be'"all dressed"
🤣

Vaaary funny Naren..ha ha.. as they settled for what seemed like a long session of selecting the right outfit.🤣

Many were rejected, many selected. They laughed and teased till they all agreed on the one.🤣

Ridhi don't know what I would have done with you sweety, he gave her a big hug.🤣

Adrit returned with all the purchases, dialed La's number, she had told him they were going shopping too.

Wonder how she is faring? 🤣

...


Shyla sat munching a chocolate, argued with Tarun, giggled along with Viji, even as her Mumma, aunts and whole lot of ladies sat in the shop selecting sarees.


🤣Best of Luck Shyla...

Shylu, how about coming over here and helping us select, it is your engagement dear.

🤣
🤣

Halfheartedly she got up, Ma, can't I just wear a Salwar suit, she asked for the nth time.🤣

There was a chorus of NO🤣

Sitting down she made an effort, too many sarees and her mother did not seem to agree to any of the ones she chose.🤣

Shylu it is for your engagement, not for daily wear.🤣

Then mama, why don't you select one for me.🤣

She got an ear full for that suggestion.🤣

So Sorry for laughing...actually usually my Ma,Baba and now my Sister select outfits for me. SO I can Sympathaize with La but can't control my 🤣

Her mobile rang.

Dr.A, She looked towards Vishak, who understood.

Bhaiyya Adrit heard Vishak's voice,

Where is your Di?

Getting scolded by everyone,

Now what did she do.

She does not want to wear a saree for the engagement.

Hmmm, really,

And she has been eating chocolates and chasing Tarun all over the shop instead of helping Mami, Vishak explained.

Give me phone Vishak, Tarun was trying to grab the mobile.

NO Tarun, wait..

If you don't give I will tell everyone who is calling.,

Adrit grinned, the brat.

Bhaiyya, when are you coming back. What are you getting for me? A series of questions followed.

After answering patiently,

Tarun can you call your Di? Please.

Bhaiyya, she cannot get up now, he then launched into a running commentary,

Mami is putting different sarees on her,

Di is making different faces for each of them.

She is trying to run with all the sarees on her, Tarun said laughing out loud.

Viji Di is teasing her and running behind her.

Oops'

What happened Tarun, he was thoroughly enjoying the narration

She tripped and almost fell,

Mami has put her in a chair, and told her not to move.

Oh Ho Bhaiyya.

Now what Tarun asked an amused Adrit.

She is searching for chocolates, which I took from her bag he giggled.

I am getting really angry looks, not sure why ,Tarun was all innocence.

She is trying to get up, getting a glare from Mami.

Adi heard a sharp Shylu, sit down,

He was laughing at all the commotion.

[PRINCESS ENJOY YOURSELF]

Tarun tell your Di will call her later.

Ok bhaiyya.

@red...I enjoy the whole situation and can't help but laughing...



Great updates Jaya...
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Posted: 12 years ago
The second last update was very sad the now one when he hugged his Shylu's memories. 😭

This update cheers me up thanks for these lovely memories of our Adla.
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Posted: 12 years ago
rimi darling thank u dear and it was in spanish in italian it is il mio amore 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
Now that the invites are out, and atleast the bride is coming...have a few questions:

1. Will it be a Maha Episode for the engagement ?
2. When can we start seeing the promos ?
3. Most importantly, what is the menu for the feast ?

Question for Kadamvari:
Originally posted by Kadamvari

"ohh Adrit has to wait for that..well hard for him to wait..."


We have been speculating, rightly or wrongly about people connected to the show visitng the forum...Are you Adrit, by any chance 😉 ? Kidding only 😆...but are you 😕 ?



Dia
Edited by speedgal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dia i am a girl.,28 , widowed before marriage ..and not ready to marry soon😆

so no chance of being Adrit in this birth..

but ya madly in love with Moharika and love to imagine them in those scenes written by Jaya..an so wait for those descriptions
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Posted: 12 years ago
THEIR SOULS REACH OUT...

He did not sleep a wink that night , several times he got up to check on her.

He sat beside the bed and gazed at her face.

Gently tucked a strand of hair behind her ears.

Her cheeks a little pale but still had that curve on which his knuckles had grazed a thousand times.

He moved forward and allowed himself to do it again, a catch forming in his throat as he did so.

She was deep in medicine induced slumber, but somewhere in her subconscious mind, felt his gentle fingers.

Her fingers moved.

He stopped; afraid he might have woken her.

She was still fast asleep, but her fingers moved up touching his hand lightly, her eyelids fluttered and she moved her head sideways, her breathing rasped and she moaned as if in pain, her legs kicking against the sheets.

A struggle was going on within,

She felt the touch, it felt familiar, she wanted to see who it was, but her eyelids refused to open, she struggled.

He gently rubbed her fingers with his thumb, comforting,

Shhh. Baby, hushhh, Dr. A is here now he whispered'

Shhh, his finger ran across her cheeks calming her.

She heard his voice, she felt safe.

He placed his hand over hers.

Slowly she quietened down, her breathing rhythmic.

Her fingers found his and tightened around them.

She turned holding his hand tucked against her, she slept calmly.

Each held the other.

Two tears escaped, one from his and one slowly made its way through her lashes.

As he sat beside her, he knew one thing., allow La to find her Dr.A, the curtain that hung on her memories was translucent.

It was nearly dawn when he ever so gently removed his hand,

Mmm she protested, her eyes closed.

I am here La, he whispered into her ears.

Her grasp loosened. He knew her heart had heard.

His lips just touched her forehead.

He closed the door noiselessly behind him

...

Adrit and the chief discussed Shyla at length.

I cannot believe this Adrit, It seems like a miracle, the chief was telling him.

Two years, God does work in his own mysterious ways.

The chief handed over all the files and reports of all the hospitals in which she had been admitted.

There were still so many unanswered questions.

But priority was Shyla. Nothing else mattered, all other things could wait.

Naren and Ridhi were coming in sometime during the day

Sitting in his room he looked through the reports.


She was unconscious when she was found. She had been admitted by some villagers. A few names were also mentioned. They had even come in regularly to take care of her.

Yes chief god does work in mysterious ways, he thought to himself.

Her brain scan were clear, Naren will be able to give him a better picture.

Her speech was another mystery, nothing was wrong with her voice box!!

Why doesn't she speak? Shock?

Other than several deep cuts on her arms, glass pieces and thorns had to be removed.

She had suffered a fractured leg and a dislocated hip.


High fever, panic attacks, nightmares.

Momentarily he stopped, not wanting read any further.. But he had too.

He searched for any report on Head injuries, there were none!!!

He continued reading like a doctor, trying so hard not to be affected.

The scar on the face was due to a glass piece, it had narrowly missed going into her eyes.

No,, oh god No, he closed his eyes, the pain, the suffering, the trauma she must have gone through.

Not knowing, Not knowing... La not knowing who she was, and I not knowing you were alive La.

A sound of deep sorrow escaped his lips.



Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i will seriously cry jay..i am feeling each and every word in depth of my heart..don't allow your finger to ever stop
and now she had no brain injury..neither voice box is damaged ..then what is stopping her to remember and talk..
as usual breath taking ud
Edited by Kadamvari - 12 years ago

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