JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 109

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kadamvari

i want to know sona's reaction now :P


To the Blessings and Celebrations or to the Lessons 😃?

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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww how sweet is that kiss when u share it with the one you love from all ur heart. Every time they come together gets goosebumps. Love is beautiful.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oho round goll wala but that is mount Everest. I can imagine Shyla going crazy at the sight. That kiss was sweet. Nice 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
jaya i dnt hav words...its really romantic...n such a sweet update...thank you...always ur way of writing has magic yaar...go ahead...wtng to see shyla recover n remember all these moments soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry , i was away for a while. Busy with exams. And have to go through lots of pages. So wil coment later but pls keep pming me. I just love moharika and adla. The last update was superb. Big gol round walas and that kiss was so passionate ☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
You have captured romance so well much better than many would. Get on board of DKDM screenplay panel. I think nobody will have any complains ever. U can write such good scenes it will be amazing when it would gets translated on screen. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: consuela

You have captured romance so well much better than many would. Get on board of DKDM screenplay panel. I think nobody will have any complains ever. U can write such good scenes it will be amazing when it would gets translated on screen. 😉



No yaar. They may show Parvathi going bonkers over gold round wala...aka laddo but no chance of lip talk leasons from Mahadev...only lessons. Just a story can be made into Just a serial. That would me yummy.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice nice so finally Adi claims his stake. Good one doc. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
That kiss was amazing so was that mountain ferreros 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
As always a late comer... But read and enjoyed everything to the fullest👍🏼

Kis kis ko pyaar du😆
Update soon Jiakka

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