JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 107

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Posted: 12 years ago
U hold the continuity very well Jaya Akka. And the efforts making the siggies is much appreciated. Waiting for next...is it going to be Now or Then ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi da dia whre disappeared? not to be seen
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jayvenk

hi da dia whre disappeared? not to be seen



Illa ma...was here only. But no time/energy for anything else as me managing house + work + kids + outside alone 😭. Did manage a couple of posts in CNAT though...could not help myself 😉.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super senti update. So close yet so far is what u call this. 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..jaya Akka..awesome update👏..for a second i thought La rememberd Dr.A..but happy that she is feeling some warmth and closeness in him..poor Adi..his pain was felt..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww NOW so touchy update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ekdum faadu emotional update the last one. Aww so sad and at the same time because it was Adla it was like the sweetest pain. They are together and nothing else matters. He will always be there for her.
Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update! Sorry i wasn't available for commenting! Exams...but now i read it all in one go! Everything is so perfect, i am eagerly waiting for the moment, when Adrit and Shyla will reconcile! Continue soon and thanks for PMing me!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update Jayshree the last one. I like the continuity of the story and the way u have kept us glued to it right form the start. Moving nicely from present to past and again to present that way we are always aware of the current situation in the story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
BLESSINGS AND SURPRISE

He held her hand in his, and felt her touching and turningthe ring that she had just slipped on his finger, the etched A was what she felt, their family and friends ssurrounded but they were alone with each other.

She wanted to move into his arms, wanted to be held, she gripped his hand more tightly, he sensed her need and drew her arm through his bringing close against him.

Together they accepted all the wonderful wishes that poured in for them.

Ridhi and Naren hugged them together. The four friends stood in a small circle each filled with happiness for the other. Ridhi kissed shylu's cheeks, sweety i feel you have got married not just engaged she whispered. Shut up Ridhi, Naren whispered, this Dr. A will get ideas, he grinned and took her in a hug.

Blessing from all the elders was taken. As they bowed to touch Himant and Mala's feet, they were embraced. Adrit, today we are truly blessed Himant said in an emotional voice, we see so much love between the two. Mala held Shyla and lovingly looked towards Adrit, may the two of you be like shiv and parvati, eternally together.

The crowd was moving towards the yummy food that had been laid out.

Naren, Ridhi and Adi exchanged glances and winked.

Shyla looked from one to the other, what are you are all grinning for?

Nothing sweetheart, I am hungry, Naren was already walking towards the food counter.

As they entered the softly blowing curtains of the large tent, Shyla curiously glanced at a large silk covered pyramid like structure. Adrit grinned as he watched her. Naren get your camera ready.

Come on princess, taking her towards the table. The guests gathered around to see what the surprise could be.

Go on angel, he said indulgently, see what is beneath the silk.

She gave it a tug, gasped, her face a picture of surprise, her mouth went round and her eyes sparkled, Adi, she squealed as she saw the pyramid of Round gold wala.


Forgetting the crowd that stood around she threw her hands around Adi's neck. I am going to cry she whispered into his ears.

No you wont La, do the honours. She did not need a second invitation, she pulled out a couple of Ferrero Rocher , popped one in her and mouth and held one to his lips.

The table was strewn with small gift boxes of FR for every guest. Nandu, Tarun and Vishak had trays laden with the chocolates and had started serving the guests.


The celebrations continued with dancing and singing.Gang of girls rocked away to My Name is Sheela...


Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago

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