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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#251

awesome update dr.

watng fr th suspnce to gt ovr.

continue soon.

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

nice update
party night scene superb
love the way she sleeps in his arms
flashback scene was nice
poor ariya
arjun forgot everything still he couldn't see riya like this... nice
update soon

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Nyc. Bt ariya ko kisne kidnap kiya???

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#254

sorry for the late comment...
superb update...
hmmm so arjun having some pull towards riya...
ariya flashbacks were lovely...
hope etf finds them soon... but who kidnapped them??
continue soon...

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Gorasiya Priya

@Priya_Gorasiya

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#255

it was awesome di

head's of to you di

riya such me arjun ke pyar me pagal ho gai hai she is totally made she go to meet arjun at 4:30 am god

i love flashback of arjun and riya before their marriage

di pls iss ss me kuch bhi kar ke unke marriage ko describe kijiyega pls for me i am dying to read their marriage function and their marriage pla di as flashback hi sahi but pls di pls pls pls

precap is too goood and worried di

and fantastic update di pls pls pls pls pls pls pls update soon and tnx for pm di

this is for u di

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

Thanks frs for liking n commenting..
i will pist last 2/3part soon,...
hop u like...
n sorry for any error..

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#257

Here is song link--shayad yahi to pyaar hai..luky movie
https://m.youtube.com/watch?gl=IN&client=mv-google&hl=en&v=ReStNwTrQUE
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PART=11
"Ek aajanavi saw ahsas...kuch ankahi baten.."

SCENCE-
CHAUHAAN MANTIONS
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Apko ehsa kyun lagta hai,ye sab arjun ne kiya hai,
aap bina sonche samjhe kise per eljaam nahi laga sakte mr rathor,
Mrs ch-siya baita tum,
Sameer-tum..
siya-kyun koe problem hai,
Mr ch to siya-kuch pata chala siya arjun per ye attack kon kerva raha hai..
Siya-Abhi tak to koe info haath nahi lagi uncle,bus etana pata chala hai,ensab ke piche kise sikander ka hath hai,
(sameer was confuse)
Arjun per attack,sikander ye sab ho kya raha hai,kuch to hai jo mujhe pata nahi,
Sameer-aap log kuch chupa rahe hai,jo koe bhi baat hai saaf saaf bata dejiye,
sikander ka or arjun ka kya lena dena hai..
mr n mrs chauhaan-hamen nahi pata vo hamare baite ko koe kyun marna chahta hain,humari to kisi se koe doshamani bhi nahi,
Sa-aap sayad sahi keh rahi hai,per arjun ke sikander ke sath hai,
ager dono ke gayab hone
main sikander ka koe haath hai,to dono ke jaan es waqt khatare main hai,
dammit kis baat ka wait ker rahen hain aap log,tab log un ke moot ke khabar leker ayengen tab..
Mrs ch-nooo kuch nahi hoga mere baide ko,main dobara apne baite ko nahi kho sakti nahi kho sakti..
she fall on a couch n started crying..
mr ch consol her..
(Siya yelled on rathor)
Ye kya tarika hai mr rathor kise se sath baat kerne ka,
siya goes near to mrs ch n ask,
aap thik to hain na aunty,
aunty plz sab sach sach bata dijiye..
plz anuty..
Mrs ch looks up to her husband..
her husband nodded his head in possitive,
Finaly mrs ch spook..
first she took a long breath

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#258

n then closed her eyes..
the whole insident running her mind..like a movies..
Mr ch-takriban one year
three month purani baat hai,
30 march 2012...
vo din meri life ka sabse mushkil din tha,
Aaj tak mere hathon sare operation sucsees ful rahe per use dil,i fail first time,
i lost my son abhinav..i lost
(tears continusly coming her eyes..she wiped her tears n again spook),
i was fail first time,main apne eklote baite ko nahi bacha paye,
main operation theater se bahar nikali he the tabhi ek or case aa gaya..
lagbhag 25 Saal ka ek ladka mere samne jindagi or moot se lad raha tha,uske heart per goli lagi the..
or shayad vo kisi unchi jagah se gira tha jiske vajah se uske ser se kaphi khoon beh chuka tha,
usaki jaan bachane ka mere pass ek he rasta tha..
uska dosara heart tranplant kerna,
shayad god ke yahi marji the,
mera baita mer ker bhi nahi mara,
main apne baite ka heart arjun ke body main transplant kiya..
operation to success ful raha..but vo comma main chala gaya,
na to hum uski family ke baare main jante they or na he uska naam..
Uske haath her ek tato bana tha jispe arjun lvs R*** kuch likha tha per vo shayad choot lagne ke vajah se mit gaya tha,
ek baat to conformed ho gaye ke uska naam arjun hai..
tab se ham use aapna baita manane lage..vo tato to opration ke baad chala gaya,
per hamen kya pata tha,us per phir se jaan leva hamlen hone lagengi..hamen yahan ana he nahi chahiye tha,kyun hamne arjun ke baat mani, kyun..?
teen mahine pehale vo cooma se bahar aya..
etafak keh lijiye ya hamari kismaat..use apni pichali life ke baare main kuch yaad nahi tha..kuch bhi nahi,
hamne use naye pahchaan di,ek naya naam arjun abhinav chauhaan..
per comma se bahar ane ke baad usake sath kuch ajeeb sa hone laga..
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Arjun ye kya ker rahen hai,
chodiye mujhe kaphi late ho gaya hai

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#259

Ar-kya ker raha hon..apne hone vali bibi ko dekh raha hoon..
Ri-arjun jaeye ager kise ne dekh liya to..
Ar-dekhane do main kise se nahi darta..
Ri-Maa aap yahan ..
Arjun imedeatly remove his hold n look back..
Riya start laughing hahheee..
abhi to aap bade shaan se keh rahe the ,ke aap kise se nahi darte to ab kya tha..
Acchha ji mere sath majak,ye majak tumhen bahoot menga padega riya,
he pulled riya toward him..
before she knew giv a soft kiss on her lips..
sje blushes n hide her face on his chest..
Ar-wishper huskily riyaa
Ri-humm..
tumhenpata hai mehandi ke rang ka matlab kya hota hai,
she nodded in negative,
Ar-kehaten hai ager mehadi ka rang dark ho to uska pati use bahoot pyaar kerta hai,
Tumhen kya lagta hai riya..
riya blushes more her face changes red..she wishper..
mujhe color ka to pata nahi,per ye pata hai,
ke aap mujhase bahoot pyaar kerten hai..
Arjun feel proud for riya being in his life,
He bend closer n wanna to kiss her but..
before he do somone knok the door..
Uff ye pyaar ke doshman..
bus ek raat ke baat or hai meri jaan uske baat to tum meri ho,
she blushes n give one pick on his cheeks.
ab jaldy jaeye..
Arjun turned toward window..
before he go down..
Ri-arjunnn..
Ar-haan kya hooya jaane dene ka man nahi hai..ager tum kaho to hum aaj ke raat..
Ri-arjun aap bhi naa jaeye yahan se or plz apna khayal rakhana ..
Ar-tum to ehse keh rahi ho jaise aaj ke baad main ..main kbhi vaapas aonga he nahi..
Ri-arjunn shut up ,
she put her hand on arjun mouth..
her eyes gets moised,
Arjun kissed her hand n say sorry..
sorry my dr if i hurt to now plz smile..tumhen pata hain na main tumhare face per udasi nahi dekh sakta..
he kissed her tears n giv one tight warmth hug...
n afer few minute he left there,
Date-30 march 2012
Ariya wedding day-
riya was very excited ...

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#260

Ri-aaj main kitani khush hoon,finaly meri or arjunle sadhi hone vali hai,
Sudenly she got one call..
she thoght it may be arjum..
she imedeatly pick the call,
Hello arjun tum bhi ab kuch timevke he to baat reh gaye hai,thoda saber nahi ker sakte..
A voice coming from other side..Hahhhaaa ..bahoot betab ho rahi ho arjun se milane ko..ager vo tumhen kaphi mile he naa..
Ri-fearly ..kon hai kon bol rahe ho,or ye kya bakbaas ker rahe ho..
Hahhaa main koe bakbas nahi ker raha hoon,
if u wanna to save ur wood ne husband to jaldy se es adress per aa jao..
or haan ager kise ko bhi es baare main bataya to..
hahhaaahhaa
She tried arjun no many times but its switch off ..
ye arjun ka no swtich off kyun aa raha hai..
she goes directly there without informing any one..
it was sikander which plane game for arjun,
when arjun came there with barat..
he got the sam call..if u wanna to save ur wood be wife..bina kisse ko inform kiye ..
palli hill(fack name) aa jao..
arjun cut the call n warn sameer dont follow him n drove his car to the giver location..
when arjun reached there he saw sik held riya by her hair n arkun shouted..
Tumhari dhushmani mujh se hai,khood do riya ko..
Sik-are bahoot takleef ho rahi hai..
there is small fight bw sik n arjun..
at last sik shoot toward riya..
but main time arjun come in mid n the goli hit his heart
Ri-Arjunnn (screemed)
chood do mujhe arjunke pass jane do..nooo..
Sik -laughh hahhaa..
order her man-uda ker fank do ese es khaye ke niche..
sik man arjun ko uda ker khaye ke niche phenk dete hai..

Riya screemed out of her voice,nooo choddd do arjun ko ,plzzz chod do
.arjunnn...she felt dizzly n fall on a ground ,
soon sam n all etf member come there,
Sameer saw riya laying on a ground goes near n found she is unconsious...
but no sign of arjun there,
TBC-

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago