ARIYA SS:U R MINE..always mine*COMPLETED* - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago
back with next part ,hop u like-
PART=10
"Kyun dil manane ko tayaar nahi..
ke tum koe or ho.."


SCENCE-
One room, it was litle dark..may be its evening time,n there is no source of
other light,
one man n girl was tied with rope..
man succesful to free himself,man trying to recognised the place,
(Man talk to himsel)
Man-Ahh mera ser etana bhari kyun lag raha hai,or ye kon se jagah hai,or vo kahan hai,vo bhi to mere sath the,
kahin use..
(he was litle warried for her)

(finaly he saw her)
she was laid on a flore
(May be she is unconsious),
her leg n hand were tied with rop n her face was tied with cloths,
.
Man-vooo thik to hai na,mujhe jaldy jaker check kerna hoga,(Ahhh per mera ser etana kyun ghum raha hai,)
(Man stood n move toward girl..He comes closer n stood near hern pathes her cheeks)
Man-r u all right..
hey open ur eyes,
(First he remove rope from her hand n legs then clothes jisase uska muh band tha)
riya riya tum thik to ho nah,
kuch bolo plz,
open ur eyes ..
(He lift her face up n put on his lap)
he continusly screemed her name ..but no reply..
----
WHAT HAPPENED FEW OURS BEFORE-(in party night)
arjun hug riya tight n say..
yes i prome main tumhen jhod ker kabhi nahi jaonga,
(he hv no idea why he says all this)
yes u r mine always mine..
riya feel after a long time ,
use uski life bavip mil gaye,
use uska arjun vapis mil gaya,
She hug arjun tightly as never wanna to let him go any where again from her,
Boths lost each others..
unwere the fact that his family n sameer watching all this,
sameer comes near n say i m extrimaly sorry vo riya ke vajah se.. (stop in mid)
arjun come back is sence..he imedeatly parted that hug,
he hav no idea when she sleep in his arms..
Ar-noo even i m sorry..vo oo accualy..(Stil holding riya )


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Posted: 12 years ago

(sameer was also confused is he is arjun or arjun abhinav chauhaan)

Sameer lift her in his arms,
n drop her in her house,
she was peace fully sleeping in her room..
~~
IN MOR-TIME 4:00-
Nooo plz dont do this..
no use chod do nooo..
Sikander-Achha huya rawte jo tum aa gaye,
bahoot pyaar kerte ho apni riya se,
per kya karon tumhari khushiya mujhse bardash nahi hooti..
sikaander pointed gun..n shoot..
goli hitts arjun's heart..
Riya screeamed...
Arjunnn...!!!!!
.
she woke up,found herself in her room,main yahan kaise or arjun..
She is breathing havily,
arjun arjun ..arjun ko kuch nahi hoga..vo sikander phir se mere arjun ko..
no ehsa kuch nahi hoga..
she goes bathroom n spead water on her face,
after shawer,she comes out bathroom but her mind is stil thinking about him,
Ri-ab main ek pal ke liye bhi arjun ko khud se door nahi jaane dongi,
mujhe abhi arjun se milana hai..

--
TIME :-4:30
riya goes chauhaan house-
outside chauhaan house-
riya to watchman-dekhiye mujhe arjun se milana hai,
Wat-Chote malik es waqt gher per nahi hai,
vo to party khatam hone ke kuch der baad he kahin chale gaye..
Ri-dekhiye mera unse milna bahoot jarori hai,
apko kuch to pata hoga vo kahan gaye honge,
(she pleaded ..)
Wat-dekhiye mujhe jayada to kuch nahi pata,chote malik kuch pareshaan lag rahe they,or main to ek mamoli sa noker hoon bhala mujhe kaise pata hoga..
(riya talk to herself)per shayad mujhe pata hai arjun kahan ho sakte hain,
(she goes that place n finaly she found him)
arjun..she run toward him n hug him tightly,arjun aap thik to hain naa pata hai main kitana dar gaye the,
(Arjun was lost in his thought,
use pata he nahi chala riya kab aye)
riya stil hugging arjun,but arjun not...
Ar-tum yahan..tum yahan kya ker rahi hoo,
Ri-Arjun tum ehsa kyun keh rahe hai...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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kya ab aap mujhase paar ne kerte,
(arjun dont kno what to say)
Ar-dekho plz tum jaisa samajh rahi ho,vaisa kuch nahi hai,
i meen yes main arjun hoon per tumhara arjun nahi hoon,
Riya parted that hug n looked up in her face,Arjun Ri-aap ehsa kyun bol rahe hai,aap majak ker rahe hai,
dekhiye aapko pata hai na mujhe majak paand nahi,
she again hug him tightly,
Arjun tired to remove her hold..
Arjun in bit angry mood..
arjun hold her shoulder tightly ..
mare taraf dekho dekho mujhe..
main nahi janta tum mujhe kya samajh rahi hoo..
per ye sach hai,
main tumhen nahi janta,
looking in her deep black eyes,
(in mind-per bhi pata nahi kyun main tumhare taraf khicha chala ata hoon, chahte huye bhi tumse door nahi reh paa raha hoo..)
drops fall in riya's eyes..
ager aap mere arjun nahi to aap yahan kya ker rahe hai,
ye jagah to arjun ko pasand the,
vo jab bhi pareshaan hoten they vo yaahan ate they..
~~
flash-
ONE BEACH-MID NIGHT
Ar-riya tum pata hai,
main jab bhi pareshan hota hoon yaa akela mehsoos kerta hoon ,
yahan aa ker mujhe bahoot sakun milta hai,
Riya comes closer arjun n hold his hand,
(litle sad) mujhe laga tha ke mere sath aap kabhi akela or udas..
(arjun put hand on her mouth)
Ar-shh riya tum jaisa samajh rahi hoo ehsa kuch nahi hai,
Ri-per aaj yahan ane ka karan jaan sakti hoon,
Arjun smiles n hug her tightly..vo kya hai meri jaan,
aaj akhiri baar es jagaha ko albida kehane aya hoon,
kyun kal ke baad mujhe yahan ane ke koe jarorat nahi hai,
Riya inocently..
achha ji kaal ehsi kya khas baat hai,
Arjun pulled her more closer n kissed her cheeks..
Vo kya hai na..
kal ke din koe very special person meri life main ane vala hai,mrs arjun rawte ban ker,ab ek or din bhi usase door reh pana..arjun leand closer ...
Riya blushes n hide her face on her chest..
Ar-


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Posted: 12 years ago

Ri-kya main jaan sakti hoon vo somone special kon hai,
Ar-jaanane ke kya jarorat hai,main tumhen dikha he deta hoon,
Arjun ..chodiye dekhiye kya ker rahen hain aap..
dekhiye kaphi raat ho gaye hai,aab hame apne apne gher jaana chahiye,
Ar-riya abhi to tum mere pass aye ho,aab gher jaane ke baat..nooo etani asani se tumhen nahi jane donga,
Ri-noo arjun chodiye aap bhul rahe hain ke kal hamare shadi hai,
Ar-arjun sab kuch bhul sakta hai,per tumhen. kabhi nahi bhul sakta riya, kabhi nahi..marne ke baad bhi nahi,
Arjunnn...she put her hand on her mouth..aaj to keh diya,per ager dobara kaha na to..(Her eyes become moised)
arjun kissed her hand
Ar-hey relex my jaan..pulled her closer n give her a warmth hug, relex just relex,..tum bhi na jara jara se baat per rone lagti hoon,
riya mumered bw sobing..
mom ne mana kiya tha shadi se pehale ladke se nahi milte,
aap ke jor dene per main phir bhi aye aapse milane aa gaye..
or aap hai ke marne ke baat ker rahe hai,
~~
Ri-aap ne chut kaha tha arjun us raat,aapne kaha tha aap mujhe kabhi nahi bhulenge per aap..
aapko koe andaja bhi hai,
asp ke bina ek ek saal kaise gujara hai,
mera dil kabhi manane ko tayaar he nahi tha,ke aap mujhe chood ker chale gaye,
.
kistani baar khud ko jinada rakha bus es umeed main ,
ke kabhi na kabhi aap vapees ayenge per..
she culdnt complete her sentence..
n runs there arjun runs behind her..
even he didnt kno her but his heart didnt listen his mind..
why he attached her emosion,
whyyy why why..
Arjun shouted from behind..
riya roko just listen to me,
~~~
PRESENT-
Ar-Ahh mujhe kuch yaad nahi..
hum us texi main they ,per usake baad hamare saath kya huya ,or hum yahan.
He again pathes her face.
god damit riya plz open ur eyes
Al last she open her eyes
arjun..riya
TBC-
SO HOW WAS THAT PART


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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay me first wid like...
super happy di
awesum update di
loved it
grt writer u r di
siki uff..
ariya rocks!!
yahoo pm se pehle..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update :) loved it
arjun was so worried for riya when he didn't see her at first
riya fell asleep in his arms and rathore confused where he is arjun rawte or arjun chauhan
he went to the same place where arjun used to go
flashback was lovely
thank god riya opened her eyes
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u dear
u posted it
was waiting for this one...
pls continue soon
pls...
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanx dr u update it
awesome de
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it...!
awesome ariya flash backs...!
arjun dont remb her but has a certain pull toward riya...!
im loving it!!!
plz cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome part...
loved the flash backs...
update soon...

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