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arthi_r

@arthi_r

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Posted: 12 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal
Shayam is such a...🤬how can Arnav not know about him...?? and how can Anjali/Geet hide this all from him...?? I mean he she doesnt love her and she has even seen him eyeing her daughter...how can she let that so-called man anywhere her child and her family...?? Thats sick...

Cant wait for next chapter...up-date soon...😊

shyam is evil and has played with too many lives .. But according to anjali he has helped her... Moreover he doesn't know shyam has bad intentions on her daughter or his sick actions...
More evil to come...
Stay tuned yaar

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starsarun

@starsarun

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#482

Hey!! Why are you not updating? You know I tjought once u give an update I will let u know that I had joined IF recently. Coz I read ur FF as non IF member. So now I will be able to comment too. But what happen ? Where r u? I hope u r fine. Will wait for ur update.
About ur FF I adore them. This one and My little mistress. Totally diff., painful but nice. :)

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Shilpa

@HerFiction

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#483

Hey read this nw . I am totally in love with it. Pls continue soon.

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Shilpa

@HerFiction

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#484

Hey read from first, not once but twice. Please update.

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kutkut12

@kutkut12

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#485

oh so shyam messed with anjali's life. okay now I can hope for a happy ending for all except that devil and buaji

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#486

just read all 15 chapters

loved the story

why do i have a feeling that khushi is titli

wonder when will arnav get to know this

n his misconception will get cleared about khushi

payal did the right thing..she is a true sister

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RaatkiRani

@RaatkiRani

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#487

Your story has a good plot line; however you really need to work on your sentence structure.

Random errors take away from the genuineness of your writing

Also, the spacing is terrible and it hurts the eyes

There are also random question mark and designs in the body after each sentence that is very, very distracting and hard on the eyes.

All the best with your story.

Edited by RaatkiRani - 11 years ago

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kajal511

@kajal511

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#488

waiting,,,,,,,,,,,
plzzz update soon yaar
hope u r ok
impatiently waiting for ur pdates
where r u

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Tanvi

@tanu123

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#489

wen r u goin 2 update??

hope ur OK...plz update soon

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binimoti

@binimoti

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#490

hey update soon yaar, its been a while now

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