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Posted: 12 years ago
a very interesting update covering not only arnav's but also buajis past ..good payal confronted her
the bond between arnav n khushi is amazing , i am glad he felt something for the sick khushi ..very well written
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Posted: 12 years ago
Plz update soon Art

N keep the pms comin
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Posted: 12 years ago
Guys I'm updating this through phone so pls ignore mistakes... And also the length...
next part...

Akash was a happy man... He whistled as he drove through the streets of Lucknow... He was really hoping to meet her... He switched on the radio and the song mere sapno ki rani from movie Aradhna flooded the car... He smiled on hearing it as it suited his state of mind... He hummed along the song as he steered the vehicle... But then he breaked suddenly when he saw someone come infront of the car... He looked up oly to see her... His sapno ki rani was standing there shivering...eyes closed and her hand clutching her duppata to her chest... He kept staring at her... After few min she opened her doe eyes and akash felt himself drown in their depths... But what disturbed him was the presence of tears in them... He quickly got out of the car and stopped her before she left...
AAP teek ho???? are u hurt???? he asked her searching for any sign of pain in her eyes...
nahi... sorry she said... But her whole body was still shivering...
I think ur unwell mam... akash told her in a calm voice...
I'm fine just let me be... she yelled at him... ek bar kahe tho samaj nahi ata hai kya????? she continued as tears fell from her eyes... akeli ladki dheki tho a gaya AAP... she yelled at him again...
akash just had enough.. He held her by her elbow and dragged her into the car... He pushed her in and closed the door... He then came back to the driver seat... Buckled up and started the car with a stern face... kaha Jana hai aapko???? I dont have the whole day for ur tantrums... he told her.. All the while concentrating on the road... There was silent in the car but it was disturbed by her sobs...
bauji... she whispered as the sobs shook her fragile body...he is in the hospital... he...he... just had a heart attack...she cried...
which hospital...? I'll drop u... if u want tat is...he said as a slight spread on his cheek...
hmmm city hospital... she said quietly...thanku and sorry saying she started twisting the end of her duppata on her lap...
Akash signed... Great... now may be he could find out where she lives and her name... He smiled internally as he drove towards the hospital...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav drove like a maniac from Lucknow... He travelled a 7 hr journey just in 5... In the mean time, he had called Pritvi (arnav's security head) every half hour... He barged into the hospital as he reached there...Pritvi... update he yelled...
Sir... mam is serious... the doc said if she dint come out of it within the next 5 hrs, then... he stopped... As Arnav was not there... He had entered the ICU, much to the irritation of the nurse there... sir... u cant... butbefore she could even open her mouth for more Arnav shot her a "dont mess with me" look... The nurse left the room hoping to find a doctor to get this man out of the ICU... Arnav went closer to Kushi... he dint know what to do... He just sat near her and closed his eyes... He hated the hospitals... This whole place reminded him of the worst times in his life... Suddenly he saw the door open Arnav beta...cried Komal aunty... teek tho ho jayegi na???? she cried again...holding his hand...yeh sab kaise hua???? asked uncle
wo... gir gayi... aur Arnav started but was intrupted by Kamya...bacchi hai... she slipped and fell down... u are talking as though we pushed... she said twisting her lips... She turned to Arnav tat is y I told u beta... stay away from such down market dpeople... she said throwing a warning glance at him... The Kumars just hung onto each other as they cried... Arnav stood as a mute spectator to all this... He remembered Kamya's treat... He knew if he said a word she would kill his Titli and her family... He could never let that happen... He hung his head down as he followed her out... But he could just leave... He came back inside and held her hand and kissed her forehead... That is when he saw her finger move... After that all he remembered was the doc comming out and telling them tat his Titli was fine and she would flutter like always... Kamya then pulled Arnav and left from there...
Arnav came out from his memory... He stood neat the girl and held her hand... Unknowingly he bent down and kissed her forehead... He stood up and waited for something to happen... But when he realised what he was doing he removed his hand and stepped away...
how could I... did I just compare my Titli to this...this...w***e??? no no nohe was irritated he drew his fingers through his thick mare... He moved away and left the ICU... Pritvi saw as his boss left the room but within few min he saw doctors and nurses barge into the room... He contemplated on calling his boss but then thought otherwise... After half an hour Arnav came in... The docs also came out... Arnav was called in...u c Mr Raizada... ur wife needs help... hmmm actually she was bought in with severe case of food poisoning... but apart from tat her blood samples have traces of xxx drug... the doctor explained showing him the reports...but it doesnt seem that she was adddicted too much... she was drunk also... heavily...hmmm u understand what we are saying right sir... she needs a rehab treatment... the doc suggested... Arnav dint know what to say... he couldnt believe what he was hearing... so what do u want me to do???? he asked emotionless...

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Edited by ar_art - 12 years ago
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shukriya payal said as she ran into the hospital... She was thankfull to this unknown man for helping her out and prayed that he shd get what he wishes... she ran towards the ICU... There inside the room filled with machines, she saw her father's sleeping form... But as soon as she reached near him, shashi opened his eyes...
Payaliya he whispered... Making her shocked and really happy...
bauji... aap bol sakte hai... (dad u can talk) she cried in happiness...
beta... he whispered again...suno... he started holding her hand in his...Kushi... use doondo... mene Komal se vada kiya tha... samb ko chodo... use doondo... mere atma ki sh..shanti keliye... dooondo... he told her... His breadth getting heavier... vada karo beta... sabko chodo... sirf use doondo... vada karo he asked her holding her hand tightly...
bauji... hum vada karthey hai... parbut she stopped as a sound of beep filled the whole room... Doctors rushed into the room and sent her out... She stood outside the door, peeping through the small provision given... The doctors tried to revive him, but were not successful... After 15 min they came out telling her so... She heard her mother crying and buaji shouting for her nadhkishore... But Payal could only here the promise her father had taken before his death... Wiping away the tears, she paid the money and took her father's body home... She handled the cremation and other respects according to rituals...payal had changed... All the time she remembered oly the promise... She did few calls and had formulated a plan to search for Kushi... But in all this she had excluded her Amma and Buaji... After 24 hrs, these two people would come to know what payal has planned for them...
Edited by ar_art - 12 years ago
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Anjali stood infront of the full length mirror... She looked at herself in the mirror... Marks of love... She thought as her eyes glances the bruises on her body...yes the marks of loving someone else... She closed her eyes letting the tears escape from them...she traced her arm, where shyam had dug his nail while holding her last night... Last night was like one of those nights in which he would remove his frustrations on her... She smiled a smile full of disgust as her eyes moved all over her body and stopped at her amputated leg... She was a worned out piece... That was what shyam had told her yesterday... But little did he know how worn out... She was alive oly for Arnav and sakshi... Her small kid... Otherwise... She signed as she limped towards the shower... She needed to get ready... She had an interview at 2 today...
The cool water touched her body but it was unable to wash out the bruises... Bruises of betrayal..of heart break... The memories... Irrespective of how much ever she ran, she couldnt run from those memories... Memories of happy times with him, memories of how his warmth... Memories of their love... She clucked at that... Not their love... It was oly her love... He never loved her... Remember... She told herself... She remembered those times perfectly... She had found her being pregnant... And he had left her cos of some emergency at home... She had waited for him not for one or two months... But for a whole 18 months... Sakshi was born... At that time only shyam had helped her out... He had taken her to ooty for the delivery...as she dint want people to talk rubish abt her love child... But alas... He himself turned out to be one of them... Anjali remembered how she had gone to see him and he dint even spare a glance at her... The next day she had sought him after in a hotel only to find him in an intimate position with some girl...breaking her heart... I just played with u he had told her...what did u this a guy like me would fall for a geek like u???? it was just for a bet he had told her and laughed on her mercilessly with his friends... Unable to hear that she had run away from that place oly to be knocked off by a car on the road... She had spent 3 months fighting for her life... And he had not even shown up to ask if she was alive or dead...she would have died if not for her child... Her love child... The child which was born out of true love for him... But for him, it was a bet... Somthing non important...insignificant... Shyam had helped her out at that time... He had told others that sakshi was his child and he was married to Anjali ... The family was shocked but then accepted them later... But after few years, shyam's real face started to emerge... He had started to hurt her by words in the beginning... But for the past 2 years.. He hurt her physically also... But she bore this silently for her family and for the respect of her child... She came out of the washroom and got dressed...still in the memories of the past... Her golden period of her life... Wondering if she would ever get them back...

PRECAP: anjali meets her ex... Payal in AR... Arnav with Kushi
ok tats all for now... Pls guys... This was more of a filler... As the story will move on from this... Will update after 1st may... Or before if possible...
thanku for the patience...
do like and comment...
Edited by ar_art - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update...tx for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohhh...

akash has already fallen for payal...but does payal now him from b4????
nd arnv...feels somethin for khushi..nd komal..d bitch she is..!!!!!:@..she might have a big role to play in separatin arnav from his titli...:@ nd den arnav...!!!! he thinks dat comparing khushi wid arnav might have led to callin titli a wh**e...but wat will u do wen u find d truth...in u're face..:@

nd shashi died...but atleast he left payal by makin her more stronger...:):) i totally feel she is goin to nail it...:)

nd now anji...she must be so heartbroken...frst her ex had been a jerk nd den shym...bastrd!!!!

d precap seems excitin...:)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cindistan


lovely update...tx for the PM.



u're welcme..😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
now dat ws a brilliant update
tnx di
akash met payal;good
arnv with khushi;awsm
anjali n past memories;😭sorry 4 her

precap is so intresting
tnx 👏

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