FF: Arshi in Monstrosity Th I link to Th II in index - Page 36

Originally posted by: yashal_khan

awsum update...

omg bua ji is so creul she tried to destroy poor khuhsiii bcoz of her stupidity😡

aww khuhsi is suffering hope arnav comes to know abt sleeping pills n beocme little bit soft with her

she doestnt desrve all this

do make buajii suffer more than anyone hate her

thanks for pm

continue soon

Originally posted by: soumeesg

omg...soo dint noe a person cn b this poisoned...madhudisgusts me...n i hope she n garima pay d full price of torturin an innocent soul...n rahi baat arnav ki...wen will he get to noe abt khushi?? dat she only is his titli...at least hes concerned abt her...dats a gud sign...n aakash is soo cute...luvd d convo btw him n anjali...anyways, continue soon...😃

Originally posted by: YaSha0512

Wow wow wow wow ...wow thanks for pm
So arnavs remembering his past i def think now khushi is his past when she was with her Mum n dad. If so though does she remember owt?
Precap -- at last he'll now get to know she was druggdef a step in right direction once shes well she can slowly tell him what truth is n if payal starts dating akash they might all meet

Anyways lookin forward to Arnav learning truth about his precious jijaji
Pls keep the pms comin n continue soon

Originally posted by: gangsu

I read dis ff 2day.
u rite d story vry well.
i jst wantd 2 ask 1 qustion, will there b hpy endin????
i feel really bad 4 khushi.😭.
ll arnav cum out 2 knw abt khushi drug addiction?????
ll arnav treat khushi wid luv n care????
u r vry talentd riter, bt its jst totaly hate stry

Originally posted by: ipkknd_gbdfan

I loved this update!!!!

For many reasons...

1. You didn't show any gross Khushi-Snake scenes - they always sent a shiver down my spine and made me puke. thank you yaar.. that was really a relief ... was really scared in the first place to write this as i dint want to offend Arshi lovers...

2. You didn't show a suffering Khushi - at least, not a directly suffering Khushi...Kushi here is in a state of blisfull unawareness... i mean she doesnt know what is going on with her... soon will come to know abt her yaar...

3. Payal is portrayed as a strong person :-D who loves her sister, instead of an imbecile, "respectful" woman in her 20s.if you liked her till now you are gonna love her more... she is gonna be stronger than ever...

4. Arnav's remembering all his titli moments - I can actually relate to that very well...seeing flashbacks at every corner.he was very close to her.. more over his meeting with kushi has woken up those memories...

5. Madhu's reasonings were revealed - wonder if Ammaji heard Madhu's sickness or not...I wonder how Amma will repent for the sins. Amma was very much there and has heard all this... soon more will be on their life and sufferings

6. "Mrs. Arnav Singh Raizada"!!! WOWieee!!!! this is gonna change a lot for both of them...

7. The pre-cap gives me hope - Arnav might actually find out about Khushi's story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Condition is also okay - at least he will know that she was drugged. (Babuji's already sick, so I don't really care much about his role in the story - unless of course you decide to make him a vital part of the story :D) this is gonna be a changin point for payal... she will take decision of what to do next...

Note:

I know after reading this you guys will be angry with me… but pls understand yaar….. I really feel guilty…. I had started my stories with One night's tale and Driving me crazy… but then I got so many ideas that I continued with another 4 more, writing 2 more maaneet stories and 2 more Arshi ones… but now you might be wondering why am I wasting your time by this note…. Well you see…. I'm planning to concentrate on writing the Maaneet ffs.., that is One night's tale and My life's mistakes along with the Arshi 's SS Driving me crazy…. First… I'll be keeping Monstrosity and My little Mistress on hold for the time being…

Guys… pls forgive me… I hade decided this cos.. when I started ONT the story was so different… it was like a tom and jerry fight between Maaneet and Maan will also be searching for his lavender girl unknown that Geet is his lavender girl… and Geet will fall in love with him fighting him …. And so on…. But now look at the story.. in the enthu of writing other stories I have changed the concept so much… I really feel so bad… so I have decided to concentrate and finish if off in the current track itself…. Without making a mockery of it anymore….

Ok now… after completion of every story I'll start off with the next on.. so pls don't worry…. As of now…. Driving me crazy will have another 3 or 4 updates max… then I'll be wrapping it… say in another 5 yaar…..with all this.. I'll be writing Intezaar too… if I take more time to write intezaar I'll forget the story completely and give something else…. So I'll be updating it daily…

As for Monstrosity and my Little mistress… pls guys have patience… I'll try to give you updates for it if I have written the updates for these story.. but don't expect it as I have some personal work also….

Ok now for the pms….

I don't know… as there are not many Maaneet readers for me….and I don't really know who are int in these stories and who are not… I really don't want to disturb everyone… so till Driving me crazy is going on… I'll send everyone pms but after that I think I'll send for those people who comment… as I don't want to disturb everyone…

I hope I have dealt with everything…

If I have forgotten anything you can ask me and I'll defo ans yaar… but pls don't be rude… and be open but not rude…..

Thank you yaar