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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: loveukunwaramar

hey dear loved ur ff plzz upsate soon n ya pm me


Sure...thanks...😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: meghasingh

omg...i never knew there was a fiction on taarey and i hadn't read it...oops...so sorry dear...i just read it now and it's awesome...all the parts were good... characters r quite changed but that's fine...loving it more...


Thanks for ur views as it is very important me to know...yes the characters are changed a little bit but wait and watch for nxt episodes...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey

Yet again an amazing update!! I'm Loving Vicky.. LOL!! Yeh VP ko kaise pata chal jaata hai ki hum khush hai? Hahah!!

bang on update.. Thankyou soo much for loving my comments and pming me.. Keep pming me!!


YA for sure...and yes i need all views that tells me how can i improve and what people need most in story...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: DIV_ARHI_TAAREY

wow yaar superb...all parts were mindblowing...i must say u hv written it so beautifully ...gr8 job 👏...plz pm me if u can...😃


Thanks a lot...ya for sure i will pm u😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ilovemyself14

Amazing update...luved it...!!!


Thanksss😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Part – 5


Swayam at station receives a call – Ha mom...Pahuch gaya hun, nhi ma sirf ek din maximum...maine Hostel room ke liye apply kr diya hai...Kal tk allot bhi ho jayega..😳😳

(Starts moving out of the station)


Scene Shifts –

Taani is sitting in a dark room...her cell rings...

Simmi & Nil calling...But she doesn't attend the call..75 missed calls...😭

But then she saw a call & picks it up...

Taani – DJ...Thanks Krishnaji...apne call kiya...😊😊

Scene Shifts –

Swayam rings the bell...Door opens...

Swayam's Uncle – Arey Swayam beta aao aao...abhi tumhari hi ma se baat ho rhi thi...usne btaya ki tu aane wala hai...

(He enters...3-4 children are running around him...There is a kind of coerce...Sits on a chair)

Swayam's Uncle – aur btao Kaunse college main admission liya hai..???😕

Swayam – St. Louis...Kal hi jaana hai...

Then suddenly a voice comes out from inside...

Voice - Arey bittu ke papa Sukhu (swayam) se chai to puch lo..😆😆😆😆😆

Swayam making faces...😳😳😳

Swayam's uncle – Arey ha kuch to lo beta...

Swayam nhi mamaji bs wo mera room...🥱🥱

Uncle points towards the room & He goes into his room...

Before leaving for Delhi Arjun call everyone at his home...

Bell rings –


Rey, Sharon, Nil & Vicky – Heye...What's up??

Arjun – Actly maine I mean humne socha ki main to delhi nhi jar ha hu...lekin ek gift to de skta hu na actly do ek meri taraf se aur ek mom ki taraf se...😊

Nil – Wht??Gifts...😲😲

Arjun give him a scrapbook.⭐️⭐️⭐️..full of photos of his & the whole gang..The first time he performed in college...and many more...

Nil (becomes emotional) – Thanks dude and hugs him.🤗..

Arjun – Ab thanks bolega pagal...

Rey – Ye dekhkar to mujhe bhi lgta hai shaadi kar leni chahiye...😃😉😉

All laughs..

Arjun's mom – Achaji aur mera gift???...koi value hi nhi hai hna...

Nil – Arey aunti main aap hi ke gift ke liye ruka hun kbse...

Arjun's mom has prepared food for all & all of Nilesh's Choice...

Rey (making fake sad face) – Ye kya Girlfrnd...sb nil ki psnd ka...aur mere liye kuch nhi...???...itnijldi bhul gayi apne boyfrnd ko...😲😲😲

Arjun's mom – Boyfrnd aisa kaise ho skta hai tumhare liye bhi kuch hai...& shows his fav Gajjar ka Halwa...😊😊

After having food all leave for airport in Rey's car along with arjun...

At airport –

Arjun hugs nil – Bye Dude...apna khayal rkhna aur simmi ko meri tarf se sorry kehna for nt coming...

Nil – okay Dude..

Arjun Hugs rey – Dekh tjhe meri kami puri krni hai...

Arjun Hugs Sharon – Sun agar mujhe saari updates nhi mili na...to tjhe teri naye photographic assignment ke liye...khud hi time arrange krna pdega...😉😉

Arjun – Chalo guyz jao nhi to flight miss ho jayegi...Vicky kaha hai, all search for him & sees that he was flirting with a girl...

Sharon goes & drag him from collar Till then from other side Neha comes Helping her father & carrying her luggage...Both Intersect each other but dosn't look at each other and went in opposite direction...

Arjun in Car listening to his fav song – Nil ko to uski Dream Girl mil gayi...Haye..meri dream girl kb milegi...???❤️❤️ ❤️




Scene shifts – A Dark room with only one source of lite...A sound comes...Payal's sound...Kathak's rhythm...and starts doing Kathak..Only her back can be seen she is in white slacks and long top...Making D/f postures of Kathak...Then she turns...It was Taani...Some sounds & voices are roaming in her mind...she Dances and Turn (Voices - U r the best)..Makes a jump (Voice – Mera sapna pura karegi)

Rhythm changes into Drum's Tune...& she starts doing contemporary...Make her leg touch to her side head..(voice – Beta apne aap ko akela mt smjhna)...sits...and turns, turns, turns While sitting only(Voice - pls apne liye nhi...hmare liye...Buddy Proof ke liye)...stands up jumps & Slide & starts crying...She gets up and covers the whole room by Making round & turns...(all voices gathered up)...She is still continuing with her turns...suddenly someone enters...but she dosn't stop at all...Then suddenly she was about to fall but the guy catches him...She starts crying badly...and sees the person...hugs him...& says – I miss him...I miss him the most...😭😭

Precap – Swayam & neha in the college

At simmi's house Prep are started...

Rey, Nil, Sharon & Vicky reaches Delhi...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Res..
unres..
hehe! aapke pm karne se pehle hii maine padh liya!

this was like OH- SO- AWESOME!!

specially Taani's part.. please batao.. aap Taani ko Rey ke saath hi dikhaoge na? Please jaldi reveal karo Taani ke life ka secret.. i can't wait any longer.. Update ASAP!!

n hehe.. Pm me!
Edited by Shivangi_Taarey - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey

Res..

unres..
hehe! aapke pm karne se pehle hii maine padh liya!

this was like OH- SO- AWESOME!!

specially Taani's part.. please batao.. aap Taani ko Rey ke saath hi dikhaoge na? Please jaldi reveal karo Taani ke life ka secret.. i can't wait any longer.. Update ASAP!!

n hehe.. Pm me!


ohkay...and taani - rey saath main honge ya nhi, taani's secrets sb reveal hoga...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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priya, dear.. It was amazing again! What to say.. Taani's part was really breathe taking.. Luvd it! Yeh suspence mujhe kha raha hai!! Plzzz suspence kholo.. Taani n taniya same kaise hain? Please, taani ka past reveal karo yaar!! N the fact that u update so fast makes me fall in love with ur FF more!! UPDATE SOON!! will be waiting for ur pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow dear it was awesum...lovd it from the core of my hrt...thnku sooo much 4 the pm...update soon plz...can't wait...😳

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