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Hey Guyz...I have started writing my first story hope u like it...😊

D3 Reborn...

Actually Reborn isliye kyuki is kahani mein Dil Dosti Dance Ko milega 2nd chance jo har kisiko nhi milta...


CHARACTERS BEFORE U START -

Taani - By Vrinda Dawda

Reyansh Singhania - Kunwar Amar

Arjun Vashishth - Yuvraj Thakur

Swayam Shekhawat - Shantanu Maheshwari

Sharon Singhania(Reys's Sis) - Sneha Kapoor

Vikramjeet Ahluwalia(Vicky) - Prateik Kalsi

Neha Kapoor - Alisha Singh

Nilesh Rai - Macedon Dmello

Simarpreet Kaur(Simmi) ' Samentha

Amar ' Amar Gowda

Rinni ' Priyanka Soni

Taniya Raiprakash ' will known later...


INDEX

Chapter 1, 2 & 3 - Page 1

Chapter 4 - Page 2

Chapter 5 - Page 5

Chapter 6 - Page 10

Chapter 7 - Page 14

Chapter 8 - Page 17

Chapter 9 - Page 21

EXAM NOTE - Page 22

Chapter 10 - Page 25

Chapter 11 - Page 27

Chapter 12 - Page 31

Chapter 13 - Page 35

Chapter 14 - Page 35

EXAM NOTE - Page 39

Chapter 15 - Page 39

Chapter 16 - Page 41

Chapter 17 - Page 43

Chapter 18 - Page 47

Chapter 19 - Page 51

Chapter 20 - Page 55

Chapter 21 - Page 59

Chapter 22 - Page 64

Note + Promo - Page 68

Chapter 23 - Page 72

Chapter 24 - Page 80

Chapter 25 - Page 87

Characters(Main Artist)

Chapter 26 - Page 96

Chapter 27 - Page 103

Characters - Supporting

Chapter 28 - Page 110

Chapter 29 - Page 117


Part - 1

BG Song - Jiya Re

The journey starts from TAANI from Palampur jaisi jagah waisi hai woh full of life, Jaise koi dukh ya problem uski zindagi ko chu hi nhi skti (Taani Sleeping in her bed), aur chunna bhi chaahe to uske samne haar maan jaye(gets up from her sleep and goes to washroom)

Chali re (Splash water on her face)😊😊

Chali re Junnon ko liye(her face is fade in mirror)

Katra katra lamhon ko piye(cleans mirror)

Pinjre se uda dil ka shikra khudi se maine ishq kiya re(and now her face is visible)

(And do Jiya Re signature step)

Jiya Jiya Re Jiya Re
Jiya Jiya Re Jiya Re
Jiya Jiya Re Jiya Re Jiya Oh

Jiya Jiya Re Jiya Re
Jiya Jiya Re Jiya Re
Jiya Jiya Re Jiya Re Jiya Oh

(Gets ready in white salwar kameez just like at Monsoon specialAnd gets on her bicycle...takes a basket from a shop full of chocolates)

Chali Re, Chali Re
Junoon Ko Liye
Pinjre Se Uda Dil Ka Shikra
Khudi Se Maine Ishq Kiyaaa Re
Jiya Jiya Re Jiya Re...

(All the people looking at her...and smiling at her)

(She reaches somewhere where children were learning dance...and one child fall down)πŸ‘πŸ‘

Halke Halke Pardo Mein(She make the girl stand)

Muskurana Achha Lagta Hai
Roshni Jo Deta Ho Toh(She makes her happy)πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Tel Jalana Achha Lagta Hai
Ek Pal Sahi, Umr Bhar Isey Sath Rakhna
Akira
Zindagi Se Phir Ek Waada Maine Kar
Liya Re
Jiya Jiya Re Jiya Re
Jiya Jiya Re Jiya Re
Jiya Jiya Re Jiya Re Jiya Oh Ho (x2)

Chali Re, Chali Re Junoon Ko Liye
Pinjre Se Uda Dil Ka Shikra
Khudi Se Maine Ishq Kiya Re
Jiya Jiya Re Jiya Re
Jiya Jiya Re Jiya Re
Jiya Jiya Re Jiya Re Jiya Oh Ho (x2)

And dances with them...

Jaha ye hai zindagi se judi whi Mumbai ke st Louis college ki zindagi se jude logo ko kaha jar ha hai alvida...yes farewell time for 5th year students...

Scene - A boy was making arrangements at stage...

Boy ' ye stage ki lighting ka kaam kiska tha jao aur usse bolo meet me rite now...Yes He is REYANSH SINGHANIA(wearing white shirt and green pants)...aka rey Cool, handsome college ka CS hone ke saath saath ldkiyo ke dilo ka Prince Charming lekin ye pyaar se ktraate hai kyuki inhe hai apne true love ka intezar lekin lekin ye baat kisi aur ko kya...inke dil ko bhi nhi hai pta...

Rey ' ye kya arrangements hai tumhe pta hai na aaj koi aur bhi perform krne wala hai...jaao jaake thik karo..usse yaad aaya woh hai kaha..???😑😑😑

Scene shifts to a boy sleeping and having dreams He is Arjun Vashishth College ka GS hone ke saath sath dream boy ldkiyo ka bhi aur khhud bhi roz apni dream girl ke spne jo dekhte hai...πŸ₯±

Phone rings..

Rey ' Kaha hai tu?

Arjun ' usko dekh raha hu...

Rey ' kisse???Bhai time dekh...

Arjun - Oh Shit phir late..woh bhi aaj....

(and goes to get ready)

Agar yaha hai koi superlate to waha koi hai time par apne sapne ko sach krne ke liye

Receptionist ' SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT

Swayam ' yes

R ' aapko sir ne andar bulaya hai...

Sir ' hmmm not bad 12th mein 95% aur 1st year mein 92% not bad to phir tum ye college kyu chodna chahteho

Swayam ' Sir, mujhe mere spne ne bulaya hai to jaana to pdega hi na..⭐️.actly mera ST. LOUIS mein admission ho gaya hai...So sir may i!

Scene shifts...

Smone is scolding sm boys...

Girl ' tumhe kya lgta hai SHARON SINGHANIA ke hote hue tum ye party spoil kr paoge no way now get lost ( oh god full of anger)...😑😑😑

Boy 1- Sharon singhania hai to kya hua bomb thodi na hai tomboy khi ki..

Boy2 ' chup reh tujhe pta nhi hai wo kaun hai..

Boy1 ' kaun hai?

Someone make the boy fall...

And girls are going crazy..😳😳😳.

Vikaramjeet Ahluwalia naam desi lekin banda no way.. actly that's why all knows him as Vicky...

Sharon ' Vicky...tu pagal hai...inko main akele handle kr skti hu...

Vicky ' bt babes i was helping u tjhe to pta hai main ldkiyo takleef main nhi dekh skta...

Sharon ' main un ldkiyo main se nhi hu..

Vicky ' acha ha main to bhul gaya tu to ldki hi nhi hai na...

Sharon runs behind him...😲

Scene shifts and a girl is also running in a long skirt and top That's Neha Kapoor rehti foreign mein hai lekin hai pure Indian..

Neha making her designs..and remembering her mother actly her mother is no more..Her maid comes and call her...

Maid ' babyji sahib bula rhe hai

Neha's Dad (Amrit Kapoor) ' Beta tum hmesha se India jana chahtithi na nows the chance hm india jar he hai..kal hi

Neha ' What?aur college(happily)😊

Dad ' maine bt krli woh admission ke liye tayaar hai

Neha ' ohkay dad...

She starts packing...and swayam too with his parents

And packing to koi aur bhi kr rha hai

Taani...

Taani To her Guardian ' DJ chill aapko pta hai na main yaha kuch hi din ke liye aati hu...bt promise agli baar bahot din rahungi nhi to aapko apne saath le jaungi...

Scene shifts to St.louis

Rey to Sharon and Vicky' Usse pta to nhi chala na!!!πŸ˜‰

Sharon ' No...

Vicky ' and the song???

Rey ' here it is...

Vicky ' hey superb yaar...But ye nilesh kaha reh gaya...

Rey calls nilesh - hey rockstar where are u???

Nilesh ' Dude 5 mins...and wht about preparations..

Rey ' done bs uska intezaar hai...

At Night -

Arjun enters the hall where the party is held and people were shouting for music, rey, Vicky...bt no1 was there to perform he goes to stage to control the situation but all goes in vain...then he saw a paper on which a song is written(Actly arjun is a superb singer bt he is nt at all interested in dinging in front of everyone so gang decided that only for once everybody dhud know this talent)

To control the situation he started singing '

And all become quiet

Song ' Sun mere dil ki zubaan kehti hai kya tujhe jaaneja baithi rahi sunti rho seene pe sar rkhke jaaneja umar bhar bs yuhi paas ho bs Tumhi aur kya mujhe chahiye tum jo ho meri aaghosh mein mein rhu na tum rho koi nhi ab hosh mein...and all started clappingπŸ‘ And the gang comes out and give him a hug...😎😎😎

Arjun ' accha to ye sb tum logo ka plan tha...


And then the party begins ' Song(Velle from SOTY)

Rey Nilesh and Vicky comes in centre

Assi Vele, Sab Vele
Aa Vela Ho Ja Re
Assi Vele, Sab Vele
Aa Vela Ho Ja Re
Assi Vele, Sab Vele
Aa Vela Ho Ja Re
Assi Vele, Sab Vele
Aa Vela Ho Ja Re..
Ho..

(Rey comes in front and do a Step..)
Motoron Mein
Dhik-chik Dhik-chik
Gedi-shedi Maare

(Then Vicky and Nilesh comes)
Fursaton Ko Dhuaan-dhuaan Kar Ke Shaam Udaade
(Arjun joins them)

Kar Rahein Badmashiyaan..
Bole Uncle-auntiyaan

Apni Aisi Yariyaan Duniya Pe Mitti Paaye
Saanu Vele Kehnde Saanu Ki
Bas Kehnde Hi Rehnde Saanu Ki
In A Shining Shining Future Sadda Bright Si
Saanu Vele Kehnde Saanu Ki
Bas Kehnde Hi Rehnde Saanu Ki
Oye Mitran De Sang Sab Kuch All Right Si..

(Sharon show some hip hop moves in that tune)

(Rey comes and says to arjun)

O Tadi-tadi Apni Aisi Hai
Ki tuk- tuk Saare Dekhenge
O Badi-badi Aankhein Kholenge
Ji Wah Wah Humko Bolenge

(Vicky surrounded by girls and Nilesh Says)
Yaar Hai Apne Fevour Mein
Ghoome Hai Phir To Tewar Mein..
Changi Sariyaan Apni Yariyaan
Hai Forever Hoye

(And then all competes for drink including sharon)😲
O Bottlon Mein Peg-sheg Dale Kar-bar Banake
Vekhke Hum Totta-shotta Peeke Do Patiyaale(girl passes by them)
Saanu Vele Kehnde Saanu Ki
Bas Kehnde Hi Rehnde Saanu Ki
In A Shining Shining Future Sadda Bright Si..
Saanu Vele Kehnde Saanu Ki
Bas Kehnde Hi Rehnde Saanu Ki
Oye Mitran De Sang Sab Kuch All Right Si..


(Vicky and Nilesh starts locking and popping)

You Think You Fast
But I Know I'm Faster
I'm School Ya

I'm Party Ninja Master
You Think Strike Like You Never Ever Imagine
Drop The Boom From A Million Fathoms

(Rey flips and comes in centre and do some hip hop movements with cap)
Up In The Sky
Down To The Ground
It's A New Shik
It's A New Sound
Grab Somebody Sexy, Spin Em Around
So You Was Last Oh Baby Girl You Found
Show All The Ladies
Some Taking Loving You Care
Lead Them To The Floor
Throw Your Glass Up In The Air
This Is How We Do It,
This Is How Its Done
We The Vella, Second To None


(Then all Cheer them and they all leave party...

But Vicky was flirting with a girl)

O Dil Mein Tofhein Chalti Hain
O Dhadkan Gote Khaati Hain
O Waare Nyare Hote Hain
Jo Humse Ankh Ladd Jaati Hai
(Girls kiss her)

Karti Hai Kissy-wissy Oye❀️❀️❀️❀️
Kehti Hai Miss You-miss You Oye..
Dil Ko Haarti Jaan Nisaarti
Sab Mutiyaare Hoye..
(Nilesh suddenly pulls him & takes Vicky with him)

Ladkiyon Ke Nede- Tede
Gaddi Tezz Chalaake
Karte Hain Hum Hello Bye Bye Po Po Horn Bajake(and goes to drive by jeep)
Saanu Vele Kehnde
Saanu Ki(enjoying, shouting...)
Bas Kehnde Hi Rehnde Saanu Ki
In A Shining Shining Future Sadda Bright Si..
Saanu Vele Kehnde Saanu Ki
Bas Kehnde Hi Rehnde Saanu Ki
Oye Mitran De Sang Sab Kuch All Right Si..
Assi Vele, Sab Vele
Aa Vela Ho Ja Re
Assi Vele, Sab Vele
Aa Vela Ho Ja Re


And suddenly scene shifts to a moving train where a girl is thinking about her past and is very sad...who is the girl?????...😭

Precap - Nilesh says to Rey that he is going to marry...😲

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Posted: 12 years ago
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D3 Reborn - Part 2

Train is moving and a girl is thinking about all her past memories and gets jumbled up together. She becomes sad and a tear drop from her eyes...😭😭

In Morning –

The girl gets down from the train & disappears in that overcrowded station...

Scene Shift – St. Louis College

Boy's Locker room –

Arjun (to Rey) – Thanks Dude...I know ki main gaana nhi chahta tha aur pta nhi aage kbhi gaaun ya nhi but truly yesterday I got the best & precious moment of my life only and only bcoz of u..I know ki ye tera hi plan tha.😳😳😳...

Rey – wo...wo..wowo...Itna senti kyu ho rha hai..??

Vicky – Kya hua ye ro kyu raha hai????...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Rey – Dekha ba to ye bhi keh raha hai...ab to rona band kar..(Group hug)πŸ˜‰

Then a msg comes to all...Its Nilesh's Msg..

Msg – Guyz, Canteen in hour..I have to tell something important...

Vicky – Isse kbse important baat krni pd gai...hua kya hai isse???πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Rey was about say..

Arjun – Vicky, challenge to pata chalega na..!!

Rey – He's right...Chale!!

Then they all leave...

Scene shifts – DD college, Delhi

Girl – Arey ye sab dresses yaha kya kr rhi hai Fashion Shw kal tha aaj nhi in sbko SN creations aur in sbko is address par dekar aao...now go...😑

Boy – But Simmi ye to ek orphanage ka address hai...itni achi collection ek orphanage mein..why?

Simmi – (thinking) Kyuki jiski wajah se ye show possible hua hai meri taraf se uske liye ye bahot hi chota sa gift hai)...(comes into her senses)...That's none of your business...get goin now...


Simmi calls someone...

Scene shifts – Swayam receives a call

Swayam – Ha packing is almost done and what about the tickets.??? Ohk Chal...Bye bye... bye...

Leaving From his room

Swayam's Father – Sab packing ho gai...I hope jis dream ko fulfil krne tum jarha ho wo pura ho...

Swayam - Thanks dad...

Swayam's mom starts crying...😭

Swayam – Mom ab aap kyu ro rhe ho???/

Swayam' Mother – beta mera to ek hi spna hai...

Swayam – no mom no way...mein chalta hu waise bhi late ho gaya hai...train miss h jayegi..Bye dad i'll call u...

Scene Shifts –

Nilesh – Hey Swthrt? Whats up? How was ur show?????

Simmi – Nil you won't believe it was superb..and the sponsors they loved it..⭐️⭐️...& u knw wht that job in U.S...

Nil – No way...

Simmi – Yes...I got that...Now we can easily move to U.S...Aur Tumne waha sbko btaya ?????

Nil – woh simmi..!

Simmi – Nhi btaya...Go & tell them uske baad hi hum baat krenge...Tb tlk ke liye no way...😑

Nil – Acha acha phone mt rkhna just listen to me once pls pls pls..πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Simmi – (in no mood of talking) Wht?

Nil – Howz she?

Simmi – (Smile disappears from her face) U Know her right?... Sbki help krti hai lekin uski help krne wala koi nhi hai hum bhi nhi...Smtimes i feel usne hmare liye khaas kr meri itni help ki hai yaha tak ki if this show is successful its just bcoz of her aur we are so helpless that we can't help her...

Nil – No Simmi we can...

Simmi – What???

Nil – U remember Buddy proof?????

Simmi – How can I forget that...Main abhi jati hun..?

(& abruptly cuts the phone)

Nil – Ye bhi na kitni jaldi excite ho jati hao but uske liye to bnta hai...& a huge smile come on his face...

😊

Scene shifts – DD College

A girl entering the college she is the same girl in train...She enters the college, walk in corridors attends her classes but no one is noticing or even talking to her...but as she was about to leave the class someone called her...

Boy – Oh hello??? Tum Taniya Rai Prakash ho?(Studying name from some paper)

Taniya – Aapko kaise pta??(In a shocking way)😲

Boy – Mujhe nhi pta...(in no interest) This is for u...& handovers a letter...

Scene shifts –

Neha's Father – Handover her an envelope – Here's your Passport and yes most importantly here's your admission form...

She opens it...

Neha – St. Louis...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Scene shifts – In canteen

Sharon – Yaar guyz hua kya hai...Why Nil have called us here???

Vicky – Oh Sharon Siren ki tarah mt bj...hum bhi whi soch rhe hai jot u...So Apna siren bajana band kr..

Rey interrupts – Hey Vicky watch it she's my sis...

Sharon – Bro, I can handle him, waise Bhi Mujhe kisi Allu ki sunne ki zarurat nhi hai...

Vicky – Don't Sharon...

They start arguing...Then Nil enters

Arjun – Guyz Guyz Guyz ...Nil is here usi se puch lete hai...

Nil – Hey...What's up Guyz...

Rey – Hey dude...ye sb Baatein bd mein...pehle suspense to khol...

Nil – wo guyz baat ye hai ki...(taking a lots of time he in fast manner said) I am getting married to simmi...

Gang – What???????????????????????????????

Scene shifts – Simmi saw someone and gets very excited...

Precap – Rey – Tu pagal ho gaya hai...

Swayam – Mumbai...

Neha – Mumbai...

Simmi – Taani...:D

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Unres.. WOW!! Awesome.. Both the chapters are awesome.. Totally diff concept.. Loved it.. Please update soon.. n could u please pm me when u update? I don't wanna miss this!
Edited by Shivangi_Taarey - 12 years ago
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awesome it is..!! seriously.. the concept is totally different... just awesome.. taani n taniya two different people hmm.. really interesting.. pls.. could u pm me when u update..??!! please.. can't miss it!!
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Part – 3

Simmi was waiting for someone in rehearsal hall, someone enters & she screamed TAANI...& hugs herπŸ˜ƒ

Scene shift –

Gang – What??????????😲😲😲

Rey – Tu pagal ho gaya hai??? Abhi toh college bhi khtm nhi hua hai aur tu shaadi ki baat kr rha hai hai...Hua kya hai jaha tk main Simmi ko janta hu uski thinking to itni old nhi hai...So uncle ne force kiya...Ya simmi's dad...😲

(When Rey was saying that Nil takes a chair & sit as he was ready for this situation...)

Rey – Arey tu kya aram se baith gaya...Kuch btayega ki nahi...??? Hello Rockstar main tujhse bt kr rha hu...Sun rahahai...😑

Sharon – Nil, Rey kuch puch raha hai Bta na...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Arjun – Bta na...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Vicky – Yes Dude...Kyu heartbeat increase kr rha hai & shadi and all schi???...

πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Nil( stands uo and cuts Vicky) – Ho gaya guyz tum logo ka...ab main kuch bolu...!!!😑

All become quiet...😳

Scene Shift – Neha & neha's Father sitting in the car...They were leaving for airport..

Neha's Father – Neha its your last day in London. I hope aaj tumhari mom yaha hoti ...

Neha has tears in her eyes but says with a smile – Papa u know what u made neha's dream come true...so no more past memories...(And Hopes all will go well in MUMBAI..)😊😭😊

Scene shifts –

Nil – Guyz, remember the rap contest on Radio City...

All move their head in yes...😳

Nil – Actly guyz i got selected...

(They were about scream but nil interrupts)

Nil – Guyz...Guyz... Guyz...pehle meri puri baat sunlo...That option is in U.S. & main chahta hu ki simmi bhi mere saath chale...I know guyz tum soch rhe ho but shadi kyu...Kyuki without marriage hume koi sath nhi jaane dega aur ek baat aur main apni life mein sikh chukka hu "That whom u love the most never leave them alone" so i proposed her and she said yes...πŸ˜•

All are quiet, Nil is waiting for their rxn...

Gang stand up with sad faces & but burst into laughter & give him a hug...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Rey – Are u crazy?? Tunne hume pehle kyu nhi btaya...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Vicky – Seriously yaar, tu select ho gaya aur no party...πŸ˜•

All look at him with a confused expression..

Vicky – Wht guyz???

Sharon – Ignore him...all this true na aur simmi uska kya rxn hai!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Arjun – Congrats Dude...

Nil – Seriously guyz..tum sab Happy to ho na...???

Rey – Nhi Kaise khush ho skte hai tu hme chod kr U.S. jo jar ha hai...πŸ˜”

All becomes emotional & Again a group hug...

Scene shift – Simmi is hugging Taani till now & is very ahppy and excited...

Simmi – Taani..taani...taani u just dnt know...wht hpnd..??πŸ˜ƒ

Taani – I know u got the job...πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰

Simmi – r u serous...how do u knw?? Actly amin bhi kya puch rhi hu tumse kuch chupa paana is just impossible...Tumhe kahi na kahi se khabar lg hi Jaati hai...🀣

Taani – Wo to hai...and I am very very very happy for you and him..But letter bhejne ki kya zarurat thi ( Flashback – Boy handovering the letter) u know its not safe...u cud text me right!!😲

Simmi – Wo actly I tried but u were out of reach i mean ur cell...

Taani checks her phone...

Taani – Oh My mistake...Acha ye sb chhod mjhe ye bta tjhe pta hai shaadi ki date 3rd jan hai ya...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Simmi – Wht the hell, meri shaadi ki date mjhse pehle tjhe pta hai...😳

& both burst in laughterπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Scene shifts –

Rey – Acha ye shadi kb hai??

Nil – woh Ammm...A msg Comes...Le tune kaha & here's ur answer 3rd Jan..

Arjun – wht??Itni jldi...??

Nil – Ha yar U.S. bhi to jaana hai na & guyz u all have to come...

Vicky – Ofcourse yaar teri Barbadi i mean shaadi ho aur hum na aye aisa kaise ho skta hai...waise venue kya hai iss shadi ka...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Nil – Actly shadi delhi mein hai...

Bg tune of velle starts...

Rey change looks with Arun, Vicky & Sharon..

Gang – Delhi we are coming...& lift Nil...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Scene shifts –

At station

Coolie – Dijiye saahab mein utha leta hun...

Swayam – Nhi nhi main utha lunga...waise bhi ye safar ab sirf mera hai sirf mera...:)...I am Coming Mumbai...⭐️⭐️

Scene Shifts –

Simmi & taani sitting in Rehearsal Hall Having chocolates...

Taani – So Mumbai se kb aarha hai Nil...???

Simmi – Soon, actly abhi tk usne apne college mates se bt nji ki hai...& becomes upset...πŸ˜”

Taani – Simmi, don;t worry...wo rockstar...he'll rock it...⭐️⭐️

Simmi becomes happy & then something clicked in her mind...

Simmi – Taani...u remember???

Taani looks at her with a questioned face...πŸ˜•.

Simmi – "Buddy proof"...

Flashback – Nil, Simmi, Taani, amar & Rinni sitting on terrace..

Rinni – Guyz kya humari frndship long last karegi??

All becomes sad...πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”

Taani - Guyz...isme sad hone ki kya baat hai...Actly i have a solution to this problem...Buddy proof..πŸ˜ƒ

All Keep their hands on one another.

Taani – hum sb promise krte hai ki kitne bhi saal kyu na ho jaye jb bhi humari life main sbse sad ya happy moment aayega hum sb ek dusre se promise lenge which we can't break aur yehi humara buddy proof hoga...πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š

In present –

Simmi (with hesitation) – Taani we both Nil & me hum chahte hai that u have to attend our marriage as Taani not as Taniya Raiprakash...😲

All things get rewind...

Taani Hugging Simmi

She gets the letter from the boy...

She was not noticed by any one in college..

She was in the train & crying & her eyes are full of tears...:'(

Precap – Simmi – Pls Taani pls...Taani leaves...

Arjun, Nil, Rey, Sharon, Vicky starts packing...

Swayam in Mumbai...

Arjun – said something...

All – What????😲😲😲

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Posted: 12 years ago
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STORY ME TWIST!!!! Awesome.. Taani hi Taaniya raiprakash hai.. hmm.. God.. kitna interesting hone wala hai.. please update soon n thanks for the pm.. pm me when u update!
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Thats interesting... Taani is Taniya Raiprakash!! This is confusing... Please update soon... M loving this FF.. Its damn interesting... N jaise aap likte ho aaisa lagta hai ki mere saamne koi serial chal raha hai... Love tge way u write... UPDATE SOON!!! N PM ME!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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schi yaar mujhe nhi pta tha tu itna acha likhti hai ab to tujhe mujhe ye secret btana hi hoga...
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Thanks a lot guyz mujhe bahot acha lagha that u loved it so i am posting next part in nxt post...😊
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Part – 4

A tear drop from Taani's eyes like all her wounds are just new...😭😭😭

Simmi – Taani, No pls don't cry..Hum yeh bilkul nhi chahte kit um purani baton ko yaad kro...basbas hum chahte hai kit um unsb baton ko bhul kr apniidentity ko sbke samne lao jot um ho..jo tumme hai wo sbko pta chale...unhe ek anjaan Taniya Raiprakash nhi blki ek diva...Hmari taani dikhe...

Taani (crying) – Tum sb jante hona phir bhi...😲😲😲

(She takes her bag and is going to leave but simmi holds her hand..)

Simmi – Taani apne liye na sahi for us...for our promise...for our buddy proof...😡

But taani doesn't listen her & started going...πŸ˜’

Simmi – Pls taani...Pls Taani...(Taani leaves) Maine usse hurt kr diya..main itni selfish kaise ho skti hu...

In night –

Nil – So, what's her decision...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Simmi – Same, humne kuch zyada hi maang liya hai usse...

Nil – I hope she's ohk...waise i am reaching day after 2mrw main baat krta hu..lekin mujhe pta hai usse iss baat pr shayad whi mna skta hai...

Scene shifts –

Rey on phone held at speaker– Don't u think..nil's desicion is wrong...I mean marriage itni jldi aur its just matter of 1 year...!!!πŸ˜•

Arjun – Dude ye uska decision hai..aur hume isse support krna hi hoga...😊😊😊

(Sharon enters)

Sharon – Actly arjun u r right aur waise bhi usne kaha na that She don't wanna loose her...😳

Vicky – aur waise bhi humme delhi ghumne ko mil raha hai..So why not???πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Arjun – Vicky tu bhi na...Chalo Guyz mom bula rhi hai...catch u later..& yes start packing...apne yaar ki shaadi hai..

They all laugh and all starts packing...

Rey & Sharon do their packing & help each other...

Arjun's Mom helps Arjun in his packing...

Vicky throwing his clothes on servants to pack his clothes...

Scene Shifts –

Train moving...

Swayam – Dreams puri hone ki shurwat to ab hui hai...I hope maine jis reason se maine St. Louis Join kiya hai Woh mujhe pura ho jaye...⭐️

Scene shifts...

Taani – Sitting on her bed..switching light on & off...and crying of thinking something...Nil & simmi called bt she dosn't receive it...😭

In morning –

All comes to college & were planning about the marriage...

Just then peon comes..

Peon – GS ko VP sir ne bulaya hai...

Vicky – ye VP sir ko pta kaise chal jaata hai ki hum kb khush hai...😑😑😑

Arjun – Vicky...Just chill farewell ke bare mein baat krni hogi..main abhi aata hu..

In VP's Cabin –

VP – Arjun a u know new session is starting & Short time vaccations are also coming. So naye recruits ko koi problem na ho so as a GS u have to stay back in college...

Arjun – But Sir...😲😲😲

VP – Do I have to say its an order..????

Arjun – No sir...

VP – New students kal se hi aana start ho jayenge...Here are the details...

In canteen – All were discussing and Arjun enters with a sad face...

Arjun – Guyz I just can't come...!

Gang – What???😲

Arjun – Actly wo naya session start ho raha hai...so new students ko koi problem na ho...I have to stay back...

Vicky – Ye naye students ki to...

Nil (becomes sad) – Yaar agar tu nhi aayega to...

Arjun – Nil Don't be sad..arey teri shaadi hai aisa face leke jayega to Simmi mana kr degi...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Aur Sharon ko bhi isse acha mauka nhi milega apni photography skills show krne ka...pal pal ki khabar milti rhegi mujhe...

Rey – Phir bhi Dude, tere bina jaana is just like apni soul ke bina jaana...πŸ˜”πŸ˜”
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Arjun – Come on Rey atleast u understand...Come on nil ki shaadi hai...

All agrees...but they were not at all happy & hugs Him...

Vicky & Sharon Thinking in naye students ko to hum aake dekhenge...😈
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& At Station Swayam reached Mumbai & standing With a huge Smile...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Precap – All leave for delhi except Arjun...Neha reaches Mumbai...

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