The confession - my version - Page 2

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Nice concept:)
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Taani and Rey calling moment they spend together.
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Awww...so finally rey accepted dat he love her..
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thank u thank u thank u so much for the appreciation...😊 For a first time writer like me, it was very very very encouraging and I am very thankful indeed... The second chapter would be divided in 2 parts.. part (a) will be solely concentrating on Rey and Swayam and part (b) on taareyam... part (a) is written below, part (b) will be there shortly. As promised, this is totally different from the current d3 track...

So without further ado presenting...

Chapter 2: During BB Practice (1 day before the match) (Part a)😊😊

Rey and his team are practicing in the basket ball court in the college. They were practicing under the strong and able leadership of Swayam.🥳 Rey was still finding it hard to believe that after what all Swayam went through, he agreed to coach them.😊😊 They worked hard, going through all the tips and techniques Swayam taught them.

After a long and hard session, they all sat down to take a break.🤢 While sipping water, Rey recalled the conversation he had with Swayam a week ago...

The conversation (At Taayam's house):

Swayam and Rey were chatting about the day's events. Swayam was concerned for Rey and the way the BB practice sessions were being held. He wanted to help them, so he enquired in a casual manner...

Swayam (In a casual tone): So, howz practice going on??

Rey's heart sank.😔 He knew very well that there was utter chaos within the team. He was somewhat better than the rest of the team but that too only by a fraction. He feared that if the opponent team won, they will not only lose the match but would also lose dance forever.😭😭 However, he put on a fake smile and answered...😳

Rey: Awesome dude!! Sab Accha chal raha hai... kaafi progress kiya hai. Dikhaadenge unko ki hum bhi kuch kam nahi hai...😃😃

Swayam (putting on an investigative look): Really??🤔

Rey: Umm... Ya really... We will definitely win... (He stood up and went away from him).

Swayam just shook his head... he knew that Rey did not want to bring the topic of BB up as that he would get very upset..😭😭

Swayam (thinking): Tum itne acche kyon ho Rey?? I think it's high time I eased the pain and pressure on you...😭

He goes towards Rey and puts his hand on his shoulder. Rey turns around, looking scared but somehow manages to plaster a smile on his face.😃😲

Swayam : Tu kisse jhuth bol raha hai... mujhse ya apne aap se??? Tujhe kya lagta hai maine kyon pucha about practice? 😡😡That's bcoz I know ki tum log thik tarah se khel nahi paarahe ho and ki tum haarne ke kagaar par ho...😔😭

Rey (In a defeated tone): Yes, I am screwed and the whole team is also screwed.😭😭 Maine bahut try kiya par nahi ho paaraha hai. Vicky already haar maan chukka hai, upar se your sister is of no help. Mera bhi hausla dhire dhire tut raha hai, lekin kisi tarah se apne aap ko sambhal raha hun.😭😭 Mujhse se sab expect kar rahe hai ki main St.Louis ko BB match mein jitwaunga. Sab ke paas expectations hai ki main kuch miracle karunga... (Sighs😔)

Par sab bhool jaate hai ki main bhi unhi ke tarah ek insaan hi hun.😔😔 Main khud chahta hun ki AVP ke chehre se vo victory smile hamesha ke liye mitaadun, aur dance ko college mein vaapis laakar, vo masti wala environment vaapis laaun... Par main kya karun, mere samajh mein nahi aa raha hai ki sab vaapis normal kaise aur kab hoga...😭😭

Saying this, he falls down on his knees and holds his head in his hands. Swayam becomes very upset on seeing his friend like this.😭😭 He goes upto him, helps him get up and gently guides him to the sofa. He gives him a glass of water and consoles him...

Swayam: Listen, I know ki maine tum logon ki help karne se mana kar diya bcoz of my problem.😔😔 Par phir maine ye socha ki agar ek dost madad nahi karega to kaun karega?...😉😉

Rey looks at Swayam. He was confused.😕😕

Rey: Umm... dost madad nahi karega matlab???😕😕

Swayam (With a determined yet reassuring smile on his face): Main tum logon ki help karunga... Main tum logon ko train karunga. 😳😳Isse better aur koi tarika nahi hai apne fear of competition ko face karne ka, aur apne dad ko ye prove karne ka ki main bhi ek all-rounder hun.👍🏼

So... Am I in??? (He brought his hand forward, looking at Rey questioningly❓)

Rey looked at his hand and then looked at Swayam

Rey (smiling): Neki aur puch puch...😉😆

Swayam and Rey laughed a little, give a hi-5 to each other and also gave a brotherly hug...

Reyam (with a determined look on their faces): Wellims (I could not get the name of the college right... SORRY😳😳), we are ready... Show us what you have got😳😳... and also Miss AVP; your days of glory are finished... Now just wait and watch...👎🏼👎🏼


So howz it guys... 😊😊Hope it is not that boring...😊 plz do leave ur precious comments...😊😊😊

Edited by dvishwa - 12 years ago

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