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Posted: 12 years ago
Honestly, I was not too sure about this story... I have read some fairytale, fiction stories that were a fail.. however, I loved this story... Yes, it's a fiction in its own, but it has Arhi's essence in it...

The Khushi that we've known is always devoted in living for other, the compassionate one, and the most beautiful one... The Arnav we've seen is always the hot headed, the epitome of beauty, and in our every dream.. The fairytale story wasn't far from IPKKND, was it? ;)

I am honestly hoping there's a good ending to this.. fairytale is always supposed to be bring the prince and princess together, dammit! The evil woman should die!!! I am waiting for the update where Arnav rescues Khushi from the evil clutches, and makes her his forever... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh Saiyyu! I've already told you that this is the best fairy tale I've ever read, right?? I swear I love this one to bits!! 😃 I've never read a fairy tale so excitedly. Growing up with 3 brothers, I was never really a fairy tale person (I actually found them stupid 🤣 ) but you've totally captured my attention with this one 🤗 Hats off her that!

I love you for coming up with such an awesome story! Every little thing is sooo fairy tale-ish! 😛 like Anjali's curse, Getting turned into a stone figure and standing near the window, I can sooo imagine that! And Kay's poisonous apple and Khushi running to sacrifice herself just when the clock struck twelve... Pure genius I tell you! 😳

Ohhh! So what's gonna happen now? Can't wait to read more! You do know that fairy tales always have happily ever after, don't you? So bring my Khushi back 🤣

P.S. Can't wait to read the next part! I'm actually wishing it to be 20 pages long 😃

P.S.S. Thanks for the PM!

P.S.S.S You rock girl! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved this chapter.

Brilliant writing!!

I love how you have penned down their emotions- all that's unsaid. The fear of what might happen, the unbridled concern, anxiety. The love.

I love Lavanya's and Akash's character here.

The whole idea of Arhi being a fairytale is awesome.

Can't wait to find out what is gonna happen next.
How will Anjali's curse be lifted.
How will Arnav save Khushi.
Akash and Lavanya's story..

Waiting!!

Please please update soon.
Can't believe this story is ending..

Thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG dat was a brilliant update!
So well written
Plzzz giv this fairy tale a HAAPPPIIIEEE ENDING!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Did we not recieve a pm for this update? Either that or I've lost it!


This update was riding high on emotions from guilt to love to pain. Each character today was going through one thing or the other, unaware of each other as well.(at first at least)


Sacrifice. Is the one word I would chose to say that this update revolved around. At every turn there was sacrifice. From La, From Arnav, From Khushi. Gosh!


The end was just torture. I want to know what happens. I know Khushi will live, that Anjali will be ok, that Arnav and Khushi will have their happily ever after, but not knowing is still killing me.


And as for the love, I love this piece of writing by you more and anything else by you as well <3 took me back to my childhood. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I absolutely have no words to describe how beautiful this update was. Love, so selfless, so divine was overflowing throughout this chapter..whether it was Arnav who didn't want Khushi to sacrifice, or an ever ready Khushi to give her all for the sake of Arnav, or the lovely Lavanya overlooking her own love for Arnav to help Khushi or an ever perseverant Akash to win Lavanya's heart..it was heart warming!!!
I thoroughly enjoyed it.

I don't know what will happen to Khushi ( and I know Arnav will not live if something happens to her) but I'm guessing it will be a happy ending considering you're a happy soul and you like happy stories. But either way..one thing's for sure..love will win and Arnav-Khushi will be together and that's all that matters to me :)

Thank you for the PM...this is by far, my most favorite chapter in this story :)

P.S: I love that magic bubble cast by Lavanya...tiny things like these make this fairy tale all the more enjoyable :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow !1 What a whirlwind story !! Amazing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Saiya.. I really dont have words to appreciate this baby of yours...

how wonderfully woven story... superb use of emotions..

loved every character in this story...

awesome update as usual...

But oh no... what has she done... i hope everything becomes fine in the end...

so eagerly awaiting next update...

thanks for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
By the end I was crying. That's all I could say. I have no words to describe today's update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hayye! So much love. There is care and affection and selflessness. Mistakes are made but while trying to help others. There's good...there's evil. The good might seem weak momentarily but ultimately, it prevails; doesn't it? Khushi and Anjali are both going to be alright, aren't they? Fairy tales wonderful. Thank you for giving me one to read after all these years! :-D

This was such a well-written chapter. All the emotions so beautifully penned down. Can't wait to read further. I'm going to be so sad once this story ends.

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